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    Shane Awakes Chapter 4


    Alice was eavesdropping through the Planets front window. Shane and Carmen were at their usual table. The fact that Shane had been having coffee with the same girl almost every day for two weeks still shocked Alice to no end. Every morning, Alice grabbed her coffee, said a quick hello, and left them to their endless flirting. She really didnt want her presence to break whatever magical spell Carmen had over Shane. But enough was enough, her willpower was spent, she needed the scoop. And even more than that she needed her morning dose of Yoda. Especially this morning.

    Shane couldnt help but be pleased with herself, Carmens reaction to her idea for their first date was even better than shed hoped.

    Carmen practically bounced in her seat, “A comedy club. You know Ive never been to a comedy club. Yeah, that sounds great.”

    Relieved, Shane sat back in her chair. She had been racking her brain for where to take Carmen on Sunday. Carmen spent all her working hours in clubs, so dancing was out. And dinner and a movie had just seemed so clich. Besides a comedy club afforded lots of opportunities to hear Shanes new favorite sound; Carmens laugh. Which was invariably accompanied by the smile she was now wearing. Shane got caught up in the sparkle of her eyes and was just leaning in to steal a quick kiss when Alice plopped her stuff on the table and sat across from them.

    “Morning lovebirds, mind if I join you?” Alice looked at Shane, readying herself for the scowl she was sure to receive. But it never came,

    Shane just blushed and rolled her eyes. I didnt even know Shane could blush, this is more serious than I thought.

    Shane quickly changed the subject, “Morning Alice, so whats the up? Did you get the job or what?”

    Alice put on her radio voice, “Welcome back everyone, Im your host, Alice Piezecki, and your listening to the Chart on 91.3 KCRW.”

    Shane slapped the table, “Thats fantastic Al, congratulations!”

    Alice grinned, “Yeah its crazy right? So Fridays at 3, you have to promise to listen, both of you.”

    Carmen grinned, “Thats so exciting Alice, congratulations.”

    Alice smiled and took a sip of her latte.

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    Comments

    1. first: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay update! hehe..well I just want to say that I am a fan of your fic, I truly am. Your Shane and Carmen are young, happy and refreshing but most of all realistic, and I enjoy reading it and like that you took it all the way back to s2. The good old times :)… can’t wait 2 c what happens next, things seem to get a little hot! lol…oh and this line: It’s such a perfect ass though, isn’t it?”…. AMEN

    2. Hey!!! I was waiting for an update from you!. I absolutely adore this story. And this chapter definitely did not dissapoint. You’re leaving us hangin though, so I hope you come back soon. Great job!

    3. Super update! Love these two together. Loved how Carmen handled Veronica. I wish Alice would think before she speaks (although its one of the things I love about her) but this line -“Yeah, but it’s not like I’m dating you, who’s fucked half of LA.” – had me cringe for Shane & Carmen. Love your story. Post soon.

    4. Great update TT. Carmen offers such a good counterpoint to Shane and gives her balance that no-one else seems capable of. Carmen and Shane are both strong personalities who know how to stand up for themselves… but its so good to see Carmen giving Shane the support she clearly needs. And great to see Shane appreciating that support from Carmen. They are taking their time, getting to know each other and not jumping too rapidly into a physical relationship…even though they clearly want each other. Please write more soon. Thanks.

    5. Great update TT. Carmen offers such a good counterpoint to Shane and gives her balance that no-one else seems capable of. Carmen and Shane are both strong personalities who know how to stand up for themselves… but its so good to see Carmen giving Shane the support she clearly needs. And great to see Shane appreciating that support from Carmen. They are taking their time, getting to know each other and not jumping too rapidly into a physical relationship…even though they clearly want each other. Please write more soon. Thanks.

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