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Shane Awakes Chapter 4
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Alice smiled at Shanes discomfort, “Dont be an idiot Shane, you just need to relax. Trust the moment, go with the flow.”
Shane smiled and buried her hands in her already messy hair, “Im trying Al, I really am.”
Alice smiled, “Good. So, is she like your girlfriend now?”
Shanes eyes grew wide, “Fuck no, God Alice its one date.”
Alice put her hands up defensively, “O.K., Chill out. But shes not just a one night fuck either, right? So what? What is she?”
Shane shrugged, “Shes just, I dont know. Fuck Alice, I dont know where this is going, I just like her. Thats all. I just, I really like her.”
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Carmen looked around her bedroom, the sight of nearly all her belongings packed up in boxes made her just a little sad, shed miss this room.
Tony grabbed the packing tape from her hand, “Quit daydreaming or well never finish, you still have a date to get ready for remember?”
Carmen winked, “Trust me, I remember.”
Jason looked back and forth between the two, they looked like a couple of excited teenagers, “I still cant believe youre going out with Shane McCutcheon. Im telling you, youre in for nothing but heartbreak girl.”
Carmens smile faded, “God I know. What the fuck am I thinking? I mean, she says she doesnt date, then she asks me on a date, but what the hell does that mean? How do I know what the hell she wants?
Tony put his arm around her, “You could ask her.”
Jason just rolled his eyes, “Yeah, and Im sure you can believe whatever she says.”
Tony slapped Jason lightly on the arm, “Dont listen to him. Believe me, Ive known Shane for years, and if there is one thing I know about her, its that she never lies. She doesnt say much, but if you ask her point blank, shell be honest with you.”
Carmen looked at Jason, he looked skeptical, but she could feel that Tony was right, Shane could put up a wall faster then anyone shed ever met, but she had always been honest with her.
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Shane sipped her champagne and looked over at the impressive collection of autographed guitars and sports memorabilia, all of which she could never afford in a million years. She shrugged, they were really just here to show their support to Tina. The auction seemed to be going well, LA never seemed to lack rich people who enjoyed spending their money for a worthy cause, especially if they could do it in the public eye. Tina was busy telling Carmen and Jenny all about the work they did at the center. It was good to see her so excited about how much they could do with the money they were making tonight.
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first: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay update! hehe..well I just want to say that I am a fan of your fic, I truly am. Your Shane and Carmen are young, happy and refreshing but most of all realistic, and I enjoy reading it and like that you took it all the way back to s2. The good old times :)… can’t wait 2 c what happens next, things seem to get a little hot! lol…oh and this line: It’s such a perfect ass though, isn’t it?”…. AMEN
teatime, damnit, that was one hell of a cliffhanger, now imwondering what carmen will do now, tease the shit out of shane or…just go for it. ;)
Hey!!! I was waiting for an update from you!. I absolutely adore this story. And this chapter definitely did not dissapoint. You’re leaving us hangin though, so I hope you come back soon. Great job!
Super update! Love these two together. Loved how Carmen handled Veronica. I wish Alice would think before she speaks (although its one of the things I love about her) but this line -“Yeah, but it’s not like I’m dating you, who’s fucked half of LA.” – had me cringe for Shane & Carmen. Love your story. Post soon.
Carman will be good for shane, she want take any shit off of her. thanks
Great update TT. Carmen offers such a good counterpoint to Shane and gives her balance that no-one else seems capable of. Carmen and Shane are both strong personalities who know how to stand up for themselves… but its so good to see Carmen giving Shane the support she clearly needs. And great to see Shane appreciating that support from Carmen. They are taking their time, getting to know each other and not jumping too rapidly into a physical relationship…even though they clearly want each other. Please write more soon. Thanks.
Great update TT. Carmen offers such a good counterpoint to Shane and gives her balance that no-one else seems capable of. Carmen and Shane are both strong personalities who know how to stand up for themselves… but its so good to see Carmen giving Shane the support she clearly needs. And great to see Shane appreciating that support from Carmen. They are taking their time, getting to know each other and not jumping too rapidly into a physical relationship…even though they clearly want each other. Please write more soon. Thanks.
I totally like the way how Carmen handeled the situation with veronica bloom. That was really pretty sexy!Please go on soon, I´ll keep waiting!