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Shane Awakes Chapter 4
Alice rolled her eyes and shared a smile with Carmen as Shane went on. “So, later tonight or tomorrow, when Danas asleep or just sitting across from you, and you start obsessing about all this again. What are you going to do?”
Alice shrugged, “Smack myself in the forehead?”
Shane laughed, “Yeah, but after that youre gonna call me so I can tell you to stop being such an idiot.”
Alice leaned over and wrapped her arms around Shane, “Yep, thats what Im going to do. Thank you for telling me when Im being an idiot Shane.”
Shane held her tight, “Anytime.”
Alice sat back and quickly wiped a tear from her eyes, “So, please tell me youre coming on Sunday. Cause Im going to be bored out of my mind if youre not there.”
Shane threw a confused look towards Carmen then back at Alice, “Where? Whats going on Sunday?”
Alice rolled her eyes, “That silent auction fundraiser thing for that place Tina volunteers at. Dont even pretend like you forgot McCutcheon.”
Shane couldnt believe herself, where the hell was her mind lately? “Fuck thats this weekend, what time is it?” She looked worriedly over at Carmen. She really didnt want to break their date.
Alice shrugged, “I dont know like six I think.”
Shane shot a hopeful look towards Carmen, “Thats not that bad. Would you mind? We could just stay for a little while, then catch the later show at Carolines? Oh, and then you could meet Tina and Jenny.”
Carmen smiled warmly, Shane wanting her to meet her friends seemed like a good sign, “Sounds good.” She looked at her watch, “Shit, I have to go. I have to meet my landlord and get the keys to my new apartment. “Yay!” She did a little victory dance, then stood above Shane and leaned down to capture her lips in a quick, deep kiss. “Mmm, Ill call you later. And Ill see you Sunday Alice.”
Shanes eyes followed Carmens retreating form until she was completely out of sight, and then turned to see Alice smirking at her. “What?”
Alice continued to smile smugly, “Wow. You two must be getting serious, shes already going to meet the family.”
Shane smile vanished. Alice was right, it was supposed to be their first date, the past two weeks notwithstanding. And here she was planning to introduce Carmen to all of the most important people in her life.
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first: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay update! hehe..well I just want to say that I am a fan of your fic, I truly am. Your Shane and Carmen are young, happy and refreshing but most of all realistic, and I enjoy reading it and like that you took it all the way back to s2. The good old times :)… can’t wait 2 c what happens next, things seem to get a little hot! lol…oh and this line: It’s such a perfect ass though, isn’t it?”…. AMEN
teatime, damnit, that was one hell of a cliffhanger, now imwondering what carmen will do now, tease the shit out of shane or…just go for it. ;)
Hey!!! I was waiting for an update from you!. I absolutely adore this story. And this chapter definitely did not dissapoint. You’re leaving us hangin though, so I hope you come back soon. Great job!
Super update! Love these two together. Loved how Carmen handled Veronica. I wish Alice would think before she speaks (although its one of the things I love about her) but this line -“Yeah, but it’s not like I’m dating you, who’s fucked half of LA.” – had me cringe for Shane & Carmen. Love your story. Post soon.
Carman will be good for shane, she want take any shit off of her. thanks
Great update TT. Carmen offers such a good counterpoint to Shane and gives her balance that no-one else seems capable of. Carmen and Shane are both strong personalities who know how to stand up for themselves… but its so good to see Carmen giving Shane the support she clearly needs. And great to see Shane appreciating that support from Carmen. They are taking their time, getting to know each other and not jumping too rapidly into a physical relationship…even though they clearly want each other. Please write more soon. Thanks.
Great update TT. Carmen offers such a good counterpoint to Shane and gives her balance that no-one else seems capable of. Carmen and Shane are both strong personalities who know how to stand up for themselves… but its so good to see Carmen giving Shane the support she clearly needs. And great to see Shane appreciating that support from Carmen. They are taking their time, getting to know each other and not jumping too rapidly into a physical relationship…even though they clearly want each other. Please write more soon. Thanks.
I totally like the way how Carmen handeled the situation with veronica bloom. That was really pretty sexy!Please go on soon, I´ll keep waiting!