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More Than a Feeling
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The next day, Tina hopped into Bettes car. Good morning. She practically sang, making Bette smile.
Whats got you in such a chipper mood? Bette asked, surprised.
I have good newswell, I had good news yesterday, but I didnt think it would do you any good, so I decided to save it for today. Tina smiled, touching Bettes upper arm.
What is it? Bettes heart beat faster with excitement.
My mother is working a double shift at the hospitalagain. And Sammy got a job, so that means I have several hours to myselfalone Tina exaggerated the last few words, putting long pauses in between them in hopes of getting Bette to understand. all alonein my housefor hours.
It took Bette a minute to process everything, but when she did, the largest, brightest smile swept across her face. Tinas heart stopped and her breath escaped her as she saw Bettes face brighten. Did she always have such a beautiful smile?
You mean you have the house all to yourself?
Tina nodded.
And why didnt you tell me yesterday?
Because you have tutoring with Shane and you need to focus, right? Tina reasoned
True. Bette agreed.
Then, Tina asked, Would you like to come overafter school?
Do you even have to ask? Bette responded, elated. Todays the day!
Good. Tina barely whispered, biting her lip.
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The rest of the day dragged on for Bette and Tina, as they were both looking forward to spending time at Tinas alone. When school finally ended, Bette and Tina practically ran to Bettes car, and Bette sped to the Kennard residence, but not too quickly; she didnt want to have to deal with police.
When they arrived at Tinas house, they were both incredibly nervous. Bette set the car in park and looked at Tina, offering her an uneasy smile. What will she think when we kiss? Will she flip out and change her mind? What if she does change her mind? Where would that leave me?
As they exited the car, Tinas own mind was running a mile a minute. This is it. I wonder what her lips feel likeI wonder what they taste likewill they be soft? Im so nervous, but Im not. I dont knowbut I have a feeling it wont be like anything Ive ever experienced before.
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SWEET!!!!!!! the question lies how much making out is gonna happen b4 someone comes home and will they get caught?? for some reason Jagger seems to be related to Alice….LOL!!!!!
Great chapter. love this story. My print was okay too. Thanks for the post.
Great chapter. Two thumbs up.
wow that was so nice and sweet manda, another great installment. Loving it so keep the chapters coming.
*swoons* i feel so happy reading this chapter. font’s okay in mine too. thanks so much for posting this.
i’m glad alice didn’t ruin the moment completely…and it makes me happy that tina loved the kiss…thanks
beautiful and perfect.. and you got alice just right. gotta love that girl!!.x.x.
This was a very sweet and lovely chapter! you almost drive me mad with the second call from Alice! continue please this story is so good!
That was so sweet, and great. Thank you
I have been waiting for what seems like forever for a new chapter. But I know what it’s like to be busy and not seem to have any time for fun. Anyway, I really wasn’t expecting the first kiss in this chapter. It’s about damn time! lol I’m surprised Bette didn’t answer Alice’s kiss question with: “I might have an answer if you’d STOP CALLING ME!”
Jagger should really learn to walk himself. I really didn’t think they would get there. But they did. Sweet.
Sweet kiss and so cute!
all that was missing was dana calling… loved thier first kiss… waiting for more…please continue
The dog needed to go. Alice will never give up.she needs a life. Lets hope Mom doesn’t come home. Plux Tim lives next door. They did get the first kiss in thanks
Awww.. so sweet and cute! Keep it coming, no drama please.. just loving!
I’ve just caught up with the story and i’ loving it. It’s all soo sweet. Post soon, please.
This is so sweet and cute and any other word that fits these two. To finally know that you have found the other person that makes you whole. With just one kiss these two know that they are suppose to be together. Now if just the world around them would let them be.
Awww so sweet – I can totally see them getting out of the car both really nervous and of course Bettes face when Alice called second time LOL….great chapter – I love it like Tina….more please :o))
ha on a scale of 1-10 u get an 11
Wow, they finally made it! I thought they would end up in a senior residence before their first kiss. Thanks for the lovely story, it keeps me smiling.
MandaL. A little piece of heaven on earth… eventually. The interruptions were perfectly place anddd only resultsed in heighening the whole first real kiss moment. They did take the nervousness away and add a much needed jolt of humor to the events. As for the kiss itself – awesomw. You conveyed the longing and anticipaction of both gals and then the payoff; truly the heavens opened,the angels sang and the cherubs circled the sky. A real 4th of July moment!!! Thank you so much for finally allowing me to share in this beginning. Your Loyal Fan.
Sweet and full of humor, very nice.
Awsome… that’s all I have to say really… LOL
You know who’s “more than okay?” Clarity is because of this story! Someone please give Manda a fanfic award already! Fanfuckingtastic chapter. I needed this chapter today. I don’t like how this thing called “work” has interupted my regular fanfic reading. Anyway, loving the view from this TiBetten Mountain…umm, that didn’t sound as dirty in my mind as it does now. Carry on with all of your fantasticness, Manda.
My two favourite authors post once a week!!! but it’s worthy!! Love love love your story and loved loved loved this post!!! it reminded me my very first kiss, am not sure why lol, please post soon!!