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More Than a Feeling
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Bette could tell Tina was nervous as she watched the poor girl fumble with her house keys for several moments before finally opening the door. Immediately Jagger was there, wagging his little stump, his nails clicking away. Mom! Sammy! Im home and Bettes with me! Tina called aloud, stepping further into the house. She turned when she got no answer. Just making sure. Bette gave Tina a reassuring smile as she entered the house and closed the door.
Beyond that, neither knew what to do.
Uhdo you want a drink? Tina asked, pulling on her index finger nervously.
Sure. Bette nodded. Ill just go sit in the living room. She figured Tina might need a minute alone, just as she needed.
Okay. Tina said too quickly and then practically ran to the kitchen. When she got there, she leaned on the counter, taking deep breaths. What the hell is wrong with you! Bette is going to think youre a freak if you dont get yourself under control! So she might kiss youokay, shes definitely going to kiss youyouve been kissed before. So shes a girl, does that make a difference? You like her, you told her you like her, and shes been patient enough. You want this kiss. You know you do. So stop acting like a spaz and get back in there! After a few more calming breaths, Tina retrieved two cans of soda from the fridge and slowly made her way to Bette. She stopped just before leaving the kitchen, running back and placing the soda on the counter. She cupped a hand in front of her mouth and breathed into it. Yuck. She reached into one of the counter draws and pulled out a tin box of mints, popping two in her mouth, chewing on them before starting for the living room again.
She caught Bette popping a mint into her mouth as she entered, and waited a few seconds to announce herself. I hope sodas okay.
Bette turned. Yeah sure.
Tina walked up to Bette and handed her the soda, grazing her finger against Bettes hand just as she pulled away. Bette smiled. Tina seemed much more relaxed now. They both took a seat on the couch, Bette just inches from Tina. She placed the can of soda on the coffee table before her without even opening it. Tee, I want you to be completely comfortable here.
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SWEET!!!!!!! the question lies how much making out is gonna happen b4 someone comes home and will they get caught?? for some reason Jagger seems to be related to Alice….LOL!!!!!
Great chapter. love this story. My print was okay too. Thanks for the post.
Great chapter. Two thumbs up.
wow that was so nice and sweet manda, another great installment. Loving it so keep the chapters coming.
*swoons* i feel so happy reading this chapter. font’s okay in mine too. thanks so much for posting this.
i’m glad alice didn’t ruin the moment completely…and it makes me happy that tina loved the kiss…thanks
beautiful and perfect.. and you got alice just right. gotta love that girl!!.x.x.
This was a very sweet and lovely chapter! you almost drive me mad with the second call from Alice! continue please this story is so good!
That was so sweet, and great. Thank you
I have been waiting for what seems like forever for a new chapter. But I know what it’s like to be busy and not seem to have any time for fun. Anyway, I really wasn’t expecting the first kiss in this chapter. It’s about damn time! lol I’m surprised Bette didn’t answer Alice’s kiss question with: “I might have an answer if you’d STOP CALLING ME!”
Jagger should really learn to walk himself. I really didn’t think they would get there. But they did. Sweet.
Sweet kiss and so cute!
all that was missing was dana calling… loved thier first kiss… waiting for more…please continue
The dog needed to go. Alice will never give up.she needs a life. Lets hope Mom doesn’t come home. Plux Tim lives next door. They did get the first kiss in thanks
Awww.. so sweet and cute! Keep it coming, no drama please.. just loving!
I’ve just caught up with the story and i’ loving it. It’s all soo sweet. Post soon, please.
This is so sweet and cute and any other word that fits these two. To finally know that you have found the other person that makes you whole. With just one kiss these two know that they are suppose to be together. Now if just the world around them would let them be.
Awww so sweet – I can totally see them getting out of the car both really nervous and of course Bettes face when Alice called second time LOL….great chapter – I love it like Tina….more please :o))
ha on a scale of 1-10 u get an 11
Wow, they finally made it! I thought they would end up in a senior residence before their first kiss. Thanks for the lovely story, it keeps me smiling.
MandaL. A little piece of heaven on earth… eventually. The interruptions were perfectly place anddd only resultsed in heighening the whole first real kiss moment. They did take the nervousness away and add a much needed jolt of humor to the events. As for the kiss itself – awesomw. You conveyed the longing and anticipaction of both gals and then the payoff; truly the heavens opened,the angels sang and the cherubs circled the sky. A real 4th of July moment!!! Thank you so much for finally allowing me to share in this beginning. Your Loyal Fan.
Sweet and full of humor, very nice.
Awsome… that’s all I have to say really… LOL
You know who’s “more than okay?” Clarity is because of this story! Someone please give Manda a fanfic award already! Fanfuckingtastic chapter. I needed this chapter today. I don’t like how this thing called “work” has interupted my regular fanfic reading. Anyway, loving the view from this TiBetten Mountain…umm, that didn’t sound as dirty in my mind as it does now. Carry on with all of your fantasticness, Manda.
My two favourite authors post once a week!!! but it’s worthy!! Love love love your story and loved loved loved this post!!! it reminded me my very first kiss, am not sure why lol, please post soon!!