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Stained – Chapter 2
Chapter 2
Right after Tina had realised who David’s ice cream had bumped into, the mystery woman from now to be referred to as Bette – ‘Could it really be her?’ Tina wondered – said to her cell phone: "I have to go, Al. See you tonight." ‘Ah, that sweet and sultry voice… Definitely her! Wait sweet and sultry voice? Focus Tina! That sweet and sultry voice is so gonna yell at David for this!’
‘Oh God,’ Tina thought worriedly, ‘please don’t let her yell at David.’ He would be devastated. It had taken him so long to open up a little. He would completely close again. It would take the fragile boy weeks to get over it, not to mention he would once again be terrified of strangers!
‘Shit, this is Bette fucking Porter were talking about. She’ll probably buy David from his mother – which will cost her less than that now ruined jacket has cost her – and enslave him. He will have to eternally scrub the floors of her gigantic mansion as a revenge for her precious jacket! She will be standing there, watching him scrub her infinite floors while laughing her evil laugh. Muhahahaha! How could she do that?’ Tina was beginning to get very mad at The Great Bette Porter. ‘Who in their right mind would do that to a child?’ Oh right… mind. This was still only happening in her mind. No need to bitch slap Bette yet. ‘God Tina, stop that wicked mind of yours before anyone gets hurt!’
‘Well, I don’t care if she makes twenty million dollar a movie, I won’t allow for her to yell at David. I don’t care if she’s the hottest actress in Hollywood right now. She certainly is, though. Hottest, definitely. H-O-T. Just look at those lips… Nooo, not going there again! Down, Tina.’
While Tina and the voices in her head were thinking up their little enslavement scenarios, Bette had hung up her phone. She looked disapprovingly from the stain on her jacket to the little boy at her feet to the mortified looking woman in front of her. At least, that’s how Tina thought she was looking. She still couldn’t see her eyes because of the sunglasses. It could just as well be a look of condescending annoyance… or pure hatred.
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(47 votes, average: 3.49 out of 5)
i think if any of us would see “BETTE” on the street.. we all would be coming… LOLOLOLO… i love this story… please continue… love seeing into tina’s mind
Lol.. it’s funny! but it’s too short.. post soon please.
ALWAYS glad to see a new B&T beginning. I’m loving this story. You write wonderfully, I can’t believe you haven’t written before. Pleeassse continue-soon!
This is so funny and cute, love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
more now longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I though I was the only one who had those conversations in their head. Glad to hear that Tina does to. Nay, we don’t want Tina to die, she just needs a little help from the writers here and not on that show that the crazy lady created. This is really good. I would be totally star struck if I ran into JB or LH on the street. Great chapter to a good story.
very cute story – keep going…i’m interested to see what the dialogue will be like after tina gets over her voices in her head….
More please.
this was a nice chapter, i love this Bette Porter well i love all the Bette Porter! but this is so nice! continue please you are doing so good!
Great chapter but way too short!! :-)
Very good, lovin’ it. Give us more.
OMG another B&T beginning! Yessss! Great start, but wayyyyy too short! LOL! I just found this story! Oh, goodieee! I love the converations Tina’s having in her head… too funny! I’d be doing the same thing! I’m loving this! Keep it coming!
if tina keeps this up, bette will think she’s a little slow! he he. i like your sense of humor. more please
” Tina was electrocuted and fell to the ground… dead.” LMAO !!!! You had me almost fall from my chair !… Great start. Looking for some more..
omg i was lol through the whole of that…well funny! But i agree with Ira Way to short!!!! post soon
Goed begin B&T verhalen zijn altijd goed. Great chapter and post soon
Well, at least Tina isn’t speaking like an internet gamer kid: “omg liek ur bette porter OMG HAX LOLOLOLZ!!!1!!1!1!shiftoneoneone!” And now I’ll have to fight off a headache for the rest of the day from typing that out. Okay, Bette, I know Tina is a little slow right now (okay a whole lot slow but it’ll pass), but just do one thing. Stay forever.
this is really funny and cute…don’t worry about it being short, quality is more important
David yelled: “Are you coming, Tina?” “I just might.” Tina mumbled under her breath. HA HA. This is going to make my day!
are you coming … I just might LOL LOL LOL LMAO Die is echt goed!!! Ja, zit nu in de wachttijd voor mn coschap in Rotterdam… Tip voor jou: Probeer de decentrale selectie, dat is een toets waardoor je er ook zonder loting in kan komen!
I declare myself B-T addicted! some much of B-T is never enough for me. This is a great history..loving it already! So please..Post soon and longer…:)
This is a really great start, please post again soon!
Another gd chapter!but still too short lol …Chum this is Fanfic villeyou gotta give the girlies what they want ehehe
This was hilarious! Thanks for putting a huge smile on my face so early in the day!
Haha, that’s hilarious! Great chapter. Don’t keep us waiting for so long please. But I guess two days is also long enough to me. lol
Tina is such a goof. I love it. Length really isn’t important I was hooked three lines in.
haha this is too cute!! but never long enuff to satisfy us!! keep it up
I agress with all the others…this is funny and a very great start..please post more…and soon…and longer.. :)
Love this gentle Bette. David was really afraid,that he would get yellat. Poor baby. and Tina was in a trance,but was redy to protect David. Yet they are on the way to buy more icecream. love this thanks
Love Notting Hill and love the story, but something tells me your going to make it better