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Stained – Chapter 3
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Chapter Three
‘How the hell did this happen?’ Bette wondered. She was being pulled to an ice cream vendor by a little boy. He couldn’t be more than 5, 6 years old. And now she was buying him an ice cream. ‘It is actually touching me… He is actually touching me. Remember Bette, children are not objects.’
Bette Porter was the kind of person that wouldn’t touch a child with a stick. A lot of people in her line of work seemed to treat their children as fashion accessories. Crying and drooling fashion accessories, that is. That is why Bette believed children should be locked inside the house ’til they were housebroken and presentable to the outside world. That also happened to be her opinion on men. What was it that Alice always said? Men are like a fine wine. They all start out like grapes, and it’s our job to stomp on them and keep them in the dark until they mature into something with which we’d like to have dinner. And Alice should know being the dirty bi-sexual that she is. Bette wasn’t a man-hater – or a child-hater for that matter – they just didn’t interest her a lot.
She had to admit though, it was a cute kid. Still, the cute kid had fucked up her suit. Normally, Bette would have been pissed off. Very pissed off. What was different this time? Well, obviously the extremely hot blonde had something to do with it. ‘Yeah, that’s it. I just want to sleep with that blonde, Tina. That has got to be it!’ Somehow, that just didn’t seem to cover it, though.
She looked back at Tina who was walking a few steps behind them. Her wavy blonde hair hung loose and a slight breeze had blown a few strands in her face. Bette couldn’t think of anything cuter than that. ‘And those eyes, my god, I could just drown in them.’ Her eyes? Well that wasn’t very Bette Porter-like. Why was she looking at her eyes when the woman had such a nice rack? Good, she was starting to sound a little like herself again. Bette Porter looking at someone’s eyes before noticing cleavage or a nice ass… ha. Must be this insane weather. Yeah, that’s it. The weather.’ But again Bette knew in the back of her mind that there was something more. She didn’t feel like dealing with it though, so she did what she did best when it came to her feelings: ignoring them.
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You did a great job being a fanfic writer. Please keep going.
Nooo, not that scum bag Eric!! At this point, I’m wondering if Tina is still straight. She had some mighty nice thoughts of Bette running through her head. I love that Bette is a huge actress, it’s very exciting. Very nice job. Can’t wait to see where you take this.
Love your story! En gefeliciteerd met je mondeling, een 10.. wow! :-)
LOVE this story!!!
ha well i was thinkin that friday would b good but after the man showed up…mayb not so much!
Hey you, I’ll give you a 10 for this story, but I guess that won’t get you into med school, will it? I really love it. More and longer please! Oh, and I think Bette loves competition and would love to kick this guy’s ass.
Let the drama begin.
WHat a great story! And you are definitely an excellent story teller. Please post again soon!
I typically don’t go for the non-traditional B&T beginnings, but I’m diggin’ this one and looking forward to reading more!
I like this beginning,it a wee bit different,why did the b/f show up. that sucks thanks so much for showing that actress are humans also. thanks
wonderful, bette is so cute with the boy…so tina has a b/f…not for long i hope
each chapter is better! and this is the 3 chapter i can’t imagine the next one! Bette is so sweet and she already fall for Tina! i can’t wait for the next and congrats for your 10!
Bette and Tina are cute, the way Bette with David is sweet. Now stupid boyfriend interrupt the good moment with Bette and Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Wow! Well…I have to admit your comments made me blush…and then let out a giggle! Thank you for your wonderful and sweet compliments. Now, can I say that I am totally hooked on this story already?! I love your Bette…and I’m thinking that Tina isn’t as straight as the man who kissed her thinks she is!! Looking forward to reading what happens next! Thanks!
oh i’m in dreaming, keep it going
Fanfic is being taken over by the Brits and the Dutch. Pretty cool, eh?
Post soon.
I was floating on a cloud when that kiss popped the air out of me, just like a deflating a balloon. Thanks for letting us see the sweet side of Bette. Please come back with more!
Damn why does the guy always come in a screw up everything. I love Bette’s way of thinking. It was funny about the housebroken comment. I guess that is why I have a pet cat. They don’t usually need to be housebroken. This is such a cute story. At least you are willing to write, I have trouble even reading (and I even speak and read in English).
This is really good…please post soon and congrats on your exam…
Do’h! Of COURSE her boyfriend had to show up! DAMN! This is a great beginning, please post again soon! Congrats on you exam!
No need to be shy in Fanfiction Land. Some people here wouldn’t believe I’m quite shy as well. I’m glad a 10 is good because when you said that, at first I thought, “Uh, isn’t that a big fat fail?” Yeah, I’m used to a 100-point system. =p Bette’s walls are starting to melt like ice cream I bet. Let’s see if she feels a touch of jealousy when she sees this dude kiss Tina.