Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Thin Line – Chpt 13
Previously
What I intended to be little more than a light peck, quickly began to escalate. I put my hand up to Bette’s chest, and pulled away.
"Bette, we have company," I whispered.
Alice gulped down the remainder of her wine.
"Well, I think I’ll be going now." Alice rose from her chair. "Adios. You two are absolutely caliente."
I looked at Bette questioningly.
"Hot. Caliente is hot," Bette translated.
I pulled Bette in for a kiss. "Mmm. Caliente."
Chapter 13
Alice left through the sliding glass doors, from whence she came. At the same time, the front door bell rang, announcing the arrival of the delivery boy from the Cantonese restaurant.
I watched Bette gather my strewn clothes from the entryway before opening the door.
It was good that Alice had left through the kitchen exit, or else she would have discovered even more material to dramatize any possible gossip that she may either wittingly, or unwittingly, spill. Her intentions may be good and honest, but everyone knew Alice’s jaws were well-lubricated, especially when it came to disseminating information about sexual relationships. And it was well within reason to believe that Alice was on her way home to mark her wall ‘chart’ with her most recently confirmed liaison.
As Bette paid the young man for our dinner, I searched the cabinets for dinnerware to set the table.
When she returned to the kitchen, I was placing the plates on the dinette.
Bette set the cartons of oriental cuisine on the table, and she kissed me.
"Thank you, Helena, but I would have done that. You should relax," she said.
"It’s no bother, Bette. You don’t mind my rummaging through your cabinets, do you?" I asked.
"Of course, not," Bette replied with a sly grin. "You’ve already rummaged through my drawers."
Showing my amusement, I smiled, rubbing her behind over her bathrobe, and said, "None of which you’re wearing right now."
Bette smiled. "Yes, but now you’re grabbing for dessert, and we haven’t had the main course yet."
"Quite right," I replied, "And we must keep our strength up."
Bette wrapped her arms around my waist, and I crossed my arms around her neck. She pulled me into her, and we kissed longingly.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.




They are so hot together. It is due to skill as a writer.
I always look forward to reading this story – Bette and Helena have been an odd oasis after the desolate desert that was season three…can’t wait for more from you…thanks.
I liked the calm cool conversation with the hot undercurrents. Nice update, z. Looking forward to an even hotter chapter next.
It’s just not everyday that you get a plausible explaination of Helena’s transformation.
The joy of it – another great chapter in this saga! Just received your pm, so thought that I would leave a few words of encouragement for you…still loving this zheese:)
Another fantablous chapter zheese, absolutely love this story, so damn sexy! eagerly awaiting the next chapter, thank you!
You write beautifully! Each time I read your fic, I want more! Bette and Helena leaves me breathless! :) Great job!
God, this is my absolute favorite story on the site right now. Can’t wait for some more…
Great chapter, zheese, good enough to ease my long day of bale and bitterness. Oh, and I bet that some of my teachers and professors could also describe the personality of their eccentric student, hehe… Oh yeah, and Bette rubbed between Helena’s folds… mmmmmm… how nice! Now, let them finally get to *that*.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! I just LOVEEEEEEEE this story!! Bette & Helena make E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G they do together so incredibly sexy!
My favorite story. So glad to see your post. This is the sexiest story on the site. I love it. Can’t wait for more.
oh s…, what a way to start the day. that was fantastic…”I’m getting to that”. your writing is fabulous and b&h are a dynamic duo. more, please…excellent!!!
Lovely writing! Thanks ^_^
HOT!!!HOT!!!!HOT!!!!! Bette and Helena together is just great. Please let them be Happy for along time. Thank you for the Great Chapter
Hello Zheese, Thank you for creating a realistic and loving portrait of how a relationship between Bette and Helena could develop and strength over time. These two alpha females have been through the wringer in the past and now need the comfort and support from another human being. And who better than someone who has recently been through a similar situation. Brava!! It is with your grat talent and style that this is a fantastic fan fiction. I can’t wait for the next installment so please make it soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Even though I love B& T, gotta admit that Bette & Helena together, definitly hot. Damn
mucho CALIENTE! B & H are soooo HOT together! loving it! (“,)