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A Thin Line – Chpt 13
Withdrawing her lips from mine, Bette caressed her cheek against my cheek and whispered in my ear, "My desire for you is going to remain very hot, so let’s eat before our food gets cold."
I swayed against her and nibbled her neck. "Alright, darling. Just one thing?" I said softly.
"Hmm? What’s that?" Bette asked, ever so quietly.
"Promise you’ll dance with me when dinner is over," I made my request. "A romantic, slow, sensuous dance."
"Mmm. That will be my pleasure," Bette purred, kissing me again. "Now, do you prefer chopsticks or cutlery?"
We leisurely ate dinner and discussed our workdays. Our conversation flowed as if we’d known each other forever.
When I depicted for Bette a few of my favorite film projects, her attention was rapt, and she asked the appropriate questions.
When Bette humorously described the personalities of some of her eccentric art faculty and students, I listened intently and we both laughed. The devotion and enthusiasm she displayed when talking about her work were nothing less than pure delight. I adored her passion. And with every word Bette spoke, I found myself falling for her more and more deeply than I ever thought possible.
When our plates were emptied, I reached to take her hand and interlaced our fingers. I ran the top of my bare foot up and down her calf. We stared into each other’s eyes, and they readily revealed the craving that only touching one another could satisfy. Bette leaned over to kiss me fervently.
"Are you ready for that dance now?" she asked, as she began to draw away.
My eyes were half opened. And I groped with my open mouth to touch her lips again.
Our tongues flirted with each other.
"Yes. The closer I can be to you, the better. I want to hold you," I replied.
Bette scooted her chair out, stood, and pulled up on my hand.
"Follow me. We’ll find some music," she said.
I thought, ‘As if the music of being so near you isn’t enough.’
I arose from my seat and followed her into the living room. Bette dropped my hand and crouched in front of the entertainment center to peruse her CD’s on the bottom shelf. Squatting with her from behind, my knees wrapped around Bette, I enveloped her with my arms around her waist, and kissed her neck.
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They are so hot together. It is due to skill as a writer.
I always look forward to reading this story – Bette and Helena have been an odd oasis after the desolate desert that was season three…can’t wait for more from you…thanks.
I liked the calm cool conversation with the hot undercurrents. Nice update, z. Looking forward to an even hotter chapter next.
It’s just not everyday that you get a plausible explaination of Helena’s transformation.
The joy of it – another great chapter in this saga! Just received your pm, so thought that I would leave a few words of encouragement for you…still loving this zheese:)
Another fantablous chapter zheese, absolutely love this story, so damn sexy! eagerly awaiting the next chapter, thank you!
You write beautifully! Each time I read your fic, I want more! Bette and Helena leaves me breathless! :) Great job!
God, this is my absolute favorite story on the site right now. Can’t wait for some more…
Great chapter, zheese, good enough to ease my long day of bale and bitterness. Oh, and I bet that some of my teachers and professors could also describe the personality of their eccentric student, hehe… Oh yeah, and Bette rubbed between Helena’s folds… mmmmmm… how nice! Now, let them finally get to *that*.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! I just LOVEEEEEEEE this story!! Bette & Helena make E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G they do together so incredibly sexy!
My favorite story. So glad to see your post. This is the sexiest story on the site. I love it. Can’t wait for more.
oh s…, what a way to start the day. that was fantastic…”I’m getting to that”. your writing is fabulous and b&h are a dynamic duo. more, please…excellent!!!
Lovely writing! Thanks ^_^
HOT!!!HOT!!!!HOT!!!!! Bette and Helena together is just great. Please let them be Happy for along time. Thank you for the Great Chapter
Hello Zheese, Thank you for creating a realistic and loving portrait of how a relationship between Bette and Helena could develop and strength over time. These two alpha females have been through the wringer in the past and now need the comfort and support from another human being. And who better than someone who has recently been through a similar situation. Brava!! It is with your grat talent and style that this is a fantastic fan fiction. I can’t wait for the next installment so please make it soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Even though I love B& T, gotta admit that Bette & Helena together, definitly hot. Damn
mucho CALIENTE! B & H are soooo HOT together! loving it! (“,)