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A Thin Line – Chpt 13
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"Helena, I can’t concentrate when you do that," Bette whispered, closing her eyes and rolling her head.
"I don’t want you to concentrate. On anything but me," I replied softly, licking her neck slowly.
"Oh, God, Helena, please," Bette breathed out.
"Please, what?" I asked softly.
"Ohh. Please, just help me find some music, or the only dancing we’re going to be doing is the Horizontal Hula," she answered breathlessly.
"Just turn on the radio," I suggested, purring in a low tone, as I sucked below Bette’s ear.
As I pleasured her with my tongue on her neck, she relaxed. She opened the flap of her robe and placed my hand on her breast, while leaning back to kiss me.
Softly, Bette said, "You know, I just remembered. Tonight is ‘Everything is Standard’ night on NPR."
"Mmm-hmm," I replied. "That’s usually very romantic. Turn it on."
I ran my fingertips over Bette’s erect nipple, and I could feel my clit begin to throb as she reacted to my touch.
"God, I love the way you touch me," she said.
"Then, let’s dance," I offered, continuing to stroke her and pulling her up as I stood.
Bette pressed a button on the stereo as she arose.
A familiar, but unidentified, tune faded out, as the announcer’s voice faded in to introduce a Frank Sinatra classic over the orchestra music.
"When somebody loves you, it’s no good unless he loves you, all the way"
Our postures fully erect, I removed my hand from Bette’s breast and turned her around, taking her in my arms.
"Happy to be near you, when you need someone to cheer you"
I drew her close to me and nuzzled my cheek against hers. We swayed together as our feet began to slowly move to the music. Quietly, I began to hum into her ear.
"Deeper than the deep blue sea is, that’s how deep it goes, if it’s real"
Bette smoothed her hand over my ass, and whispered, "This is so very nice. What a lovely way to follow dinner."
"Mmm-hmm," I murmured, squeezing her tighter.
"Who knows where the road will lead us, only a fool would say" crooned the voice from the stereo.
I then sang softly to Bette along with the blue-eyed master, "But if you’ll let me love you, it’s for sure I’m gonna love you, all the way"
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They are so hot together. It is due to skill as a writer.
I always look forward to reading this story – Bette and Helena have been an odd oasis after the desolate desert that was season three…can’t wait for more from you…thanks.
I liked the calm cool conversation with the hot undercurrents. Nice update, z. Looking forward to an even hotter chapter next.
It’s just not everyday that you get a plausible explaination of Helena’s transformation.
The joy of it – another great chapter in this saga! Just received your pm, so thought that I would leave a few words of encouragement for you…still loving this zheese:)
Another fantablous chapter zheese, absolutely love this story, so damn sexy! eagerly awaiting the next chapter, thank you!
You write beautifully! Each time I read your fic, I want more! Bette and Helena leaves me breathless! :) Great job!
God, this is my absolute favorite story on the site right now. Can’t wait for some more…
Great chapter, zheese, good enough to ease my long day of bale and bitterness. Oh, and I bet that some of my teachers and professors could also describe the personality of their eccentric student, hehe… Oh yeah, and Bette rubbed between Helena’s folds… mmmmmm… how nice! Now, let them finally get to *that*.
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! I just LOVEEEEEEEE this story!! Bette & Helena make E-V-E-R-Y-T-H-I-N-G they do together so incredibly sexy!
My favorite story. So glad to see your post. This is the sexiest story on the site. I love it. Can’t wait for more.
oh s…, what a way to start the day. that was fantastic…”I’m getting to that”. your writing is fabulous and b&h are a dynamic duo. more, please…excellent!!!
Lovely writing! Thanks ^_^
HOT!!!HOT!!!!HOT!!!!! Bette and Helena together is just great. Please let them be Happy for along time. Thank you for the Great Chapter
Hello Zheese, Thank you for creating a realistic and loving portrait of how a relationship between Bette and Helena could develop and strength over time. These two alpha females have been through the wringer in the past and now need the comfort and support from another human being. And who better than someone who has recently been through a similar situation. Brava!! It is with your grat talent and style that this is a fantastic fan fiction. I can’t wait for the next installment so please make it soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Even though I love B& T, gotta admit that Bette & Helena together, definitly hot. Damn
mucho CALIENTE! B & H are soooo HOT together! loving it! (“,)