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THE L WING – CHAPTER 75
Narration of Bette Porter
Its almost 7pm – the party starts at 7:30 and I’ve just had a call telling me that the fleet of cars bringing our guests from the airport to our house have just left.
I look at myself in the full length mirror in the front entrance. I am wearing black trousers, high heels, a low cut white shirt that shows off a lot of cleavage and a long black dinner jacket. I look great and I know it.
The door bell sounds and I walk through just as our hired butler opens the front door to greet Tina’s parents and Lucy and her girlfriend Sara – I bet that was a fun car journey.
Tina’s dad is wearing a grey suit – probably last worn for Lucy’s christening. Her mum is wearing white slacks and a black blouse — she looks a lot like Tina when her hair is loose and she actually looks really nice.
"Mr and Mrs Kennard — thank you for coming – you both look great "
"Emma and I have been talking – haven’t we Emma ? "
"We’d like you to call us Emma and Tom – you’re going to be our daughter-in-law "
Well try and make it sound a little less like you’d rather be having your teeth pulled with a pair of rusty pliers .
"Thank you – I’d be honoured — hey there Lucy "
Lucy greets me with a big hug. I’ve fallen in love with this irrepressible young woman – I see so much of Tina in her but she is also so different to Tina in how just loud she is. Lucy is wearing a lovely blue dress that really shows off her slim figure and blonde hair.
No one needs to know that I sent her a cheque so she could buy a couple of "Posh frocks ". Sara her girlfriend has long ginger hair and is tall and stocky — I see the attraction between them.
"Sara – welcome – I’m Bette Porter "
"Hello " she looks a little overawed. Well it must be a daunting thing when your girlfriend’s sister is dating the President you are going to feel well — inadequate.
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1st!!!!!! NO SULKING! how is that possible LOL
Perfick!
I bet Tina’s going to say yes. She better or we’re all screwed.
WOW!!! Two post in one day. I am so happy. This chapter was just Great. Thank you Ally
Sitting here with a silly grin on my face! Thanks!
LMAO@funnyone’s comment. At that moment Asthon Kutcher will emerge dressed as one of Bette’s detail and announce, “You got PUNK’D!” Ally, S3 was total shithouse for the TiBetters. At least in S2 we had some hope.
amazing as usual. Love it, keep them coming. post soon
I bet it’s a day of marriage proposals.. hehe… Anyway, I nearly fainted when I read that Tina has gone COMMANDO again! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
ally… i am with you season 3 sucked… i only saw each ep 1 time… when it aired… and i have no desire to buy the dvd’s or even watch it again… i will just have to keep watching season 1… and ep 9 from season 2… love your story… well both of them… please continue when you can… later babe
ally, if you’re feeling too elated one fine day then watch S3. It will depress you as there are maybe four scenes with B & T that are hopeful. The rest is so angst-filled that Bette reminds me of that comic strip character from “Lil Abner” called Joe Blixfixs (sp?) who always has a black cloud over his head. It is much more pleasant to think of Commando Tina.
wow. I am so impressed again. This story could not be any better. Some how i already suspected that there would be a brother for Tina. The happiness is just radiating for this beautiful couple, eventhough i can not see them. You are such a great writter.Continu please!!
i have watched S1 and S2 but with all the comments i don’t thinks i have the bravery to watch it! but i love read you cause this stories give hope! take care. And why tuesday? ok i will wait.
so wonderful and romantic…i’ll try not to sulk, maybe i’ll reread all your stories (including the 1st one), it will keep me occupied until tuesday…btw, helena&tina pool scene in ep. 206 was nicely done but it could never beat one of B&T love scenes…never
Amazing truely amazing, Love your B&T soooo much, and you lady are soooo talented
When I’m a hundred and Ten I’ll look at season 3 again. You name what could be done to a person.them Bette got it. Love this. Love than Bette has done so much to make Tina happy. thanks
So lovely and romantic. Thanks for letting them have peace for a while and for posting so often.
AAAAWWWWWW…….I LOVE THIS……
Ally, I checked the weather broascast for the next few days. It’s gonna rain, rain and rain (boring)… so is that mean we going to have 2 post each day? LOL… thanks for posting, love it. :)
You updated BOTH! Simply great! Thank you for giving us the happy Sunday!
WOW that was perfect !! :) I dont know how Tinas mom is so reserved about Bette..camon B is sooo adorable!
This is awesome and Tina will say yes and they will be happy forever!
Ally, you are going to spoil us. And, thank you, tha rain in England.
thank you, you are the greatest :D
Awww, Bette is such a sweetheart. I love her proposal and of course Melvin’s little speech comes in a second…lol. Thanks for the update on both stories!!
I love this story but no more chapters until Tuesday boo hoo
How lucky is that? Updates on both stories!! I can’t wait to see what Tina says…she better say yes!!!
Yes, Ally please skip season 3. IC and writers have messed up not only the characters of Tina, Bette but they killed off Dana. Now, I thought that this show was to show us in a positive light. Instead we get bambozzled. It is writers like you that remind us of what it is to love something through thick and thin. I am hoping that Tina will say yes (of course she will). Thanks for the double dip today.
I will be a pouty 2 year old if I want…I can’t wait until Tuesday. Geez…thanks ally
Awesome as always. Softy that I am, I started crying when the brother showed up. Please don’t make us wait. As for S3, not much can be said, except I’d like to rewind and start it over. S2 at least had some moments we enjoyed, though not most, but with S3, lord only knows what IC was thinking, thus why we are soooooooooooooo worried about S4. But hopefully no matter what we’ll all have you and the other great writers in FF.
Great chapter update. Love it.
Cool an L-Wing update!
*madly jumps around* two posts…AND A NEW ZEALAND MENTION! *proud Kiwi* lol….make that *obsessively patriotic Kiwi who spent a night screaming and hugging randoms while watching her rugby team make the final of the Super 14 for the first time in 11 years…* Fabtastic Ally, thank you :D
Another kiwi(Aucklander) here :-) I think Tina is going to be the one to move in your other story. Bette seems pretty settled in London.
so sweet….I can’t wait to propose to my gf..!!!
Wowee Wow! Perfect! Thanks Ally. So then till tuesday it is … ^_^
i really, really love your story.. great writer..:)
Thanks ally.Not much in that pool scene with tina and helena, nothing bets the tibette scenes.
Ally, i must say it again, you’re definitely ‘THE MASTER’. Don’t waste your pressious time on S3, i’ve already erased it from my harddrive…..
amazing as always!
Brilliant just brilliant. I love that Bette thought of Tinas brother for their special day….and the word COMMANDO does things to me LOL!!!! I’m not crazy about Tina asking Helena to be her Chief of Staff, what is Tina thinking??? It can only leads to problems if you ask me. It was a great idea to propose in front of all the family and friends, I wonder what Tina will say LOL…..post more of this story soon please.