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    Off limits to me…chpt. 6

    Story written on May 31, 2006 by chocolatemama23.
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    Chapter 6: The aftermath…A Bette and Tina beginning

    Hospital…

    Intercom: "Doctor Wilson to ICU please! Doctor Wilson to ICU." Bette enters the lobby and scans the crowded room. A tall woman about 5’10 approaches her and looks her up and down. Bette stares back with not knowing what to expect from this individual.

    Maria: "Excuse me. Are you Bette Porter?" The brunette takes her shades off and tucks them in her purse.

    Bette: "I am." The woman smiles and steps close. She embarces her. Bette’s eyes widens and she could tell that she must be Maria. "You must be Maria."

    Maria: "I am." She backs away and admires the brunette’s beauty. "Tina’s in recovery. She’s in ICU. Doctor Wilson is her doctor here. She’ll be the one looking over her.

    Bette: "So, is she okay?" The brunette gazes into her eyes.

    Maria: "I don’t know. It’s hard to get any answers around here. Everything’s so got damn confidential."

    Bette: "Have you filed a police report?"

    Maria: "I did once the cops showed up. The bad part is I couldn’t see their faces. They were covered up from head to toe. I’m just having a hard problem understanding why they robbed us in the first place. There were plenty of women there with more jewelry than I’ll ever own in my life. They could of killed her you know." A thought comes to Bette’s head.

    Bette: "What about the baby?" She was concerned for the fetus.

    Maria: "I still don’t know. Like I said before. It’s hard to get answers around this place." She walks over and sits down. Bette follows her and sits down too.

    Bette: "I can’t believe someone would do something so harsh like this. She didn’t deserve this." She dug into her purse and pulls out a kleenex.

    Maria: "I know. I’ve never seen that much blood before in my life." Bette puts her hand up.

    Bette: "Please! Don’t say anymore." Maria stops talking and watches the brunette carefully. Tears kept falling one after the next, like a leaking foscet. Maria looks up and catches doctor Wilson coming their way. She stands and welcomes the doctor over.

    Dr. Wilson: "Bette Porter." Dr. Wilson looks up from the chart she was holding. Bette paused and looked up too.

    Bette: "I’m Bette Porter." She stood and faces the doctor.

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    3. After her signs all the papers and Bette gets him to tell her what he did. I hope she beats him until he’s crying for the police to stop her from killing him. I just wish we all could have a good wack at him thanks

    4. I don’t get it, if Eric already planned to kill Tina and the baby. Why he still bothered to ask Bette to sign the bloody adoption papers. Is he stupid or what… well, obviously he was using his ass to think. I also think its a big step for Bette, even though she loves Tina.. but the baby. Hm…I still think it’s too soon as they just so called start dating. They have a lot to talk about! Great chappy, please continue. :)

    8. Eric needs to go to prison and let that system take care of him. Bette, I hope will be able to protect Tina and not be put into danger herself. Eric so needs to be smacked around a bit. Great post.

    9. You out did yourself this time chocomama. I had a feeling that Eric was involved somehow. It was all a little to convenient they way he went to Bette to give up his parental rights. Eric better watch out! You know what they say about a woman scorned…I don’t know if he should be more afraid of Bette or of what Tina might do when Bette tells her that Eric is the reason she is in the hospital and almost lost her child; post soon.

    10. i wanna kill Eric is such a very very bad person? who with metal health can did that,he is a pshyco! and he must be looked! i hope TIna and the baby will be fine. and please don’t let Bette will hurth! you surprise me i didn’t expected it! this is so good!

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