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    Off limits to me…chpt. 6

    Story written on May 31, 2006 by chocolatemama23.
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    Chapter 6: The aftermath…A Bette and Tina beginning

    Bette: "Shane that’s absurb. Eric would never do such a thing."

    Shane: "Bette…" Shane kneels down before her. "The man was willing to sign over all legal rights of being a parent to a stranger that he barely knows. So, what makes you think that he gives two fucks about Tina, or the baby she’s carrying. I think he tried to get rid of her and that child. And, Eric, knowing Tina like he does, would of known that she wouldn’t give up anything without a fight." Bette’s face turns white. Her lips turn blue. "Bette! Are you okay?"

    Bette: "I feel sick." She stands. "I think I’m going to be sick. Oh god!" She takes off towards the bathroom and slams the door. Shane over hears her throwing up repeatedly.

    Shane: "Shit! Fuck!" She enters the house and approaches the bathroom door. "Are you okay?"

    Bette: "No. I don’t feel so good." The brunette grabs some tissue and wipes her mouth. She stands and sits down on the toilet. Thoughts of the incident appear and disappear before her. She thinks of what Maria said about not being able to see their faces. The thought of women that pass and go within that one area made Bette’s stomach toss and turn. There were other women with more fine jewels than Tina’s, so, why was she the target? Shane continues to knock at the door.

    Shane: "Bette! Open up!" She demands. The door opens and Bette appears behind it. She looks sick and lost. "Are you okay?"

    Bette: "I don’t know." She walks past Shane and enters her bedroom. Shane follows her and sits down. "I don’t understand."

    Shane: "Of course you do. You’re just having a hard problem accepting it."

    Bette: "That bastard is a nutcase."

    Shane: "Yup. He sure is. I don’t trust him Bette. In fact-I’m coming to work with you on Wednesday when you meet with him." Bette sighs.

    Bette: "But, what about your job? You could get fired you know."

    Shane: "Don’t worry. I have it covered Bette. In the meantime work on getting a tape recorder."

    Bette: "For what?"

    Shane: "A confession." She grabs her beer and sips from the bottle. "And, after you’re done, send it to the cops, and BAM!" Bette jumps. "His ass is behind bars for good." She laughs out loud. "I can’t stand that dude. I honestly can’t."

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    3. After her signs all the papers and Bette gets him to tell her what he did. I hope she beats him until he’s crying for the police to stop her from killing him. I just wish we all could have a good wack at him thanks

    4. I don’t get it, if Eric already planned to kill Tina and the baby. Why he still bothered to ask Bette to sign the bloody adoption papers. Is he stupid or what… well, obviously he was using his ass to think. I also think its a big step for Bette, even though she loves Tina.. but the baby. Hm…I still think it’s too soon as they just so called start dating. They have a lot to talk about! Great chappy, please continue. :)

    8. Eric needs to go to prison and let that system take care of him. Bette, I hope will be able to protect Tina and not be put into danger herself. Eric so needs to be smacked around a bit. Great post.

    9. You out did yourself this time chocomama. I had a feeling that Eric was involved somehow. It was all a little to convenient they way he went to Bette to give up his parental rights. Eric better watch out! You know what they say about a woman scorned…I don’t know if he should be more afraid of Bette or of what Tina might do when Bette tells her that Eric is the reason she is in the hospital and almost lost her child; post soon.

    10. i wanna kill Eric is such a very very bad person? who with metal health can did that,he is a pshyco! and he must be looked! i hope TIna and the baby will be fine. and please don’t let Bette will hurth! you surprise me i didn’t expected it! this is so good!

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