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Off limits to me…chpt. 6
Dr. Wilson: "Hello. I’m doctor Wilson. I’ll be taking care of Tina Kennard while she is here." She extends her hand to meet Bette’s.
Bette: "Hi." She wipes her face. "How is she?"
Dr. Wilson: "Stable." She flips the page and stops at something that catches her eye.
Bette: "What?" This caught Bette’s attention.
Dr. Wilson: "Are you aware that Tina is a month along?" She takes her glasses off and cleans them.
Bette: "No. But, now I know." She sighs and rubs her eyes. "What’s wrong with the baby?"
Dr. Wilson: "The baby’s fine Ms. Porter. The knife missed the fetus by a half an inch. Thank god he didn’t turn it while it was inside, otherwise he could of killed it." Bette’s stomach muscles tighten and she’s about to barf.
Bette: "Please! Spare me the details."
Dr. Wilson: "I’m sorry." She closes Tina’s file.
Maria: "When can we see her?"
Dr. Wilson: "Tomorrow. It’s best that she gets her rest at the moment." Bette’s unhappy with the news.
Bette: "Ok…" She digs into her purse and pulls out a business card. "If there’s a problem give me a call." Dr. Wilson takes the card and slips it into her pocket.
Dr. Wilson: "Thanks."
Bette: "Sure…" The brunette slips her shades on and exits the hospital.
That evening…
Shane: "Is she okay?"
Bette: "Yes. The doctor says she’s stable. So, I’m guessing that’s what she’s implying." The brunette gazes over at her friend.
Shane: "Cool. So, two guys robbed them and stabbed Tina."
Bette: "Yes." Shane looks as though she has something on her mind. "What’s going on in that detective mind of yours?" The brunette chuckles.
Shane: "And Eric came to see you about what time?" Bette stops chuckling.
Bette: "About nine. Maybe nine thirty, why?"
Shane: "Hold on. Now, you said this all took place about ten-ten thirty, right?"
Bette: "Yes, I’m postive." Shane leaps out of her chair.
Shane: "That’s it." She snaps her finger. "I know what happened."
Bette: "Enlighten me." The brunette relaxes in her chair awaiting the news.
Shane: "I think Eric hired someone to do this." The brunette chuckles.
Bette: "Yeah, right." She stands. "Why? He has plenty of money Shane."
Shane: "True. But, what if that was the payoff for the fellas? Hey, you do this for me, and you get this in return." Her brows raised high before the brunette.
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(41 votes, average: 3.54 out of 5)
HOMAN! Eric’s crazier than I thought.
Allright, great chapter, time for Bette to kick that bastards ass! Post soon please!
After her signs all the papers and Bette gets him to tell her what he did. I hope she beats him until he’s crying for the police to stop her from killing him. I just wish we all could have a good wack at him thanks
I don’t get it, if Eric already planned to kill Tina and the baby. Why he still bothered to ask Bette to sign the bloody adoption papers. Is he stupid or what… well, obviously he was using his ass to think. I also think its a big step for Bette, even though she loves Tina.. but the baby. Hm…I still think it’s too soon as they just so called start dating. They have a lot to talk about! Great chappy, please continue. :)
i so had a feelin it was goin tht way but he is a fuckin asshole i dun like him one bitam gld bt are backthe way it was ment to be
Don’t let Eric do something to harm Tina. He’d better be hit by a truck on the way to the hospital and die immediately…
Hopefully Eric will soon meet Alpha Bette.
Eric needs to go to prison and let that system take care of him. Bette, I hope will be able to protect Tina and not be put into danger herself. Eric so needs to be smacked around a bit. Great post.
You out did yourself this time chocomama. I had a feeling that Eric was involved somehow. It was all a little to convenient they way he went to Bette to give up his parental rights. Eric better watch out! You know what they say about a woman scorned…I don’t know if he should be more afraid of Bette or of what Tina might do when Bette tells her that Eric is the reason she is in the hospital and almost lost her child; post soon.
i wanna kill Eric is such a very very bad person? who with metal health can did that,he is a pshyco! and he must be looked! i hope TIna and the baby will be fine. and please don’t let Bette will hurth! you surprise me i didn’t expected it! this is so good!
Glad Tina and baby is ok and Bette will take care of her. Eric going to die or will go to jail for the rest of his life. OK post soon please, thanks!
WOW!!!! I hope Eric get’s what he has comming to him and in a bad way. Please let Tina be safe. Thank you
Just caught up on all the chapters, this is a fantastic story, keep up the good work! Love it!