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Rebuilding 6
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The next morning Shane stirred and it took her a moment to realise where she was.
“Huh…what?” a disorientated Carmen woke half lying on Shane on the sofa.
“I’m sorry baby I didn’t mean to wake you”
“Why did we sleep here?”
“All that crying wore us out. Did you sleep ok though baby?”
“Best I have in a long time” Carmen admitted.
“Me too”
“Listen, Shane…”
Shane looked at Carmen with pleading eyes, terrified that she was going to take back everything that had happened the night before.
“No, baby it’s ok. I just think we need to talk” Carmen reassured her.
“Ok” Shane sounded relieved.
“I need to know what’s going on here. With us”
“I think that’s kind of up to you” Shane pointed out.
“No baby it’s not. I want to be with you, Shane. But…but I’m terrified we’re gonna get so far down the line again and you’re just gonna get scared and run away again”
“I don’t know what to say”
“I need to know I can trust you Shane”
“You can baby you can. I’m all yours”
“You’ve said it before, you are who you are. I know you did what you did coz you thought it would save me from getting hurt. But I’m gonna tell you this now, I’d rather call it a day now than get hurt like that again. I need some reassurances Shane”
“I can’t predict the future Carmen”
“No-one can. But I need to know that you’re not going to leave me because you’re scared of what you might do in the future. If you feel like you’re going the same way as your Dad, we’ll deal with it then and not before. You’ve cheated before Shane, and we dealt with it”
“I know” Shane said quietly.
“We both did. And I know two wrongs don’t make a right, but we’ve got a clean slate. And how did you feel afterwards?”
“Terrible. Like I never wanted to put you through that again”
“And don’t you think that’s a good sign? That that streak of conscience might be a sign that you’re changing?”
“I guess”
“Did your Dad show any signs of guilt when he picked up that woman?”
“None at all”
“But you did. And that’s where you’re different from him Shane”
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I’m speechless . . . Alls I can says is, “Your ass betta continue!”, LMFAO . . . But seriously, I’m still lovin’ it, continue, for me . . . LYLAS :-P
The converation between Shane and Carmen was perfect!!!! Really great job!!!
I, too, am speechless. Thanks for the chapter.
i start reading this story and i can’t stop to read and suddenly i read this last chapter. this is very very good! i hope Tina and Bette find the way to work out things together! congrats
Tina seems to have come around, but she was so nuts before, I still have my doubts. Glad Bette does too.
Thanks for the chapter. Please Post Soon I really like this story
Lets hope Tina’s not having temporary memory lapse, and finds her way back to Bette. It would be so nice to have a happy ending. Now Henry, man I’d love to take that guy out. Carmen and Shane, way to go.
Henry isn’t very smart the more bad thing he said about Bette the more Tina will see her in a different light. Let him keep running his mouth and Tina will run. Now necessarly back to Bette but darn close. Love Carmen and Shane thanks
really great chapter – all though I’m amazed that Carmen could forgive so quickly. And although I’m glad Tina returned I understand Bette’s suspicions Tina is not the most stable woman and seems unable to communicate how she feels without acting out . although obviously Bette is her partner in that arena as well.
I’m actually paying attention to Sharmen, which is a first to me, and the B&T thing hurts like no other… but I hope they find a way, even if I can’t quite forgive this Tina yet.
omg absoloutly amazing i think this is how season 4 should definitly start way to go and please post again son.
Hey BealsBaby – welcome back, I’m so happy to see you’re writing again. I simply loved “The girl with the Diamond…..” and if this turns out to be a happy B&T story, then I’ll definitely also love this one. Because you write so great and with so much emotion, that I’m really touched with every post.
Hey there BB. Its been a long long time. I just popped back and there you were. You have made my night. Its been great to read another one of your fan fictions. I thought you were lost forever in the land of love!! I really enjoyed reading this one (even 6 months after it was posted) Lovely story. Thanks for coming back. Read you soon x
Hey BB, I just finish all the chapters and loving it. Happy for Shane and Carmen. Goor start for B&T and hope you will bring B&T back together soon. Please post soon, thanks!
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