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Rebuilding 6
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“I’m just so scared of hurting you”
“Shane, I’m a big girl. I can take little bits of hurt. But being without you hurt me more than anything. It hurt me far more than you cheating on me”
“It did?” Shane looked surprised.
Carmen nodded.
“God I’m so sorry” Shane pulled Carmen close to her and kissed her on the forehead.
“But you, that’s one of the reasons I love you”
“What is?”
“The reasons for you leaving me. Somewhere in that crazed head of yours you thought you were saving me”
“Believe me, the last thing in the world I wanted to do was hurt you”
“You just went about it really the wrong way baby”
“I know. I see that now”
Carmen shifted her body so that she was lying between Shane’s legs and leant down to kiss her gently. Their lips met, and the fire from the night before was definitely still there. Tongues probed further, seeking the comfort of one anothers mouths. Shane slid her hands slowly but firmly down Carmen’s back until she reached her ass. Carmen sat up suddenly.
“Uh uh” she tutted “you can wait for that”
Shane groaned but made no effort to resume her movements.
“I’m DJing at Milk tonight…if you’d like to come?” Carmen said standing up.
“I would love to”
“Good. Then get up” she slapped Shane playfully “and get your skinny ass back to Bette’s so she doesn’t think you’ve committed suicide or something”
“Alright alright”
Begrudgingly Shane got up and headed for the door.
“I’ll see you tonight though baby” she gazed at Carmen.
“One second” Carmen moved to Shane and planted a lingering kiss on her lips “just so you don’t forget”
Shane grinned “How could I ever forget a kiss like that?”
“I love you”
“I love you more” and with that Shane headed out the door.
As she walked back into Bette’s house, the smile on Shane’s face was evident. Bette stood up to greet her.
“Good night?” she asked with a smile.
“Yeah, I’d say so” Shane answered coyly.
“And…?”
“I think things are gonna be ok”
“And what does that mean?”
“Well nothing’s really concrete yet. But we’re on our way back. I just have to show her she can trust me not to leave her again”
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I’m speechless . . . Alls I can says is, “Your ass betta continue!”, LMFAO . . . But seriously, I’m still lovin’ it, continue, for me . . . LYLAS :-P
The converation between Shane and Carmen was perfect!!!! Really great job!!!
I, too, am speechless. Thanks for the chapter.
i start reading this story and i can’t stop to read and suddenly i read this last chapter. this is very very good! i hope Tina and Bette find the way to work out things together! congrats
Tina seems to have come around, but she was so nuts before, I still have my doubts. Glad Bette does too.
Thanks for the chapter. Please Post Soon I really like this story
Lets hope Tina’s not having temporary memory lapse, and finds her way back to Bette. It would be so nice to have a happy ending. Now Henry, man I’d love to take that guy out. Carmen and Shane, way to go.
Henry isn’t very smart the more bad thing he said about Bette the more Tina will see her in a different light. Let him keep running his mouth and Tina will run. Now necessarly back to Bette but darn close. Love Carmen and Shane thanks
really great chapter – all though I’m amazed that Carmen could forgive so quickly. And although I’m glad Tina returned I understand Bette’s suspicions Tina is not the most stable woman and seems unable to communicate how she feels without acting out . although obviously Bette is her partner in that arena as well.
I’m actually paying attention to Sharmen, which is a first to me, and the B&T thing hurts like no other… but I hope they find a way, even if I can’t quite forgive this Tina yet.
omg absoloutly amazing i think this is how season 4 should definitly start way to go and please post again son.
Hey BealsBaby – welcome back, I’m so happy to see you’re writing again. I simply loved “The girl with the Diamond…..” and if this turns out to be a happy B&T story, then I’ll definitely also love this one. Because you write so great and with so much emotion, that I’m really touched with every post.
Hey there BB. Its been a long long time. I just popped back and there you were. You have made my night. Its been great to read another one of your fan fictions. I thought you were lost forever in the land of love!! I really enjoyed reading this one (even 6 months after it was posted) Lovely story. Thanks for coming back. Read you soon x
Hey BB, I just finish all the chapters and loving it. Happy for Shane and Carmen. Goor start for B&T and hope you will bring B&T back together soon. Please post soon, thanks!
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