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Stained – Chapter 15 part 1
Previously
‘Why hasn’t Tina called me? She could have at least sent me a note. I fucking bared my soul – well, to me it felt like it – and she just plain ignores me, damn it! I did write that I would give her space if she needed it, but she could have let me know… something. Anything! And why do I even fucking care about her? Straight and bloody fucking taken!’
Bette’s phone rang.
"Hello," Bette sighed apathetically.
Suddenly she seemed to wake up from her melancholia and her eyes became alert again.
"Tina? Where are you? Is everything alright?"
Chapter 15
Bette was worried. Tina’s voice sounded shaky. Tina’s answer came in the form of a confused ramble.
"Yes…no. I don’t know. I’m sorry for calling you, Bette."
Bette’s heart sank. She had been waiting all week to hear from Tina, but now that her wish had finally been granted, it didn’t seem like it was going to be the mood lifter she had hoped it to be. Bette was too vulnerable right now to deal with the rejection she felt coming. But there was something in Tina’s voice that made her keep quiet and wait for Tina to speak again.
"No, I’m sorry for not calling you before. I just…"
Bette heard Tina’s voice break and be replaced by soft sobs. As much as she wanted to be mad at Tina for the silence, she felt the ice around her heart melt away at the sound of those quiet sobs. And she knew in that instant that she would do anything to make them stop and bring a smile back onto the delicate blonde’s face. Also, Bette was beginning to get really worried.
"T, did something happen? You’re not hurt, are you?"
When Tina failed to form a response in actual English and the sobs grew louder, Bette made a decision.
"Where are you right now, T? Are you at your apartment?"
Bette could make out something close to a ‘yes’ between the sobs, still increasing in volume, which, by the way, were breaking Bette’s heart. How could this woman, whom she had met such a short time ago, affect her so much?
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Hey, I’m first! Hahaha, sorry. Damn, only 2 pages. :S I apologize!
yay ive missed this story
yeah! doin my little happy dance to see you posted another chapter, i thought i might have missed it, so i kept going back pages to check!!!!i missed this story, don’t make us wait too long!!!!!
“Hey, I’m first!” ROFLMAO!!!!!!!You´re Hilarious!!!!!!!!Damm, only 2 pages….but you´re forgiven young lady, Glad to see you back! you made my day xD.
You write really well especially (Not trying to sound patronizing) for an 18 yr. old. You’re entering medical school @ 18 w/o going for an undergrad degree? You must be a freakin’ genius. No wonder you write so well. Keep the story coming.
I’ve really missed this story…congrats!!!! The world needs more women doctors!!!! Oh, and lets get going on another chapter, Please!!!
Yeah, talk then kiss. or maybe kiss then talk. whatever, don’t left out kiss. =P
Great Chapter. But way to short. Thank you Good Luck with School
YAY! You’re back! I really hope this is going to go the direction we all want it to. Can’t wait for more and welcome back! (and congrats!)
i was wondering where u have left to..glad ur back …please post soon and maybe longer ; )
So glad your back and all in one piece! Congrats on your graduation, birthday, and starting med school in the fall! Wow! I love this story and your writing. I’m continuing to hope as you suggested; thus I hope Tina has something good to tell Bette here. You do realize how frustrating it is when you drop the story right in the middle of a life-altering conversation, right? Of course you do – that’s why you did it! LOL! Can’t wait for more!
You left me there, Mrs. Lambert! You had me there, on the edge of my seat, and you left me there!
Oh boy am I glad to see an update to this story! Yipppppiiiiieeeee! It is pure torture waiting, wanting and craving for even the smallest crumb. LOL! But, hey… I’ll take whatever you give me. Thanks for the update. I am excited about how this relationship will progress. It is very endearing to see someone who we may think is very confident, actually stutter and become a rambling idiot like us mere unknown mortals. I love Bette in this story. She is so adorable when she is nervous. I could just hug her! Please, update soon.
Who the hell is this Nocturnal person? j/k YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY new chapter! *does a happy dance and almost trips on a cat toy* Dammit! Note to self: Don’t dance at my parents’ house ever again.
Let the love journey begin!
i really missed this story, bring on another chapter quick if you want avoid some rotten tomatoes and no hiding place will save you
hey glad you are back. I like Tina taking charge in this story, bec bette is acting so un alpha right now!
Yay Your BACK! Now post soon.
Glad you’re back..I’ve miss the history…and….oh, what the hell! I’ve missed you too…!!!jeje….well I hope you post more frecuently now…Take care!
AWWW Man, you are going to make me wait to see what Tina is going to say about the you know what. Congratulations on your final grade and happy that you are heading for med school. I need a doctor about now since I have crawled over the hill and am falling quickly down that damn slippery slope.
I can’t wait to see what Tina says to Bette now that they are finally going to talk or will Tina let her actions do the talking for her. Post soon NOC!
Good chapter. Glad David is ok and now let see Bette and Tina talk!!!!!!!!!!
LMFAO You were the first to comment on your own story… God youre funny noct LMFAO! Great chapter… This is really a great story! Keep the chappies coming! GEFELICITEERD!
you are back with this story! is so good! hey congrats for you notes! and i hope you will have a great time in medicine school!
damn man make it longer
Congratulation on your good grades. thought you had forgotten us thanks
BTW I’m very glad that David is alright!!!
Hey glad to have you back, I’ve missed this wonderful story. Congrats with the exams and the birthday, I hope you had a great vacation :o)) I feel like repeating oneself but WHAT A CLIFFY!!!! You better post soon or I’ll have to make to trip and hunt you down LOL. I loved how Tina took charge in the end. More soon please….