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Stained – Chapter 15 part 1
"Stay there, okay? I can be there in 20 minutes."
When Tina had promised she would, Bette hung up the phone and saw her friends giving her concerned looks.
"Is everything alright with Tina?" Dana voiced what was on everybody’s mind.
"I’m not sure." Bette answered and bit her lip. "I’m going over there right now to find out."
"Do you want us to come with you?" offered Alice.
"No, this is something I have to do alone, but thanks for offering. And thank you all for putting up with me. I know I haven’t been the best company lately."
"Don’t worry about it. We’ll put with your moods anytime." Dana assured Bette, which earned her an elbow between her ribs from Alice.
"Ouch! What did I do?"
"Now, go get your woman!" Shane cut her friends off and gave Bette a reassuring smile.
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Bette had never in her life been more grateful for the light traffic. She was speeding but getting a ticket was the last thing on her mind right now. It seemed to take her forever to reach Tina’s apartment but as she turned another corner, she finally saw Tina’s apartment block appear.
When Bette had parked her car, she saw the door to the apartments slowly closing after one of the residents had gone inside. She made a mad dash for it and once inside realized she didn’t have a clue which apartment Tina lived in. Wait, she had had the flowers delivered to it.
‘Come on, brain, you can do it!’
The decisive answer was not provided by her brain but by the mailbox with T. Kennard and the apartment number on it. Bette wasn’t feeling patient enough for the elevator so she sprinted up the stairs. She was panting a little when knocking on the door to Tina’s apartment.
It took the door ten painstaking seconds to swing open and reveal Tina’s tear stricken face. Bette had never seen anyone look as delicate and vulnerable as Tina looked right now.
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(59 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
Hey, I’m first! Hahaha, sorry. Damn, only 2 pages. :S I apologize!
yay ive missed this story
yeah! doin my little happy dance to see you posted another chapter, i thought i might have missed it, so i kept going back pages to check!!!!i missed this story, don’t make us wait too long!!!!!
“Hey, I’m first!” ROFLMAO!!!!!!!You´re Hilarious!!!!!!!!Damm, only 2 pages….but you´re forgiven young lady, Glad to see you back! you made my day xD.
You write really well especially (Not trying to sound patronizing) for an 18 yr. old. You’re entering medical school @ 18 w/o going for an undergrad degree? You must be a freakin’ genius. No wonder you write so well. Keep the story coming.
I’ve really missed this story…congrats!!!! The world needs more women doctors!!!! Oh, and lets get going on another chapter, Please!!!
Yeah, talk then kiss. or maybe kiss then talk. whatever, don’t left out kiss. =P
Great Chapter. But way to short. Thank you Good Luck with School
YAY! You’re back! I really hope this is going to go the direction we all want it to. Can’t wait for more and welcome back! (and congrats!)
i was wondering where u have left to..glad ur back …please post soon and maybe longer ; )
So glad your back and all in one piece! Congrats on your graduation, birthday, and starting med school in the fall! Wow! I love this story and your writing. I’m continuing to hope as you suggested; thus I hope Tina has something good to tell Bette here. You do realize how frustrating it is when you drop the story right in the middle of a life-altering conversation, right? Of course you do – that’s why you did it! LOL! Can’t wait for more!
You left me there, Mrs. Lambert! You had me there, on the edge of my seat, and you left me there!
Oh boy am I glad to see an update to this story! Yipppppiiiiieeeee! It is pure torture waiting, wanting and craving for even the smallest crumb. LOL! But, hey… I’ll take whatever you give me. Thanks for the update. I am excited about how this relationship will progress. It is very endearing to see someone who we may think is very confident, actually stutter and become a rambling idiot like us mere unknown mortals. I love Bette in this story. She is so adorable when she is nervous. I could just hug her! Please, update soon.
Who the hell is this Nocturnal person? j/k YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY new chapter! *does a happy dance and almost trips on a cat toy* Dammit! Note to self: Don’t dance at my parents’ house ever again.
Let the love journey begin!
i really missed this story, bring on another chapter quick if you want avoid some rotten tomatoes and no hiding place will save you
hey glad you are back. I like Tina taking charge in this story, bec bette is acting so un alpha right now!
Yay Your BACK! Now post soon.
Glad you’re back..I’ve miss the history…and….oh, what the hell! I’ve missed you too…!!!jeje….well I hope you post more frecuently now…Take care!
AWWW Man, you are going to make me wait to see what Tina is going to say about the you know what. Congratulations on your final grade and happy that you are heading for med school. I need a doctor about now since I have crawled over the hill and am falling quickly down that damn slippery slope.
I can’t wait to see what Tina says to Bette now that they are finally going to talk or will Tina let her actions do the talking for her. Post soon NOC!
Good chapter. Glad David is ok and now let see Bette and Tina talk!!!!!!!!!!
LMFAO You were the first to comment on your own story… God youre funny noct LMFAO! Great chapter… This is really a great story! Keep the chappies coming! GEFELICITEERD!
you are back with this story! is so good! hey congrats for you notes! and i hope you will have a great time in medicine school!
damn man make it longer
Congratulation on your good grades. thought you had forgotten us thanks
BTW I’m very glad that David is alright!!!
Hey glad to have you back, I’ve missed this wonderful story. Congrats with the exams and the birthday, I hope you had a great vacation :o)) I feel like repeating oneself but WHAT A CLIFFY!!!! You better post soon or I’ll have to make to trip and hunt you down LOL. I loved how Tina took charge in the end. More soon please….