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Stained – Chapter 15 part 1
"Can I come in?" Bette softly asked.
Tina just nodded and took a step back into the apartment. Bette closed the door behind her and followed Tina to the living room. The first thing Bette noticed was how cozy the room looked. She didn’t mean cozy in the way a real estate agent would use it as a euphemism for small or cozy as in messy. No, this room felt like a home. It wasn’t just the sum total of its parts, there was something else. It had to do with the paraphernalia; the pictures of what Bette assumed were friends and family, the numerous books lying around and the two small paintings hanging not quite symmetrically on the wall. Normally, something like that would have bothered Bette the Perfectionist, but in this case she found it endearing. The whole room was just so… Tina. That would certainly explain why Bette instantly felt at home instead of out of place, like she usually did in other people’s houses.
Tina still hadn’t said a word; she just stood in the middle of the room looking rather lost. She didn’t seem to be physically hurt, which was a relief, but Bette still had no clue what had Tina so upset.
"Do you want to talk about it?"
Tina turned her face away and Bette saw another tear make its way down the blonde’s cheek.
There was a stingy feeling in Bette’s heart. It actually hurt her to see Tina so upset. She walked over the object of her affection and put her arms around her, enveloping Tina in a tender hug. Bette felt how Tina slowly gave in to the hug and softly started sobbing again. She was no longer holding back and clung to Bette as a drowning person would to a lifebuoy.
Bette, although still in the dark about the reason for Tina’s sorrow, sensed that Tina just needed to be held right now. Bette could do that. She softly rubbed Tina’s back and whispered in her ear the things people sometimes need to hear, like that everything was going to be just fine.
Bette would normally feel like a fraud when offering those words to someone in distress, because when you have no idea what is wrong, how can you promise someone that everything is going to be alright? She knew it wasn’t supposed to hold value, just calm someone down, but it still felt really empty to her. Not this time, though. This time Bette knew that even if things were far from fine, she would still do everything in her power to make them alright again. This time the words didn’t feel empty.
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Hey, I’m first! Hahaha, sorry. Damn, only 2 pages. :S I apologize!
yay ive missed this story
yeah! doin my little happy dance to see you posted another chapter, i thought i might have missed it, so i kept going back pages to check!!!!i missed this story, don’t make us wait too long!!!!!
“Hey, I’m first!” ROFLMAO!!!!!!!You´re Hilarious!!!!!!!!Damm, only 2 pages….but you´re forgiven young lady, Glad to see you back! you made my day xD.
You write really well especially (Not trying to sound patronizing) for an 18 yr. old. You’re entering medical school @ 18 w/o going for an undergrad degree? You must be a freakin’ genius. No wonder you write so well. Keep the story coming.
I’ve really missed this story…congrats!!!! The world needs more women doctors!!!! Oh, and lets get going on another chapter, Please!!!
Yeah, talk then kiss. or maybe kiss then talk. whatever, don’t left out kiss. =P
Great Chapter. But way to short. Thank you Good Luck with School
YAY! You’re back! I really hope this is going to go the direction we all want it to. Can’t wait for more and welcome back! (and congrats!)
i was wondering where u have left to..glad ur back …please post soon and maybe longer ; )
So glad your back and all in one piece! Congrats on your graduation, birthday, and starting med school in the fall! Wow! I love this story and your writing. I’m continuing to hope as you suggested; thus I hope Tina has something good to tell Bette here. You do realize how frustrating it is when you drop the story right in the middle of a life-altering conversation, right? Of course you do – that’s why you did it! LOL! Can’t wait for more!
You left me there, Mrs. Lambert! You had me there, on the edge of my seat, and you left me there!
Oh boy am I glad to see an update to this story! Yipppppiiiiieeeee! It is pure torture waiting, wanting and craving for even the smallest crumb. LOL! But, hey… I’ll take whatever you give me. Thanks for the update. I am excited about how this relationship will progress. It is very endearing to see someone who we may think is very confident, actually stutter and become a rambling idiot like us mere unknown mortals. I love Bette in this story. She is so adorable when she is nervous. I could just hug her! Please, update soon.
Who the hell is this Nocturnal person? j/k YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY new chapter! *does a happy dance and almost trips on a cat toy* Dammit! Note to self: Don’t dance at my parents’ house ever again.
Let the love journey begin!
i really missed this story, bring on another chapter quick if you want avoid some rotten tomatoes and no hiding place will save you
hey glad you are back. I like Tina taking charge in this story, bec bette is acting so un alpha right now!
Yay Your BACK! Now post soon.
Glad you’re back..I’ve miss the history…and….oh, what the hell! I’ve missed you too…!!!jeje….well I hope you post more frecuently now…Take care!
AWWW Man, you are going to make me wait to see what Tina is going to say about the you know what. Congratulations on your final grade and happy that you are heading for med school. I need a doctor about now since I have crawled over the hill and am falling quickly down that damn slippery slope.
I can’t wait to see what Tina says to Bette now that they are finally going to talk or will Tina let her actions do the talking for her. Post soon NOC!
Good chapter. Glad David is ok and now let see Bette and Tina talk!!!!!!!!!!
LMFAO You were the first to comment on your own story… God youre funny noct LMFAO! Great chapter… This is really a great story! Keep the chappies coming! GEFELICITEERD!
you are back with this story! is so good! hey congrats for you notes! and i hope you will have a great time in medicine school!
damn man make it longer
Congratulation on your good grades. thought you had forgotten us thanks
BTW I’m very glad that David is alright!!!
Hey glad to have you back, I’ve missed this wonderful story. Congrats with the exams and the birthday, I hope you had a great vacation :o)) I feel like repeating oneself but WHAT A CLIFFY!!!! You better post soon or I’ll have to make to trip and hunt you down LOL. I loved how Tina took charge in the end. More soon please….