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    A Thin Line – Chpt 21

    Story written on June 21, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helebette – Tuesday night – In the pool

    Previously

    Placing my hands firmly against her buttocks as I knelt, I positioned my tongue between hers legs and licked one long stroke between her lips.

    “Oh, fuck,” Bette cried out, her body jerking and her knees buckling. I held her ass tightly as I continued to lick and began to nibble her clit. “God, that feels so good…”

    Bette was interrupted by the sound of my ringing telephone inside the house.

    “Damn!” I cried. “Bloody phones!”

    “You better answer it, Helena. It could be important. Your children,” Bette said, helping me up.

    “I’m sorry, Bette.”

    “Don’t be.”

    I quickly retrieved my robe off the deck and ran inside.

    Chapter 21

    When Helena ran in to answer the phone, she left me with a throbbing ache. And I felt ridiculous standing there naked and alone, especially as I reached between my legs to massage myself.

    Fuck! This woman had awakened within me an intense burning desire, a passion that I had not experienced in months upon months. It was as if I were under a spell.

    Helena had made me feel alive and happy. And I actually delighted in relinquishing control to her, to someone who was so strong and capable and who could take care of me so exceptionally, so artfully. It was thrilling the way she made me feel so desired. So sexy. And so adored. She softened me. And I was thoroughly enjoying it.

    At the moment, however, unless I wanted Helena to return to find me pleasuring myself poolside, I needed to do something to try to drown my immediate craving. I removed my hand from between my legs and walked towards the water. The moonlight shimmered across it. Standing on the edge of the pool, I drew up my arms and plunged headlong into the deep, cool liquid.

    After swimming several laps, I floated on my back hoping for Helena’s quick return. I closed my eyes, stroked through the water, and imagined making love to her on the beach.

    “May I join you?”

    I looked up to see Helena, still naked, leaning over to place some towels on a chair. Standing upright, she smiled at me and made her way down the steps into the pool.

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    1. She just looked at me lovingly, and softly said my name, “Bette,” as I came…………..this is the kind of sensuality that makes my spider senses tingle. Loved it!! Thank Gawwwd no damn phones were ringing this time. As far as Bette getting caught pleasing herself, I think Helena would have liked seeing that; before joining in -_-

    2. Oh, how I love your posts. I love your story and the subtle desire, love & sensuality that exudes from it. Please keep writing – this is one of my favourites:)

    3. These girls got it going on. It just the right mixture of eroticism, sensuality, abandon and love. NC-17s are difficult to write but you make it look easy.

    4. I think this should win that award for needing a cold shower after it. This is so wonderfully done, and the desire between the two of them is almost palpable through your descriptions. I love this story, really really. Even with the smallest of updates it still satisfies! Yay!

    6. Looks like Bette is falling for this woman…good for her. As much as I love hot sex scenes, I’m also a fan of intrigue, suspense and drama. Isn’t it about time for Tina to stir up the pot a little? Just wishful thinking on my part. :)

    7. Isn’t it about time for Tina to stir up the pot a little? Just wishful thinking on my part. :)……………ROFLAMO……….wishful thinking on mine too!!

    10. per a few other comments, tina would add some drama…but remember, she is the ex and she has to stay that way…EX. more b&h..post soon…LOVE your story and writing…you are FANTASTIC!

    15. OK, you just put me in about $40,000 in debt. I have to get a pool! (but we can only have built in pools in our neighborhood) Your story is so hot. Nice job. Looking forward to the beach scene!!!!!!!

    16. Good grief woman that was HOT! Looking very forward to the beach scene and also the Art Gallery, I just love how you write them together. Thank you.

    17. Have to agree with Bette that getting caught pleasuring herself might not promote harmony in her relationship with Helena. Unless that sort of thing is specifically requested, it could easily be interpreted as criticism or mania. Anyway, Helena came quickly to the rescue, thus Bette came quickly. It’s so nice when things work out neatly.

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