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A Thin Line – Chpt 21
I swam underwater towards the shallow end to meet her.
Helena stood in water up to the bottom of her breasts. When I reached her, I wrapped my arm around her waist and circled her before surfacing. I stood in front of her and Helena helped me to wipe the wet hair and excess moisture from my face. Then she wrapped her arms around me and pulled our bodies together closely, sliding her elegant nipples back and forth against my wet breasts. I kissed her hard and long. My tongue went wild in her mouth. I couldn’t get close enough to her. And I squeezed her tightly.
“Did you miss me?” Helena asked breathlessly, when she at last drew away.
She smoothed her hand over my hair lovingly.
“Not one bit,” I murmured, fingering her erect nipples with my left hand, while looking in her eyes.
“I can tell,” she said.
“Who was on the phone?” I asked quietly.
“Mummy,” she whispered. “She’s definitely planning to visit so she can attend the gallery event Thursday night.”
“So it was good news,” I affirmed, speaking softly, holding the side of Helena’s face, and rubbing my thumb over her lips and across her cheek.
Helena closed her eyes and nuzzled her face into my hand. “Mmm-hmm.” She lingered there, her eyes closed, her face nestled in my hand. I caressed her cheek gently, admiring her tender expression.
After a few moments she opened her eyes and tilted her head upright. Reaching up, she stroked my face with the back of her hand. “I told Mummy you’d be escorting me to the exhibit. Is that alright, Bette?” Helena asked.
I smiled, secretly pleased that she’d felt excited to share with her mother that she was seeing me.
“Of course,” I answered.
“She sounded quite thrilled. Elated actually. And anxious to see you,” Helena continued, twirling her fingers in my wet hair. “I told her, though, that she had called at an inopportune time. That I was in the middle of fucking you with my tongue. And I had to get back to you right away.”
I gasped, “What? Helena, you didn’t!”
Helena smiled broadly. “No, I didn’t.”
“You are so bad!” I said, laughing.
“Well, at any rate, she is looking forward to the three of us spending some time together,” Helena said.
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She just looked at me lovingly, and softly said my name, “Bette,” as I came…………..this is the kind of sensuality that makes my spider senses tingle. Loved it!! Thank Gawwwd no damn phones were ringing this time. As far as Bette getting caught pleasing herself, I think Helena would have liked seeing that; before joining in -_-
Oh, how I love your posts. I love your story and the subtle desire, love & sensuality that exudes from it. Please keep writing – this is one of my favourites:)
These girls got it going on. It just the right mixture of eroticism, sensuality, abandon and love. NC-17s are difficult to write but you make it look easy.
I think this should win that award for needing a cold shower after it. This is so wonderfully done, and the desire between the two of them is almost palpable through your descriptions. I love this story, really really. Even with the smallest of updates it still satisfies! Yay!
Oooh more, more…soon!
Looks like Bette is falling for this woman…good for her. As much as I love hot sex scenes, I’m also a fan of intrigue, suspense and drama. Isn’t it about time for Tina to stir up the pot a little? Just wishful thinking on my part. :)
Isn’t it about time for Tina to stir up the pot a little? Just wishful thinking on my part. :)……………ROFLAMO……….wishful thinking on mine too!!
well that was a sexy chapter. I was wondering about that tina situation as well
sweeeeet
per a few other comments, tina would add some drama…but remember, she is the ex and she has to stay that way…EX. more b&h..post soon…LOVE your story and writing…you are FANTASTIC!
I have to admit that I’m not a Bette/ Helena fan, but this story is HOT. Keep up the sensual story telling. Post again soon.
So sexy, sensual and hot!!
As always, it is a pleasure to read. You’re doing very well with this story. Keep it up, please.
Great, just great. Keep going on girl
OK, you just put me in about $40,000 in debt. I have to get a pool! (but we can only have built in pools in our neighborhood) Your story is so hot. Nice job. Looking forward to the beach scene!!!!!!!
Good grief woman that was HOT! Looking very forward to the beach scene and also the Art Gallery, I just love how you write them together. Thank you.
Have to agree with Bette that getting caught pleasuring herself might not promote harmony in her relationship with Helena. Unless that sort of thing is specifically requested, it could easily be interpreted as criticism or mania. Anyway, Helena came quickly to the rescue, thus Bette came quickly. It’s so nice when things work out neatly.
Ooh lovely chapter, Zheese! Thanks! ^_^