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A Thin Line – Chpt 21
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“Perhaps we can have dinner with her,” I suggested.
“Perhaps. We’ll see,” she replied, and then changed the subject. “So, Bette, my darling, what suddenly possessed you to take a swim this fine starry night?” Helena let loose of my hair and ran her hand down my back, into the water, and over my ass. She pressed our pelvises together and swayed against me. Kneading her hand down my crack, she plied her fingers between my legs from behind and teased my opening.
“God, you drive me crazy when you do that,” I whispered, closing my eyes and rolling my head. My heart was racing.
“I know,” she replied, laughing lightly, quite pleased with herself. “When I went to answer Mummy’s call, did I leave you frustrated and full of desire? Hmm?” Helena grabbed my lips with hers and kissed me. Lapping my neck with her tongue, she continued her interrogation between licks, “Is that why you jumped in the water? To cool off? Hmm? Because you missed me?”
“Mmm-hmm,” I managed to utter.
“Ah, so you did miss me,” she said victoriously.
I was writhing under her touch as she licked and sucked my neck and flicked her tongue in my ear. The water splashed and sloshed against us. Helena floated me back against the wall, and kissed me fervently. She let go of my lips with her mouth and licked down my neck to my breasts. I rested my arms out to each side, on the edge of the pool. Helena took one nipple in her mouth and sucked, while pushing up with her hand against my clit. She massaged me firmly and I lay my head back. She moaned continuously as she sucked and licked my nipple.
“Oh, God, Helena!” My head rolled back and forth. “I love to hear you moan. I love what you’re doing to me.”
She moved to the other nipple and ran her tongue over and around it. She bit and nibbled it gently, scraping it with her teeth. My legs were spread as Helena continued her skillful manipulation between them. She stroked and rubbed and circled.
“Oh, fuck,” I breathed.
Helena let go of my hard nipple, and asked softly, “ Am I pleasing you, Bette?”
“Oh, God, yes,” I breathed heavily. I pulled my head forward, and Helena looked in my eyes. “Kiss me. Kiss me, please.”
When she did, she thrust her tongue in my mouth and simultaneously entered me with her middle finger. Pulling back, she looked in my eyes while her finger danced rhythmically inside me. I could feel myself getting close and shut my eyes. When I opened them, I could see that Helena wanted to tell me something. But she didn’t. She just looked at me lovingly, and softly said my name, “Bette,” as I came. Then she kissed me and held me tightly as my spasms dissipated.
My arms were wrapped around Helena’s neck, my mouth next to her ear.
“I want to make love to you on the beach,” I whispered. “Right now. Just you and me, the stars and the moonlight, the sand and the sea.”
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She just looked at me lovingly, and softly said my name, “Bette,” as I came…………..this is the kind of sensuality that makes my spider senses tingle. Loved it!! Thank Gawwwd no damn phones were ringing this time. As far as Bette getting caught pleasing herself, I think Helena would have liked seeing that; before joining in -_-
Oh, how I love your posts. I love your story and the subtle desire, love & sensuality that exudes from it. Please keep writing – this is one of my favourites:)
These girls got it going on. It just the right mixture of eroticism, sensuality, abandon and love. NC-17s are difficult to write but you make it look easy.
I think this should win that award for needing a cold shower after it. This is so wonderfully done, and the desire between the two of them is almost palpable through your descriptions. I love this story, really really. Even with the smallest of updates it still satisfies! Yay!
Oooh more, more…soon!
Looks like Bette is falling for this woman…good for her. As much as I love hot sex scenes, I’m also a fan of intrigue, suspense and drama. Isn’t it about time for Tina to stir up the pot a little? Just wishful thinking on my part. :)
Isn’t it about time for Tina to stir up the pot a little? Just wishful thinking on my part. :)……………ROFLAMO……….wishful thinking on mine too!!
well that was a sexy chapter. I was wondering about that tina situation as well
sweeeeet
per a few other comments, tina would add some drama…but remember, she is the ex and she has to stay that way…EX. more b&h..post soon…LOVE your story and writing…you are FANTASTIC!
I have to admit that I’m not a Bette/ Helena fan, but this story is HOT. Keep up the sensual story telling. Post again soon.
So sexy, sensual and hot!!
As always, it is a pleasure to read. You’re doing very well with this story. Keep it up, please.
Great, just great. Keep going on girl
OK, you just put me in about $40,000 in debt. I have to get a pool! (but we can only have built in pools in our neighborhood) Your story is so hot. Nice job. Looking forward to the beach scene!!!!!!!
Good grief woman that was HOT! Looking very forward to the beach scene and also the Art Gallery, I just love how you write them together. Thank you.
Have to agree with Bette that getting caught pleasuring herself might not promote harmony in her relationship with Helena. Unless that sort of thing is specifically requested, it could easily be interpreted as criticism or mania. Anyway, Helena came quickly to the rescue, thus Bette came quickly. It’s so nice when things work out neatly.
Ooh lovely chapter, Zheese! Thanks! ^_^