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A Thin Line – Chpt 22
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Previously
Helena let go of my hard nipple, and asked softly, “ Am I pleasing you, Bette?”
“Oh, God, yes,” I breathed heavily. I pulled my head forward, and Helena looked in my eyes. “Kiss me. Kiss me, please.”
When she did, she thrust her tongue in my mouth and simultaneously entered me with her middle finger. Pulling back, she looked in my eyes while her finger danced rhythmically inside me. I could feel myself getting close and shut my eyes. When I opened them, I could see that Helena wanted to tell me something. But she didn’t. She just looked at me lovingly, and softly said my name, “Bette,” as I came. Then she kissed me and held me tightly as my spasms dissipated.
My arms were wrapped around Helena’s neck, my mouth next to her ear.
“I want to make love to you on the beach,” I whispered. “Right now. Just you and me, the stars and the moonlight, the sand and the sea.”
Chapter 22
Bette’s desire to make love to me on the beach was thrilling, and the sentiment endearing.
But having been swept away in the moment, Bette had not stopped to consider that of which I was all too well aware: the cool night air was going to assail us sharply when we exited the heated pool.
“That’s a very romantic notion, Bette,” I whispered into her ear, squeezing her tightly, and running my hands over her back.
She detected the hint of hesitation in my voice.
“Don’t you want me to romance you, Sweetheart?” Bette said softly, kissing my neck just below my ear, and licking my lobe.
“Oh, Bette,” I whispered, quickly finding her mouth and kissing her passionately. I breathed out, “Yes. Yes, oh yes, oh yes, oh yes. I want you to romance me. And, yes, I want you to make love with me on the beach, but…”
Before I could relate the impracticality of her plan, Bette grabbed my lips and kissed me again. Then she leaned back and smiled. Our eyes met and danced with desire.
“Let’s get out of here before we both turn into prunes,” Bette said, taking me by the hand and leading us towards the pool steps.
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zheese…you’ve got the gift. Bring on Tina Queena and the dramah
I so love this story its beautiful please post soon:)
Great update,zheese. Thanks!
How adorable these two are. Though I’m quite envious of their situation, at Chateau Peabody all holed up and making sweet love. *sighs* Sounds like a dream! Also, the Tina drama will come to be on its own time. Can’t rush art. Bellisimo!
Absolutely Beautiful Update…I sooooo love this story!
wow Zheese that was really HOT please post soon again thx
this one is from a big fan of yours very much enjoy your story, your writing is amazing, your ideas are wonderful. You do such a great job at painting a picture for me to envision them before my eyes seeing the story as it unfolds and playing in my minds eye as if it were a normal episode of the show on my television screen. I thoroughly enjoy the warmth and realism you inject into the characters, I love the voice you give them. This story is yet another reason why Bette and Helena are absolutely the dream couple to B together on the show, if I were not already a staunch BeLena fan, this story would have certainly converted me from whatever ship I was previously on. Thank you for continuing to share you amazing gift with us, you are an amazing writer and I can’t wait for more of this incredible journey. -Bealsfan
I love this story. I don’t care if Tina is around or not. I just care about Bette and Helena. I guess I’m just a little sour on Tina these days. Bette needs to have some fun.
I love your Bette and Helena ~ they are HOT together! Bring Tina into the fold whenever you’re ready…I’ll keep reading regardless if she’s here or not. Please continue.
Excellent! I totally love this story!
Beautiful… Absolutely beautiful! So sweet and so tender, they are just perfect together, thank you so much for an amazing story!
okay zheese, i ain’t mad atcha’…tina who…who needs her drama with all this love goin’ on…would it be too much to ask for another post this weekend :-)))…you could really feel that helena wants to say the “l” word but is holding back, but it seems as though bette is almost there…OMG…your writing is so full of imagery…excellent…
I’m echoing BeLena’s comment posted above…….word for delicious word!!
Sounds like it’s just about time for them to drop the L-bomb. You said something in your notes about a Tina? Tina who?
These two are so Hot Together !! Forget Tina and let these two develop a relationship. It should be interesting considering they are both so Alpha. Post again soon.
That was very sweet.
Why bring Tina?? its sooo good this way..:D
You just about snuck this one by me z… It makes no never mind to me if Tina enters this storyline or not, although I suppose it would make for some interesting dramatic twists. I surely do enjoy your version of this pairing! Look forward to more whenever you can.
Wow zheese-you definitely have a gift when it comes to writing these two characters. The passion, the tenderness, the heat…..you keep blowing me away chapter by chapter. You also had me laughing on this one w/ Bette thinking she could make love to Helena on the beach and not freeze to death. Just another one of the Porter traits i love-that fighter spirit.
These two are HOT TOGETHER!!!!Looking forward tho Tina and the Drama….Post Soon!