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A Thin Line – Chpt 22
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“Bette, it’s going to be rather chilly when we get out of the water,” I cautioned her.
“No, it’ll just be invigorating,” she replied.
I braced myself and smiled inwardly. Bette was so adorable in her enthusiasm.
Just as I’d warned, the air was brisk and biting when we emerged from the water. And by the time we reached the lounge chair, where I’d placed the oversized beach towels, we were both shivering.
“Fuck! It’s cold,” Bette cried out.
I couldn’t help but laugh as I picked up a towel and wrapped it around both of us.
“Come here. I’ll warm you up, Darling,” I said, pulling Bette close. We huddled together, our naked bodies blanketed together in the giant, terrycloth rectangle. Bette’s teeth chattered. “Oh, Sweetheart, you’re freezing,” I remarked ruefully, running my hand up and down her back briskly in an attempt to warm her. “Bette, we can’t go out on that beach tonight, you’ll catch your death. Come on, we’re going inside.”
“I’m so sorry, Helena,” Bette lamented. “I don’t want to disappoint you.
“Shh-shh,” I quieted her. “You have no reason to apologize, my darling.”
I led Bette inside to the kitchen and had her sit on a stool at the counter. She shivered. Wrapping her tightly in the towel, I hugged her. “Wait here. I’ll be right back with a warm robe for you.”
When I returned dressed in my gown, Bette was pouring two more drinks of the Dalmore, her towel pulled tightly around her.
“I thought this would help warm us up,” she said, turning to offer me a glass.
“Thank you, darling, but set it on the counter, please. I want to get you into this warm robe first,” I replied, holding up the gown and offering her a sleeve for her arm. Bette dropped her towel to the floor, and I slipped her naked body into the plush fabric.
“This is a switch,” Bette commented. “Usually, we’re trying to get the other out of her clothes.”
I laughed, walking in front of her and taking her in my arms. “Don’t worry. I don’t plan on letting you luxuriate in this for long,” I said, rubbing her back and kissing her on the cheek. I picked up a glass of Scotch and handed it to Bette. “Here, drink this. It’ll warm your insides. I’m going to fix you a hot sandwich.”
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zheese…you’ve got the gift. Bring on Tina Queena and the dramah
I so love this story its beautiful please post soon:)
Great update,zheese. Thanks!
How adorable these two are. Though I’m quite envious of their situation, at Chateau Peabody all holed up and making sweet love. *sighs* Sounds like a dream! Also, the Tina drama will come to be on its own time. Can’t rush art. Bellisimo!
Absolutely Beautiful Update…I sooooo love this story!
wow Zheese that was really HOT please post soon again thx
this one is from a big fan of yours very much enjoy your story, your writing is amazing, your ideas are wonderful. You do such a great job at painting a picture for me to envision them before my eyes seeing the story as it unfolds and playing in my minds eye as if it were a normal episode of the show on my television screen. I thoroughly enjoy the warmth and realism you inject into the characters, I love the voice you give them. This story is yet another reason why Bette and Helena are absolutely the dream couple to B together on the show, if I were not already a staunch BeLena fan, this story would have certainly converted me from whatever ship I was previously on. Thank you for continuing to share you amazing gift with us, you are an amazing writer and I can’t wait for more of this incredible journey. -Bealsfan
I love this story. I don’t care if Tina is around or not. I just care about Bette and Helena. I guess I’m just a little sour on Tina these days. Bette needs to have some fun.
I love your Bette and Helena ~ they are HOT together! Bring Tina into the fold whenever you’re ready…I’ll keep reading regardless if she’s here or not. Please continue.
Excellent! I totally love this story!
Beautiful… Absolutely beautiful! So sweet and so tender, they are just perfect together, thank you so much for an amazing story!
okay zheese, i ain’t mad atcha’…tina who…who needs her drama with all this love goin’ on…would it be too much to ask for another post this weekend :-)))…you could really feel that helena wants to say the “l” word but is holding back, but it seems as though bette is almost there…OMG…your writing is so full of imagery…excellent…
I’m echoing BeLena’s comment posted above…….word for delicious word!!
Sounds like it’s just about time for them to drop the L-bomb. You said something in your notes about a Tina? Tina who?
These two are so Hot Together !! Forget Tina and let these two develop a relationship. It should be interesting considering they are both so Alpha. Post again soon.
That was very sweet.
Why bring Tina?? its sooo good this way..:D
You just about snuck this one by me z… It makes no never mind to me if Tina enters this storyline or not, although I suppose it would make for some interesting dramatic twists. I surely do enjoy your version of this pairing! Look forward to more whenever you can.
Wow zheese-you definitely have a gift when it comes to writing these two characters. The passion, the tenderness, the heat…..you keep blowing me away chapter by chapter. You also had me laughing on this one w/ Bette thinking she could make love to Helena on the beach and not freeze to death. Just another one of the Porter traits i love-that fighter spirit.
These two are HOT TOGETHER!!!!Looking forward tho Tina and the Drama….Post Soon!