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A Thin Line – Chpt 22
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“Bette?”
“Hmm?” I answered, licking and sucking under Helena’s ear. She writhed and rolled her head, moaning seductively.
“You were so sweet to want to make love to me on the beach,” she whispered, laying on her back and tugging for me to lay on top of her.
She spread her legs and I stretched out over her, propping myself up so I could sway my nipples back and forth against hers. “I feel completely foolish that I didn’t consider the temperature. I just so wanted to do something romantic for you. Instead, you led me inside, wrapped me in your warm robe, and made something hot for me to eat. You’re the sweet, romantic one,” I said, leaning down to kiss her.
“We can pretend our bed is the beach,” Helena suggested, smiling.
“Hmm? Now why didn’t I think of that?” I mused, grinning and taking her mouth with mine, and rolling and curling my tongue around hers.
“The sand feels gritty against my back, Darling,” Helena jested, when I released her lips.
I laughed and rolled off of her, pulling her with me onto her side. Gently I caressed her breasts and nipples with my fingers before taking them in my mouth to suck. Helena squirmed and moaned and arched her back, pushing herself more deeply into my mouth. This excited me immensely and I became ravenous, licking and sucking hungrily back and forth between each of her dark, beautiful protrusions.
“Have I told you before how beautiful and perfect your breasts are?” I said, looking in her eyes. It was a question not expecting an answer, intended only to express my admiration.
I kissed her again and licked her neck. Her hips rocked gently against me. I moaned and my fingertips ran down Helena’s back, delighting in the softness of her skin. I kneaded her ass and caressed her thighs. And I ran the side of my foot up and down her calf.
“Can you tell yet that I’m crazy about you? That I’m completely head over heels for you, Helena?” I said softly, searching her eyes.
“Oh, Bette,” she whispered lovingly. “I adore you.”
I smiled and slowly lay her on her back, caressing her inner thighs, and slowly working my hand between her moist folds. When I stroked her, touching her clit, she jerked and fluttered.
“Oh, fuck,” she moaned, “I need you.”
I massaged her lovingly as she rocked against my hand.
“You’re so swollen. You feel so good,” I whispered.
Her head rolled back and forth as I attended to her.
“Inside. I need you inside,” she at last said breathlessly.
I entered her with one, then two fingers, pressing against her anterior wall.
“Oh, fuck, Bette,” she cried, her upper body thrusting off the bed, first once, then twice, then three times.
I removed my fingers and pressed against her clit as her body shook, and trembled, and fluttered, then fell back exhaustedly against the pillows. I wrapped my arms around her and kissed her lips. Then I propped myself up and watched her as her breathing slowed. Her eyes were closed. She lay motionless and spent.
“Helena?” I whispered, caressing her face. “Are you alright, Sweetheart? Look at me.”
When Helena finally opened her eyes, a tear ran out.
I gazed at her in amazement.
“I’m sorry,” she whispered, as she began to weep. “I’ve never felt like this before.”
A long-missed emotion swelled in my chest. I quickly pulled her close to me and held her tightly, caressing her cheek with mine.
“Please, don’t be sorry.”
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zheese…you’ve got the gift. Bring on Tina Queena and the dramah
I so love this story its beautiful please post soon:)
Great update,zheese. Thanks!
How adorable these two are. Though I’m quite envious of their situation, at Chateau Peabody all holed up and making sweet love. *sighs* Sounds like a dream! Also, the Tina drama will come to be on its own time. Can’t rush art. Bellisimo!
Absolutely Beautiful Update…I sooooo love this story!
wow Zheese that was really HOT please post soon again thx
this one is from a big fan of yours very much enjoy your story, your writing is amazing, your ideas are wonderful. You do such a great job at painting a picture for me to envision them before my eyes seeing the story as it unfolds and playing in my minds eye as if it were a normal episode of the show on my television screen. I thoroughly enjoy the warmth and realism you inject into the characters, I love the voice you give them. This story is yet another reason why Bette and Helena are absolutely the dream couple to B together on the show, if I were not already a staunch BeLena fan, this story would have certainly converted me from whatever ship I was previously on. Thank you for continuing to share you amazing gift with us, you are an amazing writer and I can’t wait for more of this incredible journey. -Bealsfan
I love this story. I don’t care if Tina is around or not. I just care about Bette and Helena. I guess I’m just a little sour on Tina these days. Bette needs to have some fun.
I love your Bette and Helena ~ they are HOT together! Bring Tina into the fold whenever you’re ready…I’ll keep reading regardless if she’s here or not. Please continue.
Excellent! I totally love this story!
Beautiful… Absolutely beautiful! So sweet and so tender, they are just perfect together, thank you so much for an amazing story!
okay zheese, i ain’t mad atcha’…tina who…who needs her drama with all this love goin’ on…would it be too much to ask for another post this weekend :-)))…you could really feel that helena wants to say the “l” word but is holding back, but it seems as though bette is almost there…OMG…your writing is so full of imagery…excellent…
I’m echoing BeLena’s comment posted above…….word for delicious word!!
Sounds like it’s just about time for them to drop the L-bomb. You said something in your notes about a Tina? Tina who?
These two are so Hot Together !! Forget Tina and let these two develop a relationship. It should be interesting considering they are both so Alpha. Post again soon.
That was very sweet.
Why bring Tina?? its sooo good this way..:D
You just about snuck this one by me z… It makes no never mind to me if Tina enters this storyline or not, although I suppose it would make for some interesting dramatic twists. I surely do enjoy your version of this pairing! Look forward to more whenever you can.
Wow zheese-you definitely have a gift when it comes to writing these two characters. The passion, the tenderness, the heat…..you keep blowing me away chapter by chapter. You also had me laughing on this one w/ Bette thinking she could make love to Helena on the beach and not freeze to death. Just another one of the Porter traits i love-that fighter spirit.
These two are HOT TOGETHER!!!!Looking forward tho Tina and the Drama….Post Soon!