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The Reluctant (chapter 5)
Chapter 5
I woke up the next morning to the sound of Shane’s loud snoring. I hated when she did that. Her, Bette, and Tina were asleep on the floor, wrapped up in lots of colorful blankets, and Dana and I were on the couch, surrounded by pillows. I remembered them coming over last night, Shane saying “that’s one hell of a shiner!” and patting me on the back. We had talked most of the night, about what had happened, and about Dana and Tanya’s wedding, which had kind of brought me down. The dream I’d had came flooding back into my mind.
I was standing at the back of a church, the isles and pews laced with white and yellow flowers. The walls and pillars were made of dark rosewood, complete with gleaming finish. Every single seat was filled, and some fold up chairs were even set up in the back, over-capacitating the church’s maximum amount of people. The usual wedding music began playing, all heads turned to the back of the church, and o0o’s and aah’s filled the air as Dana stood under a flowered arch placed inside the church, directly in back of the pews, where the isle’s rich, dark red carpeting began. She was dressed in an elegant strapless white wedding gown, more of the yellow and white flowers in her hair, which was flowing freely across her shoulders. She had a dazzling smile and waved to me, motioning for me to come over.
“Alice, come on!” She said, her voice sounding wavy, as if we were under water. “You’re supposed to give me away now.” I stepped forward, completely nervous, shaking all over. What was happening? I didn’t remember going over these plans. Wasn’t her dad supposed to give her away?
Her head turned back towards the crowded pews. I reached out to take her hand, but my arm slipped right through her. She began to walk forward. I could see Tanya up at the front of the church with the priest. She was wearing a formal black tie suit, her hair pulled back tightly into a bun. This was wrong.
“Dana! Wait!” I tried to call out, but my voice didn’t make a sound. I ran forward, stopping next to her at the front of the isle. For some reason the priest skipped the whole marriage speech, and the next thing I heard was
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(44 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
that was so nice, both of them realizing they have feelings for eachother. keep it up!
great update. I like it that Dana had been waiting for Alice this whole time. Keep up the good work. post soon.
i really like how you got these two together. please update again.
What took you so long – the perfect response…
awwwwwww how easy was that! they’re soo great together, I’m so happy! Now dana must tell Tonya soon..before anything gets messed up. Great job, please update soon!!
YAYYYY! i’m so proud of alice! i knew Dana felt the same way, you could tell by her keeping the watch al gave her, and the certain things she would do to touch alice..hehe, yay!..good update dork. post soon
hey! yay go Alice, i would be way more into tennis if I had sessions like that! great update… hope Dana tells Tonya and then stands well back! We all know what Tonya’s like lol, keep it coming :)
that was really cute, very nice
GREAT chapter! Danish love makes me so damn happy! I wonder if Dana will be able to get rid of Tonya so easily though!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they’re just so cute together! I love your Danish.
Again another awesome chapter! Dana teaching alice tennis with her arms wrapped around her = hot! My favourite line this time was “Mmm…Dana muscles” again it was just soo alice like =D Keep up the good work!
I feel so sorry for Alice. But she will survive…eventually. Will she be popping pills and act like a crazy stalker in your story? (In my opinion also some of the most painful moments on the show in S3.)
Oops…comment on wrong story. :( I did want to comment on your story though, because I just realized that I’ve been reading this story and never commented. I liked tough Alice. :) And yay, Dana finally realizes Alice has feelings for her! :)