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The Reluctant (chapter 6)
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Chapter 6
Its funny how fucked up things can get in such a short amount of time. You wait for the girl of your dreams for… well, forever, and when you finally realize who she is, she’s taken. Well, I’d made a move on Dana, and I thought it had worked. I mean, she kissed me back, right? Normally that’s good. Apparently not in Dana land. A couple days into our hidden relationship, she gets scared and fucks off, and then I’m right back where I started. You’re all confused, though, aren’t you? I hadn’t gotten that far in my pathetic story. Well, if you really want to know, here’s what happened.
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I slowly climbed out of bed…more like rolled out of bed, tripping over my leg when I realized my foot was sleep. I smoothed out my hair, not really caring about it that much, and made my way to the couch. I flopped down on the soft cushions and flipped on the tv, letting out a yawn. I hadn’t gotten a lot of sleep last night. I was mostly just lying in bed, thinking about the whole new situation with Dana. It had been a whole not so blissful 4 days since we had kissed, and I was starting to get frustrated. She still hadn’t told Tonya, and it was killing me inside, even though I kept telling her to take her time. Every time I saw them together I felt like throwing up. I knew it should be me who was holding her hand, kissing her, wrapping my arms around her. And it was getting worse every day.
“Alice?” I heard a muffled voice call from outside the door. I fell over onto a pillow, not feeling like getting up.
“It’s open!” I shouted back, turning the volume on the tv down. I wasn’t really watching it, but I liked having it on for background noise. I heard the door open and didn’t bother to look to see who it was. I was too tired to care. It’s amazing what effect a relationship can have on sleep. I closed my eyes, letting out another yawn. Thinking about sleep was making me tired.
“Hey there, sleepy.” Dana said, leaning over the couch to place a kiss on my cheek.
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Great stuff! Keep it up, hope you can find the inspiration to keep going.
Well, things can’t stay happy forver, I guess, but I’ve got faith that they’ll get back together:) Anyways, I loved this update and I don’t think it sucked, so I wish you the best of luck and hope that you can get over the writer’s block, soon, or it might take some time. Okay, I’ll shut up now, but I just wanted to tell you that your doing an awsome job:) Keep it up!
Alice is taking Dana’s inability to tell Tonya very well so far. That can’t last… lol
awwww al and dane are soo cute. i hope dane tells her soon!!! im sure al wont understand for very long…
LMAO! You write Tonya brilliantly! She’s too much, wow. So anyways, great update. Looking forward to the next! Post soon.
Oh dork!..nice way to end this chappy, i loved the humor in this one. I was totally cracking up when dana said “GAH” lol, when her phone rang. That was so dana. Hehe, i am brillant! lol, ok maybe not brillant, but i notice the little details, like the whole watch. Well i really hope that was dana does isn’t too terrible, i dunno. We’ll see, it had to be bad for alice to feel the way she did. Btw, i also liked how in this chappy it seemed like alice was actually talking to us, which i don’t think you’ve done b4. hmm. Well post soon!
Great chapter. I was cracking up through the entire thing. You know, no one can write a Danish fic without mentioning Alice’s bed head at least once! It makes me laugh! Well, please update again soon! I can’t wait to read what you have coming next!!
This is wonderful, you had me laughing the entire time. Don’t know that I am looking forward to Day 5, I can see it’s going to make Alice feel bad. I don’t like seeing sweet Al upset… Nor do I like seeing Dana make dumb mistake after dumb mistake. But they usually figure it all out and I hope that is the case this time. Please post soon.
Another great chapter. “”Okay, pookie. Here, catch!” And she made a kissy sound into the phone” that whole bit made me laugh! keep up the amazing writing! Update soon!
Oh Dana *sigh of frustration* just tell Tonya already! ;) Loved the update! It was funny. Btw, I was reading Lost in you by Sammysgirl. And actually, it wasn’t the first time that I made that mistake(posting a commnt on the wrong story). So, who earns the title of dork of the year now? ;)