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The Reluctant (chapter 5)
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“I do.” From Tanya.
“No, Dana…don’t. Please… I love you! Don’t do it…” There was nothing I could do to stop her as the words slipped out of her mouth, louder than anything I’d ever heard before.
“Alice?” Dana’s voice broke me out of my reverie, and I shook my head, turning to look at her.
“Hey.” I groaned, rubbing the sleep from my eyes. “What time is it?” She pulled her arm out from under the pile of pillows and glanced at the watch on her wrist. I’d given that watch to her for her birthday last year, and she’d worn it every day since.
“It’s 7:00.” She winced. It was even too early for her. Hell, Bette and Tina weren’t even awake!
“Motherfucker.” I said, collapsing back into the pillows and shutting my eyes.
“Nooo, stay up with me! I can’t go back to sleep once I’ve woken up. You know that.” I did know that. I pretended not to hear her, though, keeping my eyes closed. As long as I didn’t have to look at her puppy dog face, I might still have a chance of getting back to sleep. I felt her breath on my face and cracked an eye open to see what she was doing. “Pleeaaassssee stay up with me?”
“Jesus Christ!” I flung backwards, seeing as though she was an inch away from my face. “Ah, fuck, Dane. Do you have to do that pouty thing?” She nodded, making her eyes big and sticking out her bottom lip. I sighed, sitting up. I grabbed a pillow and smacked her on the head with it. “Fine. Happy?” She blinked, snatching up a pillow to retaliate with, but I put a firm hand on her wrist, stopping her. “No hitting the cripple!” I yelped, pointing to my black eye with my free hand.
“Oh, no fair! You got to hit me!” She brought the pillow down, hugging it against her chest.
“Yes, but I got the shit beat out of me last night, remember? I say we’re good…even though you only got hit with a pillow.” She grinned.
“You fought back alright. I remember psycho lady doubling over in pain a few times.” I rolled my eyes, laughing.
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that was so nice, both of them realizing they have feelings for eachother. keep it up!
great update. I like it that Dana had been waiting for Alice this whole time. Keep up the good work. post soon.
i really like how you got these two together. please update again.
What took you so long – the perfect response…
awwwwwww how easy was that! they’re soo great together, I’m so happy! Now dana must tell Tonya soon..before anything gets messed up. Great job, please update soon!!
YAYYYY! i’m so proud of alice! i knew Dana felt the same way, you could tell by her keeping the watch al gave her, and the certain things she would do to touch alice..hehe, yay!..good update dork. post soon
hey! yay go Alice, i would be way more into tennis if I had sessions like that! great update… hope Dana tells Tonya and then stands well back! We all know what Tonya’s like lol, keep it coming :)
that was really cute, very nice
GREAT chapter! Danish love makes me so damn happy! I wonder if Dana will be able to get rid of Tonya so easily though!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww they’re just so cute together! I love your Danish.
Again another awesome chapter! Dana teaching alice tennis with her arms wrapped around her = hot! My favourite line this time was “Mmm…Dana muscles” again it was just soo alice like =D Keep up the good work!
I feel so sorry for Alice. But she will survive…eventually. Will she be popping pills and act like a crazy stalker in your story? (In my opinion also some of the most painful moments on the show in S3.)
Oops…comment on wrong story. :( I did want to comment on your story though, because I just realized that I’ve been reading this story and never commented. I liked tough Alice. :) And yay, Dana finally realizes Alice has feelings for her! :)