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To Live Without You (Chapter 18)
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Hey guys, I’ve got to say I’m pretty happy right now, I jumped in the car and took a vacation. I realized that the more I talked about it the less it happened so I’m pleased to tell you I got a great tan (well I can’t really tan much more than this lol) and I got some great pictures to share. (If you’re reading Apogee, I’ll put the links to a couple of pictures there) We are reaching the end of this fic so be prepared for the final twists and turns. Thanks for being so patient with me
ClosetDana
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Shane walked into Alice’s apartment and sat down on the couch, the writer looking at her seriously,
“I’m still mad you know…” Alice said, Shane nodding sadly.
“I know Al, and I really am sorry…I was just trying to be a good friend,” The hairdresser said sincerely. Alice knew Shane was telling the truth, to be honest if the tables were turned the writer wasn’t sure she wouldn’t have done the same.
“I know Shane, and you are a good friend.” Alice said, sitting next to Shane on the couch and giving the hairdresser a big hug,
“But I am…still mad at you…” The writer mumbled, obviously lying as she snuggled up to Shane, the hairdresser pulling her best friend close. Shane smiled, happy that Alice had forgiven her so easily; too bad it’s not this easy for Dana, the hairdresser thought.
As Dana’s match began the room grew even more silent, Shane noticed Alice holding her breath as the athlete appeared on screen. The hairdresser couldn’t help but notice the dark circles around Dana’s eyes and the tired expression the athlete rarely sported. Shane looked to Alice seeing if the writer noticed, she did, Alice’s face wrinkled in confusion for a moment as she watched Dana practice.
The athlete seemed off, she was lazily returning serves from Victoria. Dana wasn’t doing her usual bouncing from foot to foot, the athlete only stood there with a glazed look in her eyes. Alice took a deep breath,
“Does she seem tired, or something?” The writer asked, knowing Shane noticed it; the hairdresser stared hard at the television.
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Cool update. Glad that Vic seems to be happy and taking care of Dana. That was a great idea to send her to Alice. She’s probably the only one that will be able to knock some sense into her. Anyways, great update. You know I fucking love this story! Post again soon PLZ!!!
I’m glad you enjoyed your short vacation! :) I would never have thougt you would update this story first! I needed to blink my eyes twice to see you actually updated this one! :D Oh, Alice is torn between these two lovers (and by typing that out, a cheesy 70’s pop song comes into my mind and I can’t seem to get rid of it now :(). I’m glad Victoria went to Alice to talk to her. Hopefully Alice will talk to Dana andDana will listen to her. (But I guess life is a bit more complicated than that and Dana’s drugproblem wouldn’t be solved that easy…) And yes, in my mind Victoria and Dana are perfect…yep, Victoria is definitely out of sight as a love interest for Dana. ;) (I’m just ingoring the fact that the end of this fic is nearand there will be some twists and turns…?!)
Fantastic chapter and well worth the wait! Im on tenterhooks to see how this story works out cos there is so much goin on. Dana is out of control and i hope Alice can at least begin to help her out.. Hmm maybe a long journey ahead!! Keep goin plz. Thanks.
Loved the update! I’m so excited to see what’s going to happen. I hope Alice can set Dana straight…er…uh, I mean…so to speak. I can’t wait for more. I’m glad you were able to enjoy your little vacation. Keep up the great writing.
yay another update – I’m so in love with this story… I hate the break-up, but I’m just hoping that my favourite couple will be able to work it out in the end after all, us Danish fans all know that they can’t live without one another right? great update, look forward to next time as always :) x
Thanks for the great chapter ClosetDana, I look forward to reading what happens next =)
You made my day by posting this particuliar story. I needed my silver lining in that dark cloud hanging over my head.., but you always make my day ClosetDana. At first I thought Alice was quick to forgive Shane, but now I see she needed to be there to give Alice some clarity. The tennis match sounded like hell, but I could see it coming.. with Dana’s drug problem. She’s lucky that Victoria is so receptive to all that garbage that is going on with Dana. She’s obviously well balanced now… and has the love of a good woman, lol. I love the pet names…mmmm, sugar and love. What do you call your girlfriend, CD? So Shane and Alice are getting high huh… more drugs? lol I think it’s cool that Vic went over to Alice’s to talk to her about Dana.. that must have been hard. Once again you leave me hanging… I hope that things work out between Alice and Dana, but I think the timing is all off. I guess I’ll sit here at my computer devouring all these hershey kisses… there must be thousands in this bag. I guess I’ll have to count them as I go… maybe I can trade them for something. I love my sweet chocolate… mmmm. Post soon… I’ll be waiting.