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    Apogée 15

    Story written on July 2, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61529
    Author Notes:

    Helena goes and Tina comes, Alice lets Dana know Shane trains a baby Yodah and Kit waits for dinner at the pier.

    Ok guys heres the deal, JazzyS asked me to create a chart that would outline what’s going on to keep from a lot of the confusion. I don’t know if this will help or hurt but here it is:

     

    The Chart (Spoiler_Free): 

    http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/626/thechartspoilerfree4dd.png

     

    The Chart (Warning: Spoilers ahead…kinda): 

    http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/3296/thechartspoilers6ht.png 

     

    The dotted lines indicate story lines that haven’t been introduced

    Keep in mind that this chart lays out the characters interaction with each other not their sexual encounters it’s not 100% done and it’s not perfect so please bear with me while I get it together. Let me know what you think and if you have theories or questions please pm them to me. I love to hear them.

    Much Love,

    ClosetDana 

     

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        Shane sat Carmen down at the table in the kitchen, a broom with various objects tied to it, and very detailed picture sat in front of the bartender. The assassin took a deep breath,

        “The gun that I use on occasion is a M82A3 .50 caliber special, it’s scoped and it’s fucking heavy so I want you to pick this up and see if you can carry it.” Shane said as Carmen picked up the broom, and almost held it up smoothly, but it’s uneven weight caused the modified broom teeter wildly in her hands and crash on the ground. Shane picked it up with one hand and laid it back on the table,

        “This is a diagram of each part of the weapon, I’ll make some calls and see if we can get what we need.” The assassin sat next to Carmen showing her where each piece went and how they came together to fire the gun. The bartender sat quietly taking it all in, Shane taught Carmen how to hold the gun properly, showing her what positions and vantage points were best. After an hour or so Carmen began to grow tired,

        “Can we, move on to something else for a little bit, I think my brain is melting.” The bartender said Shane sitting back, glad for a break, tired of talking constantly the assassin lit a cigarette.

        “…You know you’ve got lot of questions for me to answer but I don’t know shit about you.” Shane said simply taking a drag off her cigarette and staring off into space, Carmen nodded.

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    2. I wonder what has Helena so unsettled. Has she figured out that Marcus was on the take or is she covering her own misdeeds? What is Carmen hiding from Shane? Dunne is an ass and you know that he is going to make serious trouble for Dana and Alice. Bette is falling hard for Tina as is Tina falling for Bette. I wonder if Kit went out and killed someone that Bette did not know about (like this person messed with Bette and Kit took it upon herself to fix the problem). Maybe even Bette did time to cover for Kit. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    3. I love’em both, but made Shane open up to Carmen so easily and pretty much teach Carmen everything she knows? But I’m soooo diggin’ it!!! I still want to know what my girl, Carmen, is hiddin’ . . . and I can’t wait for the next chap, please post soon and make it LONGER!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, doin’ a great job, keep it up. Post soon!! LYLAS ;-p

    5. Hi, just read this fic from the beginning and i think it is really interesting with lots of drama, twists and turns.Im a really big Danish fan myself but im liking all the other characters too. Lookin forward to see how Alice and Danas relationship will go,Dunne is a nasty piece of work.Keep writing and post soon.Thanks.

    6. OK… i admit im as far as a bette and tina fan.. BUT i guess i cant help but try to “like” them because its you who is writting them lol and of course you gave some Danish! so no hard feelings! oh wellll yeah suspense! lol I’m glad Alice told dana and that she didnt aplogize for her thesis and what not. oh and the charts were just awesome not im just like post again post right now! do it do it! lol tnx for posting :)

    8. First things first: Dunne is a fuckin’ dick! I hate him!!! As for TiBette, they are great together, but I feel sorry for her even though this is on her! Shane and Carmen, I’m afraid they will get caught, but they gotta ride out Bonnie and Clyde style!!! Dana and Alice: so sweet, but powerful…Continue soon girlie!!

    9. I always get excited when I’ve seen that you’ve posted… finally some thing to read besides mine, over and over again, lol. The chart idea was a fantastic.. it will make following along so much easier. You always have new mysteries to unveil and I’m caught in your web. I want to know what Carmen’s plans are. And Helena.. what is her part in all this. Am I repeating myself? The Tibette sex was so intimate and left me with the slow burn… even though it wasn’t Danish. It was all so sad, too.. all the feelings that remain hidden… that should happen to no one. I can tell the stress is getting to both Alice and Dana… I hope that the work doesn’t mess with their personal lives. I can’t wait till Dunne gets his. Thank you for this chapter and I can’t wait for the next. I’ll stay right here with my security blanket.

    13. I’m surprised that Shane is teaching Carmen all that stuff. Maybe Shane will teach her then kill her. =p I see more drama for Alice and Dana. I wonder why Tina didn’t ask Bette about her tears? I’m sure Bette would’ve lied, but it’s still odd that Tina didn’t ask. Perhaps Tina knows more than she’s letting on. HAHA You called Dunne and asslick. lol Too funny. And yes, WV is known for mountains and skiing and stuff. Oh and bungee jumping off the New River Gorge Bridge. There’s also the Mothman (I often say he lives in my backyard) but I’d rather not go there. It would take too long to talk about it.

    15. Every chapter I feel like I’m watching an episode of Lost. With every question that is answered, 5 more pop up. I’m riveted and can’t wait until you pull everything all together. Thanks for the B&T scenes. I hope you can find a way to keep them together–don’t know how, but I have faith in your abilities to spin a plausible web. Wonderful chapter.

    16. This story is great, definately one of my favourites. You’re a great writer and all the characters are really well written… I’m a big Danish fan but I love all the relationships in this fic, and they all intertwine really well… can’t wait to read more, I agree with Dani F. Shane should totally get Dunne – he’s such a meanie, anyway… great story, keep it coming :)

    17. You made a drawing of the chart!!!! That’s so cool!! You’re the best!! :D I’ve been away for a few days. And it’s been hot as hell here the last couple of days (again…sigh), so I’ve been avoiding my own house (/sauna) like the plague. I think I just remembered what Carmen’s agenda is. :D But I let Carmen suprise Shane. Bette is going to be in so much trouble when Tina will find out what Bette has done. But she already knows that… Oh no, Dunne has been watching Alice and Dana! I officially hate him now. :) I’m really curious what business Kit and Bette will talk about during the dinner Friday evening. Btw, I had my own run in with the cops earlier this week (I lost my wallet and they called me later that day that I could collect it at the station). Funny, the agent wasn’t even near as hot as agent Bells or agent Fairbanks…strange huh? ;)

    19. As always, loved the B/T scenes. Would have liked to read how Tina responded after their first time(s). Looking forward to more, more, more! Good job keeping Helena intriguing. Have a great weekend, and thanks for writing!

    20. Wow! That was an awesome chapter, I really liked it!! This is a story which is very different from all the other ones and I have to say you`re doing a great job! So please, update soon!! And thanks for the chart!

    22. Sorry I didnt comment earlier! But I read and re-read this chapter, and I just have to say that you are an AMAZING writer! The detail you put in your stories is incredible, and I always know that an update from you is going to be a good read. Hell, you make TiBette interesting to me, and I hate TiBette with a passion! I fast forward through their scenes on the show, so actually getting me to read it is a miracle. Sharmen is awesome in your story, and Danish…what can I say. I always love Danish! :-) Great job!! By the way, thanks for giving a shout out to my story. You’re way too sweet to me! Please update soon!

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