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Chandelier – 44
Tina cast her glance away from the swimming pool, turning to Bette. "I have to ask you something."
"The honesty trip again, huh?" Bette grinned.
After a brief reconciliatory session in the SUV, Bette had coerced Tina into going to the house with her, to what was once their shared home. For an afternoon of dealing with their demons, this was a necessary stop, and Bette figured it would be better this way, while Angelica was with Kit, before Angelica was returned after dinner. So far they’d made it all the way to the pool, and have not moved since. There were some light banter, but with night creeping in, they had a few more things to talk about.
Tina smiled weakly. "How do you do it?"
"Do what?"
"Sleep in our room. On our bed." Tina said. "Knowing…"
"What you did in that room?" Bette finished for her.
Tina nodded.
Bette smiled. "I should get you in that room one day."
Tina smiled weakly.
"I’ve changed the bed. Put in the one from the guest bedroom." Bette hesitated. "Tore down the door."
Tina looked at her.
Bette smiled faintly. "Door had it coming."
"Bette, I’m sorry I–"
"T, no." Bette shook her head. "I know. I get it. It wasn’t just about that."
Tina took a deep breath. "I wish you hadn’t gone to that retreat."
Bette frowned. "What?"
"We were falling apart, and it seemed so final, that you’d leave me when we had so much to deal with."
"You could’ve asked me to stay." Bette said gently.
"I’m not sure you would have." Tina looked at her. "You didn’t, when you went to Washington."
"It was something I believed in."
"Oh, throw that in, too."
Bette hesitated. "Throw what in?"
"Going to Washington, when you told me you missed me." Tina sighed. "It would’ve been so easy, to tell you that I missed you too, but it was like emotional blackmail, for both of us."
"I don’t understand."
"For me? That was bait. I suspected you were baiting me, and I felt…"
"Oh." Bette understood, even without the sentence being finished. "Why didn’t you ask me to stay?"
"Because it’s what you wanted." Tina said softly. "Remember that time I went home, to get more of my things? You accused me of not giving you what you wanted."
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Yay! I’m first! Great chapter, tiff. I absolutely love the way you let the characters discuss their problems, and I certainly wish we could see that type of interaction on the show!
First, I’m honored that a goofy little story I wrote was referenced. *blushes* Tina was right. They are both idiots, but perhaps now they can be recovering idiots. Two MILFs and an SUV. Sounds like a nice ride.
i love your dialogue. yes bette and tina are idiots for fucking up their relationship so royally!
Love your story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
“We could’ve avoided all this if we’d talked to each other?….duh!…lol great chapter…can’t wait for Bette to show Tina the bedroom.
They’re making progress. They deserve a little break.
tiff….you’re simply the best at writing dialogue, having emotions and thoughts come through in dialogue. You just have this knack/talent for getting into their heads and expressing such realistic ideas. Every chapter is out of the park. Yiur story is so complex and interesting.
How great that these two are finally talking about their mistakes and actually listening to each other. This story is how the communication should have gone, instead of IC making them act like idiots. Thank you for trying to fix them. First communication now to see the bedroom..hmmm..I know talking is great, but action is better. Right, Tiff_Duke?
Maybe now they can start stepping forward and when they do fall back it is only a couple of steps and not falling all the way down the stair case. Maybe now the idoitness is behind them and only shows up occasionally. Yes go make some brand spanking new memories.
THANK THE GODS THERE MAKING PROGESS. PLEASE POST SOON LADY
Loved these lines:…Bette looked at her, before sighing and turning back towards the pool. “Sometimes I wish I didn’t love you the way I do.”Bette glanced at her. “It’s too easy for you to hurt me. Sometimes it gets too much for me to deal with.” …It gets to the heart of things, the heart of Bette which she so rarely shows. She IS vulnerable and sensitive. Loved it! Thanks!
i loved they way they talk to each other and the way they make up…will you write about their new memories so we know about them too?
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
Please, please, PLEASE show us them making new memories in their room. Wonderful as always.
Excellent post TD. You’re too good!
tiff, you are the first last and everything of B&T writing!
Great stuff – loved the ending.
Good chapter. Glad they talk more and work thing out!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know, when I finish reading one of your chapters, I think “How is she ever going to top that one?” And, you always do. These two have been navigating through some raging waters and just when I think someone is going to drown, a hand is offered to lead the other to safety. And, apparently for a tumble in anything that has wheels. It really is quite touching to see their love continuing to bubble up as they push through their own and each other’s transgressions. It is fascinating to see their love and commitment wrestle with the demons of their past, especially the way that your write it. The dialog is so articulate and thoughtful. Plus, we get a song to match. That is a whole other superpower! Okay, I was sorting through my mountain of music and rediscovered an old favorite of mine, Love Me Still by Chaka Khan. It is pretty and mushy, but as far as I am concerned, you can never have too much of that.
This was better than good it was fantastic, you are one hell of a writer. Thanks Tiff.
loved the chapter and can’t wait for the bedroom….post soon
Tiff….again you’ve made me speechless.
i’ve come to the conclusion that you should write scripts, not stories. mainly because your stories are basically scripts, only without the annoying…script qualities. of course, if it is a script, and written as a script should be, it’s not so annoying. you’re a dialogue whore, and a damn good one at that. it’s realistic, true to the characters, and it’s not choppy in any way. you make it where the dialogue describes the characters, and that, dear acquaintance, is something not a lot of people can do. believe me, there are about a million stories out there that prove just what i said. so please, continue with your script/story. scriptory. is that already a word?
This is such a beautiful story. I like the way they talk and find out similarities between them. Wonderful :-)
Wow…what a great chapter. I hope that they can get through the memories in the bedroom!
TD, Finally looks like these gals are getting some closure and more important admitting to their failures and forgiving themselves for their transgressions. I admire the honesty of your words and perfect dialogue. You always embody the simplest of scene with such a wallop of emotions. Please let these gals chase away the demons of their past and welcome the joys of their future. Brava! And much gratitude for this fabulous fan fiction. Your Loyal Fan.
your dialogues are terrific! see if they talk they can find out wath happen and how they will make differents somethings. I like the tina’s tought: make new memories! excellent girl
I just read the last 3 chapter, and the only thought I’m left with is: Why the hell am I still a Tibetter? Damn JB and LH for having such great chemsitry..
your dialogue is awesome – thank you for walking this couple through the conversation they’ve needed forever. Exquiste writing.