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Tear My Heart Open – Part 2
LARA
You were still sleeping when I left, I didn’t want to wake you, I know how scarcely sleep has been finding you lately. I watch you carefully as you walk to a table in the back and set down your things. You open your laptop and stare at it blankly, I can see the emptiness on your face and my chest tightens. I decide that you need coffee and I grab a pad and pen from the counter and make my way over to you. I briefly wonder where your friends are. “Alice?” I say tentatively. You look startled for a moment and then you look up at me, your eyes registering who has spoken your name before you turn away from me again.
“Lara.” You say quietly.
“Do you want a coffee?” I ask tentatively.
“Non-fat, Decaf, Latte.” I immediately recognize Dana’s coffee order, but I don’t say anything as I walk back toward the front of the Planet to make the drink…
“Here it is….One Non-fat, Decaf, Latte, with no sugar.” I set the cup in front of Dana and take a seat across from her. “I swear I don’t even know why you get the coffee. Take away the sugar and the caffeine and what’s the point?” I tease her as I glance toward the door, we are waiting for Dana’s friends to arrive. I know what they look like from the charade at the country club, but I have yet to officially meet them.
Dana shrugs at me and smiles. “Habit, I guess.” I raise my eyebrows at her and she continues. “It is sort of ridiculous isn’t it? Alice used to say the same thing. When I first met her I didn’t drink coffee. I usually stay away from caffeine and of course I always drink nonfat milk, since I’ve been on a diet since I was seven.” She pauses and smiles fondly at her memory before she continues. “But, anyway, Al told me that I couldn’t continue to hang out at a coffee house without ordering coffee. So I told her why I didn’t drink coffee and Marina came over and set the cup in front of me and said ‘here you go, try this, Non-fat, Decaf Latte, very simple.’ It wasn’t too bad, and honestly, it was the only thing that I knew how to order.” Dana blushes at this and I think again how adorable she is. “Not very sophisticated when it comes to the coffee.” She lets her head fall slightly and fiddles nervously with her cup.
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(35 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
amazing update. post more soon
I’m sold! The flashbacks do work really well. I’m looking forward to reading more!
i love how you incorporate the flashbacks by connecting them to something in the present. i also love how you make seemingly small insignificant moment seem so significant and emotional. great update. i love the way you write.
really great update, i love the flashbacks…please update soon
very nicely done, glad I noticed this update…I agree with Dawsons23, the flashback elements really add a lot of depth to this, and combined with how you illustrate the present, this fic is really lovely to read. Please update soon, I can’t wait to see how things continue;)
I freaking love how you throw the flashbacks in there! It just makes it that much more painful and real. I really enjoy this story, and I hope you continue soon! By the way, apparently people can spend a LOT of time on myspace, because my brothers friends hog the computer for like hours upon hours when they are here, and it bugs the shit out of me! But please try to squeeze yourself onto the computer to update again! It’s awesome! :-)