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The Reluctant (chapter 9)
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Chapter 9
“What are the chances of this boat sinking? Like…anytime soon?” Jenny asked. We were sitting in Shane’s room, just talking. I was avoiding Dana, of course, so I refused to leave the room. She had come around a while ago looking for me, but I couldn’t deal with her. I still don’t think I could. I mean, if I tried to talk to her and like, completely exploded…yeah, that would be bad. I can see the headlines now: PRO TENNIS PLAYER DANA FAIRBANKS IS THROWN OFF THE SIDE OF A BOAT TO HER DEATH BY CRAZY BEST FRIEND AND EX-LOVER ALICE PIEZECKI. No, that would not be good, and trust me, that’s probably the reaction I would have to anything she would have to say to me right now. So I let it go, and stayed shut in the room.
Shane had decided to stay with me, and maybe figure out the next plan. Then Jenny had popped her head in, deciding to join us.
“What?” I asked, giving her a bewildered look. She shrugged.
“I don’t know. Just ever since I was a kid I’ve always had a fear of sinking ships.”
“What, did you watch Titanic too much or something?” I asked.
“No, I actually have never seen it. But my uncle used to tell me stories about boats that would go out to sea and then mysteriously disappear.” We both stared at her.
“You know, there are people who have water phobias.” Shane said, leaning back against the headboard.
Jenny laughed, saying “Yeah, I think Tonya’s one of them. She got splashed standing by the side of the boat today and completely flipped out. Well, it might have been the fact that seaweed splashed up with the water and landed on her face, actually.” Shane’s head swiveled around to look at me, grinning with that ‘I’ve got a brilliant plan’ look.
“Al, I’ve got a brilliant idea.”
“Shane, I don’t think she actually has a water phobia.” I said.
“No, Alice. This is going to be incredible. Trust me.”
“What are you guys talking about?” Jenny asked, confused. I looked over at Shane.
“Should we tell her?” She shrugged in response, then turned to Jenny.
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HA! This is great, I always love when writers include friendship, instead of only focusing on the couple of the story. Good work, I was laughing my ass off!
that was a pretty funny update, they’re real slick. ugh, the idea of dana and tonya makes me wince too. bring on the drama! how entertaining! post soon!
simply amazing! i still love shane and alice’s secret agent style! too bad more drama is to come, becaue i was enjoying the comedic friend action! but of course we wanna know whats gonna hapen with alice and dana, so keep it up!
This story is awesome! The chapters are sooo halarious! Too bad the drama is gonna start. I have a feeling that alice is gonna be very upset. Hopefully shane will be there for her. ;) Anyways hope you post again soon!
Another awesome chapter! Im enjoying the shane and alice plans! my favourite line was “Burn motherfucker! Alright, let’s boogie!”” totally funny! Keep up the great writing!
Oh my God. I was dying laughing the ENTIRE chapter! It’s a nice calm before the Danish drama storm! Alice and Shane are so fucking hilarious together, and you throw little oblivious Jenny in there, and you have laugh after laugh. Loved it so damn much! Update again soon! Please!