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The Reluctant (chapter 9)
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“Shane! No!” I called, dragging her away from the game.
“But…it’s Space Invaders! It’s the original!” She whined.
“Think of the plan, Shane.’ Jenny said, peering through the cracked door. “Okay, they’re gone.” We left the room and headed for the bar, once again passing Bette and Tina, who eyed us curiously.
We walked cautiously through the swinging door to the bar and quickly ducked behind the backing of a sofa. I pointed quietly to Tonya and Dana, who were sitting at a table, not too far away.
“We should get behind them.” Shane said. “Hold on.” She glanced at the couple, who were oblivious to our presence, then pulled a duck-and-roll move. Jenny and I held in silent laughs as Shane ended up behind them, shielded by a chair. She waved at us to come over. Jenny pushed me gently, and I sloppily mimicked Shane’s roll, bumping into her. Jenny practically dove from behind the sofa to our new hiding spot. We were all holding our stomachs with silently laughter by now. Shane pulled out her squirt gun, aimed it at the back of Tonya’s head, and squinted.
Jenny covered her eyes, whispering “I can’t watch!” I grinned at her and looked back over at Shane. Water shot out of the gun and almost instantly we all ducked back behind the chair. Tonya turned around, then back towards Dana, feeling the back of her head. We waited there for a few minutes, then the couple got up.
“Shit!” I squealed, back pedaling into Shane as Jenny did another head dive behind the bar. We followed, scrambling to get out of sight. I popped my head up to see the 2 walking away, and I took aim with my gun.
“Al, don’t!” Shane said, trying to suppress a laugh. “You’ll miss!”
“I will not! I have perfect aim.” I said, squeezing the little neon trigger. I swear to god, it was all in slow motion. The water hit her in the back of the head, and we all ducked again. Shane and Jenny looked over at me and I grinned. I blew invisible smoke from the water gun and twirled it, sticking It back in my belt. Shane slapped my back.
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HA! This is great, I always love when writers include friendship, instead of only focusing on the couple of the story. Good work, I was laughing my ass off!
that was a pretty funny update, they’re real slick. ugh, the idea of dana and tonya makes me wince too. bring on the drama! how entertaining! post soon!
simply amazing! i still love shane and alice’s secret agent style! too bad more drama is to come, becaue i was enjoying the comedic friend action! but of course we wanna know whats gonna hapen with alice and dana, so keep it up!
This story is awesome! The chapters are sooo halarious! Too bad the drama is gonna start. I have a feeling that alice is gonna be very upset. Hopefully shane will be there for her. ;) Anyways hope you post again soon!
Another awesome chapter! Im enjoying the shane and alice plans! my favourite line was “Burn motherfucker! Alright, let’s boogie!”” totally funny! Keep up the great writing!
Oh my God. I was dying laughing the ENTIRE chapter! It’s a nice calm before the Danish drama storm! Alice and Shane are so fucking hilarious together, and you throw little oblivious Jenny in there, and you have laugh after laugh. Loved it so damn much! Update again soon! Please!