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Blind
Breathe… I couldn’t breathe, tensed… I was all tensed… oh no… it was speeding way too fast beyond my control… I couldn’t control the car steer directions anymore. Brake… must imply more brake… but it was too late… it was getting nearer… this gigantic 5 tones carrier was moving towards me… the giant’s flashing headlights become more and more urgent when it was getting more up front face to face with my convertible… everything starting to fed away… turning into slow motion, the honking sounds… the screeching tires… My past started to flash through my eyes… I could only hear my own shallow and slow breathings and heartbeats… Thud… Thud… Thud… the air suddenly became chill… light… I choked on the chill air…
BANG!!
All I saw last was whole bright light…the impact was great… my head and limbs were thrown in any impossible directions…warm fluid spread through my body, my heart gone cold… beating slower and slower… scared… I’m all so scared… fatal pain coursing throughout my physical… giving up…I relaxed my tensed muscle… surrender… to wherever this fate would bring me… even if it’s death…
Beep… beep… beep… I heard, slowly opening my eyes… my eyelids were heavy and my eyes felt funny… dry? Swollen? I did not have any idea… or was it numb? I’m a stubborn bum, fighting it to be opened. Why couldn’t I see anything? I was 100 percent sure that my eyelids were fully lifted, although I could not really feel it, yet it was still creepy dark… again panic attacked… breathe… I must breathe… I took a few deep breaths and logical sense started to hit me “It’s maybe the night.” Yeah, right, that was it.
I felt stuff covering my face, head, arms… everywhere. I tried to lift my right arm to find out what exactly is all over me when I felt this sore, numbness then pain that I couldn’t bear and did not have the strength to lift my hand, it was too limb. I was thirsty, way beyond I thought my throat was cracked from dehydration. What happened to me? What is wronged? Where am I? I was getting frightened, stressed and in pain. I cried my heart out, I did not know whether I was crying for my pain I was feeling physically or I was crying because I was really helpless and feared of this strange thing happening to me… just like a baby crying for parents’ attention and help. Suddenly this warm soothing hand touched my arm and then my cheek. I stopped sobbing… leaning into these soothing hands. My pain had been forgotten, as I was calming down in these warm and comforting palms. An angel must had touched me.
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Oh yeh like this
Real life really gets in your way sometimes, feels like you need a vacation from life. I do believe you have a winner here thanks
welcome back. you have my attention now
Wow Bette’s blind and Tina is a nurse. This is already intresting you sure know how to catch attention. Post again soon =)
Nice beginning. They say, love is blind, what better way to start out a Bette and Tina love story? Thanks!
What an interesting start…we are ready to begin our journey…please post soon.
Wow, what a heck of a way to meet someone. Hopefully Bette will heal and learn who this calming touch belongs to.
I like the start and I do believe there could be lots and lots of drama. Thank you and I hope you get to post soon.
Wow this is interesting and good start. Bette is blind and Tina is a nurse. Let see some more, thanks!
Welcome back. My, this feels like a family reunion with so many past posters gracing this area. I would like to give my wholeheart appreciation to you and all the authors that sacriface time to bring us these rich stories. Thanks for posting. You have my attention with this one.
Oooo, very nice! Certainly got my attention. As for the lack of time… I know what you mean, unfortunately. Wish I could just put life on hold for a while. Well, I hope you can find the time to continue this very promising start. Thanks!
Like Nocturnal I know what you mean, that’s just the way life is sometimes!!! But I’m very glad to see you’re back with a new B&T story, your writing is great, so I hope to see more if it :o)) This is a very interesting beginning.
Very nice. please continue. I can not wait to read more. Thank you
I really liked the beginning because we really don’t know who was in the accident. Please post again soon!
already and intriguing tale…can’t wait to see what led to the accident and what’s happening
Great start so far. This is incredibly detailed. Sounds like something you experienced??
This is an excellent start. Please continue soon.
Beautifull Zabo! YESSSSSSSS I am happy that finally your posting again, seeing your story was one of the first (or maybe even THE first) I read on this site! I love your style and this start is magnificent! Please post again soon, you allready have a devoted fan in me!
Welcome back.. Loved your previous story and I bet I’ll love this one as well.. =)
Yup. You’ve got my attention Zabo. Is Bette blind? Oh my gawd,please say it ain’t so. post soon.
Great start and very interesting.
5 stars.