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Blind
After several minutes (I guess), I’d become calmer. I was actually relaxed and not that scared anymore. I felt the oxygen mask (I presumed) taken from my face, and a straw alike rod poking on my lips, prompting me to open my mouth to let it in. I put the rod in and sucked carefully… thank God it was water. I had never known plain water could be so tasty. I gulped larger and larger amount of water, I was running out of breath but my body seemed to need this fluid consumption more than the air consumption. As a result, I choked… this soothing hand again rubbing gently and carefully down my chest.
After recovering from the coughs, I attempted to ask, “Wh… why…y don’t you switch on the light?” I asked in my best attempt yet husky voice. The soothing palm suddenly became humid and tensed as it resumed stroking on my cheek. “Bette… Erm… Ms. Porter… do you know where you are?” Even the sounds sounded as soothing as her palm… but then in this condition at this moment… these were freaking me out.
“No… wh… where am I? What happened to me…?” my throat failed me to say any more word. Just then the sterile smell caught my nose…
“I’ll go get the doctor. He’ll talk to you and tell you about everything. And I’m going to call Kit too. Ok?”
Suddenly I was panic again, what the heck has happened to me? I wanted to start to cry, but my head felt like exploding… and sharp pain coursing throughout my body. I groaned in pain. The soothing hand stroke my cheek and arm, once again I was calmed.
“I’m gonna get the doctor.” When she tried to pull away, out of no where with a strange strength, I managed to lift my hand to grab hold of that hand. Not only the hand is soothing, by the moment I grip on the wrist, I felt funny tingle in my stomach. Right at that moment as well, this someone took a sharp breath.
“Don’t go… pleaseeee…” I tried to prevent her from leaving.
“o… ok.” She said “But I’ll get another nurse to get Doctor Palmer, ok?”
I didn’t answer her, I just didn’t know whether I could face another heart attack for today, since I woke up not in my own bed but somewhere with beeping sounds, antiseptic smell, creepy chill, pain all over and pitch dark… wait… pitch dark? What? I’m blind aren’t I? Without realization I tighten my hold on the wrist.
Tina winced in pain but she calmly stroke on Bette’s arm to relax her muscle and said “Bette, relax… everything’s gonna be ok.”
With desperation and frustration, Bette wanted to scream out but couldn’t find the strength, but with all her strength that she could manage and at the edge of tears spilling “Am I blind?”
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Oh yeh like this
Real life really gets in your way sometimes, feels like you need a vacation from life. I do believe you have a winner here thanks
welcome back. you have my attention now
Wow Bette’s blind and Tina is a nurse. This is already intresting you sure know how to catch attention. Post again soon =)
Nice beginning. They say, love is blind, what better way to start out a Bette and Tina love story? Thanks!
What an interesting start…we are ready to begin our journey…please post soon.
Wow, what a heck of a way to meet someone. Hopefully Bette will heal and learn who this calming touch belongs to.
I like the start and I do believe there could be lots and lots of drama. Thank you and I hope you get to post soon.
Wow this is interesting and good start. Bette is blind and Tina is a nurse. Let see some more, thanks!
Welcome back. My, this feels like a family reunion with so many past posters gracing this area. I would like to give my wholeheart appreciation to you and all the authors that sacriface time to bring us these rich stories. Thanks for posting. You have my attention with this one.
Oooo, very nice! Certainly got my attention. As for the lack of time… I know what you mean, unfortunately. Wish I could just put life on hold for a while. Well, I hope you can find the time to continue this very promising start. Thanks!
Like Nocturnal I know what you mean, that’s just the way life is sometimes!!! But I’m very glad to see you’re back with a new B&T story, your writing is great, so I hope to see more if it :o)) This is a very interesting beginning.
Very nice. please continue. I can not wait to read more. Thank you
I really liked the beginning because we really don’t know who was in the accident. Please post again soon!
already and intriguing tale…can’t wait to see what led to the accident and what’s happening
Great start so far. This is incredibly detailed. Sounds like something you experienced??
This is an excellent start. Please continue soon.
Beautifull Zabo! YESSSSSSSS I am happy that finally your posting again, seeing your story was one of the first (or maybe even THE first) I read on this site! I love your style and this start is magnificent! Please post again soon, you allready have a devoted fan in me!
Welcome back.. Loved your previous story and I bet I’ll love this one as well.. =)
Yup. You’ve got my attention Zabo. Is Bette blind? Oh my gawd,please say it ain’t so. post soon.
Great start and very interesting.
5 stars.