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Scorpio Rising
Scorpio Rising
I finally had the life with Carmen I always wanted. We where closer, softer more sure of our love for each other. It’s been a year. No F.B.I. No Moon Lighters looking for revenge, no Havoc come back from the dead. Just time. A whole lot of time. Did I have problems with her? No. Never. I love her with all that is me. She loves me. I have never been happier more at peace.
And that is the problem. I have never been happy in my life. Every time I tried it seemed the phone would ring and life would be shit. Every fucking minute of every fucking day. Now I wake up with her warm and so very soft. I wake up to Marco jumping on the bed wanting to play super boy. My trigger finger itching, my fists they wanted to smash, my car in the spot I left it in it wanted to crash and burn.
Carmen talks in her sleep. She snores. She licks the nozzle of the whip cream bottle when she has her ice cream; she eats cereal dry leaving cartons of milk unused. I am not use to domestication. We spent so much time just fighting to be with each other I don’t think either of us has given thought to the idea of what happily ever after really means.
I have been thinking of getting away from her and Marco for a few days. Just take time to think. Of course thinking about going away for a few days and telling Carm and Marco are two different things…..
Scorpio Rising
Ch 1
If I don’t go crazy, I’ll lose my mind
I saw a life before me but now I’m blind
I wanna go to heaven, never been there before
I wanna go to heaven, so you give me some more……..
I get up at night and I wander around the house thinking, talking to myself. Thinking about how things use to be. How exciting everything use to be. I look out the bay windows and see the pool. The sway of the water as the breeze hits it. I walk around some more. I go out to the porch for a smoke. I light the smoke. I breathe in the toxin. I exhale the toxin. I look at my car. I walk over to my car. I touch the hood, the tires, check the mirrors, the lights, I look up to the sky see the stars, they twinkle just like Marco’s bedtime stories. I walk over to the tree swing. I sit down. I finish my smoke. I ask myself is this how life should be?
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(19 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
“I know I said I wouldn’t write this story anymore, that, that it was the last time and I meant it.” Oh, sweet, sweet lies, and we absolutely love you for them. And sure as shit, the saga continues and I’m once again slave to your words. I like that Shane hasn’t taken to the slow life. She was born and raised into danger and adventure; there’s no way they’ll stop being a part of her. And poor Carmen, she must’ve been terrified at the thought Shane leaving her and Marco (well at the thought of Shane leaving them for good, anyway). I hope John’s big plans are remedy to Shane’s affliction. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
i love you i love you i love you!!!!! youre the fucking bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt this is “THE” story men i love it and i haven’t red it. lol. ok im going to read it know i just was so fucking exited i had to leave a comments first … but seriously men stop saying that it ends here or there or what ever i get my hart broken everytime that sais THE END
i feel bad for carmen i mean she must be borde too. so give them a job or something (nothing that would kill them) but something exiting no just for shane but for carmen too she needs something els in her life than shane and marco…. but love ittt ADICT***
Totally understandable that Shane is feeling cabin fever. Domestic bliss is kinda like the twilight zone for her, but I was so happy to have them reunited w/ Marco & to know how much he loves them both. Have a feeling John’s news is going to shake things up. Great to have a continuation to this fab’ story.
I am so glad you continued this story I hated to see it end. Love the fact that Shane is so restless but don’t want it to tear them apart! I look forward to reading more of this continuing saga!
you can have as many sequels as possible with this story, i have grown to love them as if they were family! In fact… i nearly cried when Carmen said “about why you can’t sleep in the same bed as me anymore…”. You write so well… I feel for both Shane and Carmen! But I hope John dont come up shit for my fave couple… they have been through so much, i dont want them to go thru hell again!