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    Night Returning 5

    Story written on October 30, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Last Part.

    Night Returning 5

     

     

    Ch 9

     

     

    As black as the night can get

    Everything is safer now

    There’s always a way to forget

    Once you learn to find a way how

     

     

     

     

    They shined a blue light into my cell repeatedly.

     

     

     Blink. Blink. Blink.

     

     

     It was on the whole time I was down there. Was it a signal? Was Carmen trying to tell me something? It didn’t matter. I didn’t stress it. I was free; my feelings would normally bail on me, in a situation like I was in……. I felt nothing. It was a first.

     

     

    They say that the darkness ends the day. And for days I stayed in my cage a good animal. Didn’t make any noise, didn’t scream or shout about the burning need I had. I kept my mind a blank. I thought of all time spent wanting to be dead, somewhere else. The musty smell of the earth down there in that place. Sooner or later they would come for me. Sooner…or later.

     

     

    It started to hit me with full on force that Carmen was not supposed to turn me. That in doing so this line I was walking it was about to hit a dead end. The guy must have been Guillaume, somehow I pictured him taller. After realizing that….. I made noise. I paced my cage a tiger. I yelled after a while, I heard laughter instead.  Maybe on the tenth day is when I was really starting to feel crazy, that’s when they sent for me.

     

     

    A skinny vampire maybe 15 when he was turned he laughed at me as he opened my cage.  He told me to move and I moved. Went up these stairs that lead to nowhere in particular. When we got to the top I saw her. I sent her a mental telegram but got nothing. When she looked at me it was cruel. Like she didn’t know me, or care that I was in her space. It was then when I felt something. The feeling of rejection of seeing her in her element with her kind…no longer was I the thing she wanted. The feeling multiplied stronger than when I was alive. 

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    3. What a bleak existence for Shane–working just to pass the time, no real interaction with anyone. Bleak. WILL there be a sequel? You mentioned it would be a Halloween story, so, since Halloween is tomorrow, I never thought you’d write a second part. Then again, I think everyone would definitely enjoy this story well after All Hollows Eve. Anywho, it was a great story.

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