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Scorpio Rising
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I think about my old life. The one with the danger. The one when it was just me against the world. I wonder as I see the light from my smoke burn out in the dirt at my feet, I wonder if my old life misses me as I much as I miss it?
I walk back to the house. Miriam is up as she is always at this time. She looks kindly at me, worried. She knew I was losing it here. That I was suffocating. She asked me as much three weeks ago when I started this ritual. She was warming some tea when I wandered over to her and took a seat at the kitchen table.
“Hey…..”
“Shane….still can’t sleep?”
“I don’t know…..no ….I get up and I need a smoke then I need a walk…”
“I see. Would you like some tea?”
“Only if you spike it for me….”
She laughs small polite to the idea that John is sleeping and Carm and Marco…I see her go to the liquor cabinet and pour a generous shot into a tea cup. She walks back over and hands me the cup. The sting just right, my frayed nerves less now.
“Shane do you have any family……?”
“No they are all dead….except for you guys I like to think you are my family…’
“Oh Shane honey we are….I think you miss your family, your friends back home in California, your old life…..”
“Maybe….but they are all dead…..so there’s nothing to miss…”
“Ah honey….you have got to lighten up a little bit…cause this here. This is it…this is the quiet place. Your life won’t ever be simpler than it is now….give it chance. Enjoy the quiet. I’ll see you in the morning…”
She walks over and kisses me on the top of my head like a mom would. Like Carm does when Marco falls of a chair he was climbing on. I put my head on the table. Just for a minute. To think. To sleep. To dream……..
In my dream Carmen is naked. She is soft. She is making me feel like I was coming undone. Thread by thread. I could feel her moving on me, in me. Right at the center of me. She was rocking back and back and forth, her hair so long that it hit my face with the cleanest sweetest scent. I am kissing her chin because it’s all I can see in the maze of her hair. Her forehead is low now touching mine. It gets more intense as the minutes go. I want to come so bad and I feel like I am, my eyes are fluttering, my whole being feeling like it is about snap, humming like one of those tuning forks, but she won’t let me, she moves, and it’s gone.
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“I know I said I wouldn’t write this story anymore, that, that it was the last time and I meant it.” Oh, sweet, sweet lies, and we absolutely love you for them. And sure as shit, the saga continues and I’m once again slave to your words. I like that Shane hasn’t taken to the slow life. She was born and raised into danger and adventure; there’s no way they’ll stop being a part of her. And poor Carmen, she must’ve been terrified at the thought Shane leaving her and Marco (well at the thought of Shane leaving them for good, anyway). I hope John’s big plans are remedy to Shane’s affliction. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
i love you i love you i love you!!!!! youre the fucking bestttttttttttttttttttttttttt this is “THE” story men i love it and i haven’t red it. lol. ok im going to read it know i just was so fucking exited i had to leave a comments first … but seriously men stop saying that it ends here or there or what ever i get my hart broken everytime that sais THE END
i feel bad for carmen i mean she must be borde too. so give them a job or something (nothing that would kill them) but something exiting no just for shane but for carmen too she needs something els in her life than shane and marco…. but love ittt ADICT***
Totally understandable that Shane is feeling cabin fever. Domestic bliss is kinda like the twilight zone for her, but I was so happy to have them reunited w/ Marco & to know how much he loves them both. Have a feeling John’s news is going to shake things up. Great to have a continuation to this fab’ story.
I am so glad you continued this story I hated to see it end. Love the fact that Shane is so restless but don’t want it to tear them apart! I look forward to reading more of this continuing saga!
you can have as many sequels as possible with this story, i have grown to love them as if they were family! In fact… i nearly cried when Carmen said “about why you can’t sleep in the same bed as me anymore…”. You write so well… I feel for both Shane and Carmen! But I hope John dont come up shit for my fave couple… they have been through so much, i dont want them to go thru hell again!