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    Hidden Secrets Pt.6

    Story written on November 6, 2006 by lrowen69.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63132
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    Moving in, Moving out, white suits, phone calls, and an unexpected development…….. enjoy

    Previously

    "Yes" Carmen exclaimed as she did a little happy dance in her car.. she finally had the women of her dreams and couldn’t be happier but her excitement turned to dread as she caught sight of the clock and it read 10 am… "shit I’m so fired" she exclaimed as she quickly put the letter in her back pocket and began the long drive to work … wondering where Shane would be taking her on their first date….  

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    Jenny was still busy cooking breakfast when she noticed Marks car back up in the drive way and watched as the man proceeded to carry various sized packing boxes into the studio… mark had only told Shane of his plans to move out… so jenny didn’t think anything of it… she went to the sink and whipped her hands clean before walking out the back door to invite him inside…

    "Morning Mark" she called out causing the young man to jump slightly in surprise before turning towards her

    "hey Jen, whats up" he asked surprised at how nice she was being towards him… just yesterday she was sending him death stares and now she was acting as if they were the best of friends

    "nothing much, would you like some breakfast, i cooked for Carmen but she was running late for work..so i thought maybe you’d want some food after you got back from dropping Shane off" she told him as he began to make his was up to her… she also wanted to talk with him about Shane and the mysterious boxes..

    "ya thanks I’m starved" he stated….. he truly was hungry after this morning and also wanted to talk with her about his plans to move out… after he left Shane, his investor called to tell him about the new apartment they bought for him…

    "great well… how was Shane when you dropped her off" she asked as they walked into the house

    "she was nervous, but that’s to be expected.., I told her we’d all call later after she got settled" he said taking a seat at the table.. he knew it wasn’t just Shane’s nerves because of her constant joking but didn’t feel the need to worry jenny or the others..

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    1. fordt time commenting on this one i think, and all i can say is amazing, capture everyone perfectly especialy the love story of shane and carmen , you write amazingly keep it up this story is soooooo good i love it especially shane and her new her its gonna be good the date and the relationship especially now she can be herself and love i cant wait you are amazing did i already say that….:)

    4. This was very sweet. Good ol’ Shane, in rehab; Trying to cut her addiction to sex…er I mean…drugs. LOL. Very nice and believable in terms of the characters and their attitudes. You weave your words well. Now a good grammar editor, and it’d be a slice of perfection. Kepp writing, you’re one of my fave-rave authors! [br]Looking forward to Shane and Carmen’s date. As for Bette and Tina’s bundle o’ joy…I’ve seen it too many times. The only thing that’ll draw my attention :hint hint: is Tina spewing at the mouth with a page of expletives for Bette. I don’t know, that just cracks me up. I think it’s the contextual irony. Anyway, don’t hesitate to write the scene if yo already plan to do so. But I’m gonna keep my eye out for the Sharmen date.

    7. Okay, I just read all the chapters for the first time, and I must say that I like the story so far. Honestly, I think the storyline has been getting progressively better and easier to get into. And I aammm getting into it. I mean, I was shocked when those brutes ransacked Shane’s room. I completely understand the need for searches, but did they have to be so beastly about it? Goodness, some people just don’t believe in manners anymore. At least now Shane gets to look forward to her date with Carmen after her week at the clinic is over. It could be her reward for enduring the trials of detox. Nice job on the story. Yay, Sharmen!

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