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Hidden Secrets Pt.6
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"ya we planned a little get together at Bette’s tonight and we’re gonna call her as a group." she turned to look at him as she piled food onto two plates "did you wanna come" she asked
"ya that would be great. but um.. Jenny i need to tell you something" he stated calmly as jenny took her seat across from him, placing a plate of food in front of each of them…
"is something wrong mark" she asked the concern spread across her face.. she wondered if it had to do with Shane…
"no.. no nothings wrong" he stammered as he saw the concerned look on her face "it just… I’ve already told Shane about this"
"what.. what is it mark" she interrupted his rambling……. her own fears rising
"I’m moving out jenny.. i know it short notice but i got a call from my new investors this morning and they got me this really cool new apartment over by the studio"
"oh god.. why didn’t you just say so… for a second there i thought you were gonna tell me the cameras where still in the house" she exclaimed breathlessly causing mark to chuckle lightly as he shoveled a spoon full of eggs into his mouth
"god.. no … i learned my lesson with that but is it OK.. can you guys handle this place without me" he asked not wanting to cause Jenny any problems…
"oh no its fine.. i just got a call from the editors at Jamison Inc, their gonna sign my book.. so we’ll be okay here" she stated in excitement… she just found out the night before and hadn’t had a chance to tell anyone.. "so whens the big moving day.. need any help"
Mark put down his spoon and looked up at his roommate "Today"…
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Carmen walked up the 10 flights of stairs to her apartment due to the elevator being broken…. she no longer had anywhere to go now that she’d been fired.. her boss didn’t think to kindly of her being almost 2 and a half hours late… she was stressed out beyond repair and desperately wanted to collapse in bed and disappear until she had to make her way over to Bette’s… she needed Shane but that was now out of the question, so sleep was the next reasonable choice…
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fordt time commenting on this one i think, and all i can say is amazing, capture everyone perfectly especialy the love story of shane and carmen , you write amazingly keep it up this story is soooooo good i love it especially shane and her new her its gonna be good the date and the relationship especially now she can be herself and love i cant wait you are amazing did i already say that….:)
keep on with this thanks
This is fuckin’ awesome, Baby-girl!!! I want more like now . . . Like always from me, Baby, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!
This was very sweet. Good ol’ Shane, in rehab; Trying to cut her addiction to sex…er I mean…drugs. LOL. Very nice and believable in terms of the characters and their attitudes. You weave your words well. Now a good grammar editor, and it’d be a slice of perfection. Kepp writing, you’re one of my fave-rave authors! [br]Looking forward to Shane and Carmen’s date. As for Bette and Tina’s bundle o’ joy…I’ve seen it too many times. The only thing that’ll draw my attention :hint hint: is Tina spewing at the mouth with a page of expletives for Bette. I don’t know, that just cracks me up. I think it’s the contextual irony. Anyway, don’t hesitate to write the scene if yo already plan to do so. But I’m gonna keep my eye out for the Sharmen date.
Hi, I really like this story, love Shane and Carmen together, please post soon!
dude!! not bad at all… infact better thn alota stories that are on here. do continue
Okay, I just read all the chapters for the first time, and I must say that I like the story so far. Honestly, I think the storyline has been getting progressively better and easier to get into. And I aammm getting into it. I mean, I was shocked when those brutes ransacked Shane’s room. I completely understand the need for searches, but did they have to be so beastly about it? Goodness, some people just don’t believe in manners anymore. At least now Shane gets to look forward to her date with Carmen after her week at the clinic is over. It could be her reward for enduring the trials of detox. Nice job on the story. Yay, Sharmen!