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    Hidden Secrets Pt.6

    Story written on November 6, 2006 by lrowen69.
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    Moving in, Moving out, white suits, phone calls, and an unexpected development…….. enjoy

    She slowly walked down the hallway and came to a stop at her apartment door.. she began to fish out her keys when she noticed a note taped to the peep hole of her door.. Seeing her name, she peeled it off apprehensively and opened it..  

    Miss Carmen de la Pica Morales,

      I regret to inform you that this building is being torn down and your lease here has been terminated as of now.. Please vacate the premises by 7:30 Monday morning. Anything left behind will be destroyed. We’re very sorry for this inconvenience.

    Thank you,

    Management

    For any question or complaints call 1-800-382-5544  

    "what the hell" she exclaimed balling the note up and tossing it on the ground… looking around she saw similar notes taped to her neighbors doors.. "could this day get any worse" she asked no one in particular as she entered her apartment and slammed the door shut…

     

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    Shane had just finished putting her thing away, when Dr. Peterson walked in fallowed by two very large men in white suits.. at first she didn’t know what to think as the men began shuffling through her personal affects and it pissed her off… she always liked her thing in a certain order and now things were being thrown every which way…

    "what the hell are they doing" she asked the doctor who stood in the doorway watching the display

    "its just a routine check Shane… we have to do this" Dr. Peterson stated calmly with an understanding smile splayed across her face… she never did like evading peoples personal space but it was a part of her job..

    "what kind of check" Shane asked trying to calm her own senses… she was pissed and wasn’t hiding it very well

    "drugs, needles, cutting blades… anything that seems out of the ordinary… Shane we have to look OK… not many people come here willingly and we have to check" the doctor could feel Shane’s resistances and placed a hand on her shoulder "trust me" she asked

    Shane never trusted anyone she just met but this doctor seemed OK and she thought if she was gonna try to change her life around for the better.. she might as well try to be more trusting of those around her.. "ya OK" she said turning to take a seat on her bed’s mattress.. which had been flipped over onto the floor

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    1. fordt time commenting on this one i think, and all i can say is amazing, capture everyone perfectly especialy the love story of shane and carmen , you write amazingly keep it up this story is soooooo good i love it especially shane and her new her its gonna be good the date and the relationship especially now she can be herself and love i cant wait you are amazing did i already say that….:)

    4. This was very sweet. Good ol’ Shane, in rehab; Trying to cut her addiction to sex…er I mean…drugs. LOL. Very nice and believable in terms of the characters and their attitudes. You weave your words well. Now a good grammar editor, and it’d be a slice of perfection. Kepp writing, you’re one of my fave-rave authors! [br]Looking forward to Shane and Carmen’s date. As for Bette and Tina’s bundle o’ joy…I’ve seen it too many times. The only thing that’ll draw my attention :hint hint: is Tina spewing at the mouth with a page of expletives for Bette. I don’t know, that just cracks me up. I think it’s the contextual irony. Anyway, don’t hesitate to write the scene if yo already plan to do so. But I’m gonna keep my eye out for the Sharmen date.

    7. Okay, I just read all the chapters for the first time, and I must say that I like the story so far. Honestly, I think the storyline has been getting progressively better and easier to get into. And I aammm getting into it. I mean, I was shocked when those brutes ransacked Shane’s room. I completely understand the need for searches, but did they have to be so beastly about it? Goodness, some people just don’t believe in manners anymore. At least now Shane gets to look forward to her date with Carmen after her week at the clinic is over. It could be her reward for enduring the trials of detox. Nice job on the story. Yay, Sharmen!

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