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Scorpio Rising 5
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Scorpio Rising 5
Ch 6
My knife it’s sharpened chrome…come see inside my bones…..
The weekend meant a little more time with Carmen before the little guy woke up. It also helped that we hung out a little watching the sun rise. Carmen sleeps like an angel. She looked happy in some kind of good dream. I kiss her cheek softly and get dressed. As I make my way to the kitchen I notice the house is deathly quiet. The dogs of the neighborhood barking, sprinklers going off, surreal how weird it was to notice how much I use to miss waking to the sounds of gunshots and yelling and tires burning out and sirens. Staring at the coffee pot slowly drip, drip, drip, all I use to think was how much the silence hurt my ears.
Not today, not this morning. After last night and all that was realized with Carmen I welcomed the quiet as Miriam called it.
I check the fridge for something to feed my angel. I get some juice, some fruit. I get milk for her coffee. I place everything on the counter and I start slicing up the fruit and arranging it nice like something you’d see at a party. I smell the coffee and decide to make some toast to go along with it. I get a tray and place everything on it and head back to our room.
When I walk in I see her lounging like a cat on the bed. Sheet wrapped around her, barely clinging to her. I walk over to her side and sit next to her. She wraps her arms around me kissing my neck.
“Ah babe you made breakfast….”
“Yes I did…you look amazing this morning…”
“Do I?”
“Yeah your hair is wild; this sheet though it’s in the way….”
“Shane…my coffee is gonna get cold…stop it…..ahhhh…that’s nice.”
“So you want coffee better than this…I still owe you for last night.”
“….I do… I want you to do that it feels really good……wait how is Marco?”
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perfect update… can’t wait to read more.. please continue… loved it.. thanks,
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That was beautiful. The knife & the mixing of blood as part of their ceremony…..was so them. Usually not too happy when it rains, but if it means you write – then let it pour :-p
I’m loving this! Can’t get enough! lol. Now this was simply beautiful. I’m beyond happy that they didn’t wind up in a church or whatever…no offense to anyone. I’ll say more later when my fingers wake up from their coma :D
“I wonder if she knows how much I love it when she smiles at me.” This part reminded me of the last update when Shane said that her fav part of Carmen was her smile; Shane brings it up a couple times. I like that. I mean, with age, luscious hair turns gray, firm skin wrinkles and fades, a tight body softens, wilts, but a smile, a genuine smile is stays the same as long as there’s something to smile about. Not only that, but a smile blossoms from joy; a smile is far from superficial, you know what I mean? So yeah, I’m glad that Shane’s favorite feature on Carmen is her smile, that seeing Carmen smile makes Shane happy. Once again, OUTSTANDING update, super hot.
Pure bliss! I hope it lasts for them. Thanks for the update!!
I did not think this story could get any better honestly your writing is beautiful and you make them seem so real and so intense. I’ve said it before but thank you for continuing this saga!
I second 2BMe’s comment about the rain ! And I can’t help but notice how much your style has evolved, it is much more fluid. I’ve always loved your stories but I gotta say you’re getting daaaaaamn good girl. Please allow this perfect stranger to say she is proud of your accomplishments. Can’t wait to read the next episode and thank you very very much for these fantastic stories.