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    Scorpio Rising 5

     

     

    “He had a bad dream and I kept him company till he was sleepy again.”

     

     

    “You were out there for a while….”

     

     

    “Yeah we watched the sun rise…I think he liked it….”

     

     

    “You are so great with him…he loves you a lot you know?”

     

     

    “Carm I love him to death….but he is sleeping for a little while longer…and this sheet simply won’t do anymore….”

     

     

     

    I put the tray on the nightstand. I take the sheet down run my hands slowly over her breasts. Kissing her soft as she leans back against the pillows. She wants to feel me on her I know she does. Taking my t-shirt off but pinning her hands to the mattress. …

     

     

    “No…..this is for you…just lay back enjoy…ok?”

     

     

    “But…Shane. I wannaIwannna…”

     

     

    “No….”

     

     

     

    I kiss her slowly really enjoying the sounds she is making. T-shirt off and my jeans on I feel strange. Her hips rising up to feel the fabric as I run my hands along her body. She touches my back with her hot hands and I really liked the feel of it. It’s hard to focus when she does that because I want this to be for her.  I part her legs slowly with my hand just gently feeling the slick hot feel of her. I settle my self between her legs. Her nails tracing the pattern of little scars on my back from my tattoo. It was like she had them memorized.

     

     

     

    “I want you inside of me Shane….I need you inside of me…pleaseplease….”

     

     

    I just kiss her neck, her collar bone. Her hands now roaming in my hair on my cheek…I move closer to her feeling that contact with her skin. I kiss and nip her shoulder, I move down to her breasts. I kiss them feeling that wonder when she sighs. I feel her hands reaching for my jeans and I push them away.

     

     

    “Am I gonna have to tie you up?”

     

     

    No answer just a wicked smile. I look over to my pillow and a plan was forming in my head. I tell her to stay put as I walk over to lock the door. No need to scar anyone who might walk in preferably not to scar the little guy. I turn the TV on and leave it on one of those satellite radio channels. A smooth channel with some blues music playing. She is smirking at me with that sweet smile of hers. I wonder if she knows how much I love it when she smiles at me. I just stand there with a goofy grin. She has her arms outstretched like she wanted me back near her.

    Comments

    1. That was beautiful. The knife & the mixing of blood as part of their ceremony…..was so them. Usually not too happy when it rains, but if it means you write – then let it pour :-p

    2. I’m loving this! Can’t get enough! lol. Now this was simply beautiful. I’m beyond happy that they didn’t wind up in a church or whatever…no offense to anyone. I’ll say more later when my fingers wake up from their coma :D

    3. “I wonder if she knows how much I love it when she smiles at me.” This part reminded me of the last update when Shane said that her fav part of Carmen was her smile; Shane brings it up a couple times. I like that. I mean, with age, luscious hair turns gray, firm skin wrinkles and fades, a tight body softens, wilts, but a smile, a genuine smile is stays the same as long as there’s something to smile about. Not only that, but a smile blossoms from joy; a smile is far from superficial, you know what I mean? So yeah, I’m glad that Shane’s favorite feature on Carmen is her smile, that seeing Carmen smile makes Shane happy. Once again, OUTSTANDING update, super hot.

    4. I did not think this story could get any better honestly your writing is beautiful and you make them seem so real and so intense. I’ve said it before but thank you for continuing this saga!

    5. I second 2BMe’s comment about the rain ! And I can’t help but notice how much your style has evolved, it is much more fluid. I’ve always loved your stories but I gotta say you’re getting daaaaaamn good girl. Please allow this perfect stranger to say she is proud of your accomplishments. Can’t wait to read the next episode and thank you very very much for these fantastic stories.

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