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    Scorpio Rising 9

    Story written on November 26, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Carmen on the left. Marina on the right. I was in the middle.

    Scorpio Rising 9

     

     

     

    Ch 14

     

     

     

     

     

     

    I’ll see you later…. I can’t imagine why?

     

     

     

     

     

     

    It’s amazing how you close your eyes to feel. You close them to feel warm when you come in from a cold moment. You close them when you taste something savory, you close them when you want to hear rain pelt the tin lined roof, and you close them at rock concerts just to hear the moment, to feel the accuracy of the moment when drums pound so loud you feel them in your bones.  With your eyes closed the moments become frozen in time, and space is just a measurement till you open them again. You close them to feel the lips of a kiss. You close them to feel that scrape of a tongue, of teeth, scratches on your back, skin on fire, your body tight, taught….nerves like wires. You don’t look away because that is where the fear lies. No. Instead you close your eyes just for a brief moment to make things last. Fragments of time and space, so in tune yet you cannot see.

     

     

    Drunk and getting drunker. Hot and getting hotter. Wet and getting wetter, nervous and getting more as the minutes drag on.  Carmen in fast conversation with Marina like they where friends for a life time. Confusion because the more this went on the more I sat here quiet as a mouse. The drunker I got slamming down shot after shot. The more it became apparent; it was Carmen’s intention to turn the tables on me and fuck Marina.

     

     

    The moment gets fuzzy and warm and dangerous. A glance, Carmen leaning in close to get a better ear to Marina’s mouth. I close my eyes shielding my eyes from staring at them, hoping to open them and find myself somewhere else. I blink and they are closer, Marina has her hand on Carmen’s arm. I blink again and it’s not there. They both look at me with the same sinister gleam in their eyes…so feeling scared I close mine.

     

     

    I drift off thinking about Mark and Curt. Thinking about Mark’s idea that he and I where related in some way. Not knowing why that suddenly popped into my head. Carmen’s point being proved…..she was right. I didn’t take much to send me to the dark place.

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    1. Loved the meaning behind that threesome. I understand why Marina was necessary for Carmen. All she’s known about is this ‘Great love/lust’ that the ‘first’ Carmen & Shane had. In her mind she’s never been with anyone else. Although there’s no doubt that Shane is the one for her, being w/ Marina helped solidify that. There hopefully shouldn’t be any more doubts about herself & Shane. These two always have some aspect of their relationship to figure out. Wonderful chap.

    3. I knew where the dinner date was headed, but I really didn’t want it to happen. I thought for sure, if it happened, the threesome would cheapen Shane and Carmen’s relationship, make it base and superficial. In fact, as I read the beginning of this update, I though it was the beginning of the end for those two. But now, seeing that Carmen did it to learn about Shane and herself, I can see that the act didn’t tarnish their relationship like I had feared.

    4. Another great one from you! I understand Carmen’s motive although I don’t agree with it. She was testing Shane out of her own insecurities and I think it helped Shane to understand Carmen more. These two have such a complicated relationship but theres no mistaking the intensity of their love.

    5. Bravo! I can’t believe you can make Carmen’s cheating feel necessary. This was an important step in their relationship and you did a great job showing us the insecurites these two have and just what a toll Carmen’s memory loss has taken on this relationshop.

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