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    Scorpio Rising 9

    Story written on November 26, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Carmen on the left. Marina on the right. I was in the middle.

     

     

    Carmen pushes me back to the mountain of pillows. She kneels in front of me, kissing my knee’s parting my legs with her hands, one hand on my left on hand on my right. Her fingers making fast work of me bringing me right to the edge before I feel Marina’s lips on my shoulder, Carmen I need to find Carmen.

     

     

    Carmen seems to sense my need for her. I feel her closer to me as if she were trying to win me over. I feel her skin so close to mine. I lay on my side to face her. She looks scared and lost her game having crossed the line. That made us even I suppose.

     

     

    Carmen on the left. Marina on the right. I was in the middle. I feel the hot feel of Marina’s breasts pressed into my back. Carmen’s lips on my throat. Her breasts pressed against mine. My head resting on her shoulder, eyes closed again. She takes my hand wanting to feel me in her. I take her hand wanting to feel her in me. We breathe and move, and breathe and move. Marina is saying something in my ear. Something only I can hear…Carmen was too busy to notice.

     

     

    “Your woman is amazing. I see why you mourned her so. You both have the look of love in your eyes….don’t be upset with her when this over and she realizes what she has done. She loves you. It is so apparent……I could watch you two forever…Tell me Shane what is it like…..I wouldn’t dream of interrupting you……”

     

     

     

    Kissing on my neck from Marina. Carmen getting closer and closer. That far away look like she was concentrating….I am gonna come is all I think.

     

     

     

    “Feeeels good….reallllly good.’

     

     

    Thank you from Marina. Carmen’s shout of oh god on my shoulder. And a mind numbing orgasm that left me shaking, out of breath and out of time. When I open my eyes Carmen has hers closed. There are tears running down her cheek. She can’t face me.

     

     

    Marina tells me everything will be alright. I see her get up walk to her closet and get a robe. She wanders over to the couch and goes to sleep.

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    1. Loved the meaning behind that threesome. I understand why Marina was necessary for Carmen. All she’s known about is this ‘Great love/lust’ that the ‘first’ Carmen & Shane had. In her mind she’s never been with anyone else. Although there’s no doubt that Shane is the one for her, being w/ Marina helped solidify that. There hopefully shouldn’t be any more doubts about herself & Shane. These two always have some aspect of their relationship to figure out. Wonderful chap.

    3. I knew where the dinner date was headed, but I really didn’t want it to happen. I thought for sure, if it happened, the threesome would cheapen Shane and Carmen’s relationship, make it base and superficial. In fact, as I read the beginning of this update, I though it was the beginning of the end for those two. But now, seeing that Carmen did it to learn about Shane and herself, I can see that the act didn’t tarnish their relationship like I had feared.

    4. Another great one from you! I understand Carmen’s motive although I don’t agree with it. She was testing Shane out of her own insecurities and I think it helped Shane to understand Carmen more. These two have such a complicated relationship but theres no mistaking the intensity of their love.

    5. Bravo! I can’t believe you can make Carmen’s cheating feel necessary. This was an important step in their relationship and you did a great job showing us the insecurites these two have and just what a toll Carmen’s memory loss has taken on this relationshop.

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