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    Scorpio Rising 9

    Story written on November 26, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Carmen on the left. Marina on the right. I was in the middle.

     

     

    I close them again. Open them and you are in her room. Close them again and see just before they close how dark it is. Open them again and feel two sets of hands, feel the double warmth, one taller, one shorter. Close them again and feel what it is like to be pushed away, toward the chair. Fumble around in your pocket for your smokes. Click the lighter, inhale, exhale. Close them again cause your woman is kissing someone not you.

     

     

    Open them again to try to find an ash tray for some odd reason.

     

     

     They put on a show for you. They strip their clothes off piece by piece. Close them again cause you can’t understand why Carmen would want to do this. Keep them closed this might be a really good or bad dream depending on who’s side you are on. Pinch yourself; let the ashes of the cigarette mix with a little flame. Drop it on your skin, feel the twinge, they are still kissing, clothes are on a heap on the floor.

     

     

    I am really drunk. Marina is really drunk. Carmen is not. She is taking advantage of us. And we are letting her.

     

     

    They are down to the black silky underwear. Garter belt for Marina. Flesh, it’s everywhere. Me I just sit and watch waiting to be invited. They pay me no mind. So I close my eyes. Carmen was moaning. Marina was doing something to her. Open them again to see Carmen staring intently at me searching for a reaction. I couldn’t bring myself to keep looking. I closed my eyes and kept them closed. I smoke my smoke.

     

     

    I don’t know how long I sat there frozen with my eyes closed. I couldn’t measure time. I heard the sighs, the sounds they made when they kissed, the soft sound of lips and tasting. I feel a hand touch me. I dare to open them and it’s Marina. She walks me over to the bed Carmen was lounging on. Marina pushes me down on the bed sending my world in a tailspin.

     

     

    Carmen kisses me while Marina strips me of my clothes. Carmen’s mouth more and more in need of me. I crawl over to her, feeling lingering traces of Marina on me the closer I get to Carmen. Face to face eyes open she looks into me. I look into her. We stare at each other for the longest time. Was she reading my mind? Did she know how much I was confused about this? Did she care?

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    1. Loved the meaning behind that threesome. I understand why Marina was necessary for Carmen. All she’s known about is this ‘Great love/lust’ that the ‘first’ Carmen & Shane had. In her mind she’s never been with anyone else. Although there’s no doubt that Shane is the one for her, being w/ Marina helped solidify that. There hopefully shouldn’t be any more doubts about herself & Shane. These two always have some aspect of their relationship to figure out. Wonderful chap.

    3. I knew where the dinner date was headed, but I really didn’t want it to happen. I thought for sure, if it happened, the threesome would cheapen Shane and Carmen’s relationship, make it base and superficial. In fact, as I read the beginning of this update, I though it was the beginning of the end for those two. But now, seeing that Carmen did it to learn about Shane and herself, I can see that the act didn’t tarnish their relationship like I had feared.

    4. Another great one from you! I understand Carmen’s motive although I don’t agree with it. She was testing Shane out of her own insecurities and I think it helped Shane to understand Carmen more. These two have such a complicated relationship but theres no mistaking the intensity of their love.

    5. Bravo! I can’t believe you can make Carmen’s cheating feel necessary. This was an important step in their relationship and you did a great job showing us the insecurites these two have and just what a toll Carmen’s memory loss has taken on this relationshop.

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