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Alone part2
My head hurts. I try to open my eyes but the sun is to bright… wait the sun?… Then it came to me. The plane, Alice, Carmen, the turbulence, and the masked man ….shit, we’re in trouble. When I opened my eyes all I see are trees and sand… and nothing fucking else. (Shane stood up)I can hear the waves… where the fuck am I at? (Then all of a sudden a voice was heard and Shane got to her feet again, hiding. Scared of who it was)
“FUCK YOU, YOU MOTHER FUCkINK FUCKERS… FUCK!!!” (Shane looked thru some bushes and saw Alice standing on the beach) I guess I found where the sounds were coming. ohh… it’s the funny lady… (Shane got up and started fighting trough the bushes to get to the other side. Alice heard movement coming from behind)
“ok, I didn’t mean to say you were a mother fucker… I was just-” (Alice was really scared but then saw that it was the woman sitting next to her on the plane) “HOLY shit … you scared the shit out of me” (Alice went towards Shane and hugged her) “you don’t know how happy I am to see you” (the huge made Shane uncomfortable so Alice let go)
“Um … where are we?”
“Do I look like I fucking know?”
“Shit… where are the others?” (Alice gave her a look that said it all) “right… um lets walk that way and see if we can find the others”
“Sure… it’s not like I got something better to do” (So they went on walking on the shore for about two hour. They found some big palms fronds and put them on their heads to hide from the sun) “Ok that’s it!!! I can’t walk anymore” (Alice said sitting down on the sand)
“Alice we have to keep going, we don’t know where the fuck we are or where are the others” (Shane said pacing back a forth in front of Alice)
“What if they are dead huh?” shit… I never thought of that… what if the really killed them… Carmen… fuck!! …
“NO!!!… we cant think like that Alice… they are not dead…. What about your friend Helena?…. are you just going to give up on her?”
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I like it when you beg….But that’s not the point. I like the story so far. It had a bumpy start but if you can weave it with a good amount of consistency, drama and all around insanity….you’ll be good. LOL. The comedy is very on-point and you managed to peg Alice and Dana’s dynamic very well(circa season 1), and Shane is hilarious. I can picture them lying on the ground and cuddling to get warm. But they’re all so skinny, hardly anyone gets warm….you may have to start a er…fire(You’ll probably need Carmen for that, LMAO!). But then again, 98°F x 3 is well beyond boiling water so….Keep it coming. :D
Aw, Babe . . . You ain’t gotta’ beg dis’ tomboy ;-p I’ll do the beggin’, I would really like to have more please!!! LOL This is awesome, and I’m ready to find everybody else especially Carmen, so . . . yeah . . . Please ~best puppy dog eyes~ Anyways, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!! Stank . . . da’ one and only, chicka!!
I hope there will be many happy danish moments in this story I like the story so far so please post again soon.