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You (Part the Twenty-Second)
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As much as she was trying not to, Dana ended up crying anyway. She couldn’t believe how much pain she was in, and although the morphine had worked for a little bit it certainly wasn’t anymore. She tried to stretch enough to grab the bottle, figuring she might as well take some more, but she ended up using too much of her arm and could barely pull it back without screaming. She was trying to be quiet so as not to wake Alice, which was probably dumb, but she felt so guilty for everything that had happened that waking her up seemed really rude. So she just laid there for a few minutes, crying as softly as she could.
Alice came back to consciousness slowly, trying to figure out what the hell was going on and why someone was crying next to her. As she got her bearings, her arms went around Dana and held her gently as she cried. "Where does it hurt?" she finally asked, more out of a need to say something than any real desire to know.
"Everywhere," Dana sobbed. "It hurts everywhere, Al." With a concentrated effort, she was able to turn herself so she could face Alice, who just cradled her there. Eventually, she was able to get Dana to swallow some of the pills, and they stayed in each others’ arms waiting for them to take effect.
"I’m sorry," Alice whispered finally, her own tears falling into the pillow as she spoke. "I’m so sorry I hurt you, Dana. I shouldn’t have gone through with it." She turned away from Dana’s gaze, still crying and feeling like the shittiest person ever.
"No! No, please don’t feel guilty, Alice. You didn’t hurt me. It’s this fucking…thing inside me that won’t go away. That’s what hurt me, not you." Alice just snorted disbelievingly. "No, I’m serious. Please don’t feel bad…I needed that, Al. I needed to feel like a human being again. I needed that connection and I needed it to be with you, okay?" She ran her fingers over Alice’s face, wiping the tears away and trying to get Alice to meet her eyes. She didn’t.
"I understand that, but it doesn’t mean I feel any better about it. I knew it shouldn’t be happening. I was going to stop, but you looked so…I don’t know, sad about it that I figured it’d be worse to stop than to just go through with it."
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Aww no way was that boring! I never want your parts to end and they’re pretty long anyway. Brilliant again, please post soon we need to know what the test results are and the return of Lara should be interesting. :)
Another great update, sorry about the name mix up I get very easily confused . Still loving the story and can’t wait till Alice gets out the guitar to play for Dana. PPS
You are way to hard on yourself, there was nothing blah about this. Keep it coming girl. PPS.
Ya see, true love is never boring…its life! Thats what IC failed to realise and she never understood that it would have been amazing to watch Danish like this on the show. Thank you so much MT for giving us the real deal!
Yeah I’m agreeing with this lot, this can in no way be considered boring! And you will always have my continued support on your writing because I think it’s fuckin’ awesome :) Glad to see I now have another thing in common with the Alice in your story, not only am I blonde, bisexual and outspoken, I’m off to study sociology at the end of this year, yes I kid you not lol, it’s kinda alarming! Anyway, keep this up, you have plenty of support, fans and appreciation for posting. xx
Brilliant…as always. You should be a writer for the L Word lol WAY better than IC and the others! x
That was a great update. Alice and Dana are just too cute together
Yay! Fluffy, happily in love Danish, does my heart good! You delivered just as promised, thank you! This seemed to be the perfect chapter to pull them back into some normalcy for a few days. Now the next chapter could prove to be very interesting with Lara’s return. I’m ready for it, I just hope Alice is as well.. Great Job!
If you believe this was boring, then you don’t know the meaning of the word. It was superb as usual – anxiously awaiting more from you soon.
This was so not boring, it was great! You have really developed thier relationship. This chapter was definately needed. I mean come on, who doesn’t love Danish in love? Thank You…this was nice to wake up to on a Saturday morning! Looking forward to seeing what happens with Lara! PPS
Blah, blah, blah, blah? More like yay, yay, yay, yay…okay, now I’m leaving silly comments, I think De_leish leaving a serious comment last chapter has left me to pick up the fun comment slack. Anyway, did you really use the word “boring” to describe this chapter? I hardly think it’s possible for your writing to ever be boring. More like enthralling (yay, I haven’t run out of adjectives yet). I like that they’re finally making some progress with Alice’s insecurities and Dana’s emotional retardedness. I’m hoping the Dr’s appt is better than they anticipate and I can’t wait to see how the whole Lara thing turns out. Oh, and I too can never get enough Seinfeld. Just out of curiousity, when is Alice gonna be watching the ep where Jerry puts the Tweety Bird Pez Dispenser on Elaine’s leg? That and the “Spare a Square” episode are my all-time faves (can you tell I love Elaine?) Anyway, wonderful job my dear. Your writing really is inspiring.
Ok, seriously: How on earth could be any fanfiction story, based on Danish, let alone a whole part focus on “just” them be considered “blah blah boring”?You could simply just describe a day in their lifes, where they are “only” hanging out all day at home, doing normal stuff like watching tv, talking, cuddling, making out, talk some more, have dinner, tickle each other to tears, play cards…whatever…and it would still be a perfect story. Just simply because it’s about danish. You get what I’m trying to say? ;) Keep up your good work. Loved it.