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You (Part the Twenty-Second)
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"It would have been, Al. It wasn’t so much the physical stuff I needed, although I did need that too. I just needed to feel you close to me after all the shit that happened, you know?"
"Yeah, I know…but sweetie, the last thing I ever want to do is hurt you. And yeah, I get that the pain’s from the cancer, but I didn’t make it any better."
"Alice…would you look at me? Please?" she said it in such a small voice that Alice finally met her eyes. Seeing the tears in Dana’s, her expression immediately softened and she smiled sadly. Dana smiled back a little before she continued, "You would have hurt me so much more if you’d stopped. You know that, right? It’s going to hurt anyway. Whether you touch me or stay 500 feet away from me at all times, it’s going to hurt either way. You know that too, don’t you? You have to know that, Al. If I have to be in pain I’d much rather have you touch me and make love to me than treat me like some kind of leper."
"Is that what it was about? You think I’m not attracted to you?" Dana just nodded, almost imperceptibly, and moved her hand in a little ‘sort of’ gesture. "Jesus Christ, Dana. I don’t know how you could ever think that. I keep telling you you’re beautiful…and that means everything about you, you know. Yes, I do think you’re physically beautiful, I always have and I always will no matter what the cancer does to you. But you’re beautiful in so many more ways than that. So I don’t ever want you to think that I don’t want you. That’s fucking ridiculous because I want you so much that half the time I don’t think I can stand it." She stopped and sighed. "No matter how much time I take to myself to try and work that out, it doesn’t change. I don’t think it’s ever going to. I don’t even care anymore, I just feel shitty that I was an asshole and left."
"You weren’t doing it to be an asshole, Alice. I never thought you were."
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Aww no way was that boring! I never want your parts to end and they’re pretty long anyway. Brilliant again, please post soon we need to know what the test results are and the return of Lara should be interesting. :)
Another great update, sorry about the name mix up I get very easily confused . Still loving the story and can’t wait till Alice gets out the guitar to play for Dana. PPS
You are way to hard on yourself, there was nothing blah about this. Keep it coming girl. PPS.
Ya see, true love is never boring…its life! Thats what IC failed to realise and she never understood that it would have been amazing to watch Danish like this on the show. Thank you so much MT for giving us the real deal!
Yeah I’m agreeing with this lot, this can in no way be considered boring! And you will always have my continued support on your writing because I think it’s fuckin’ awesome :) Glad to see I now have another thing in common with the Alice in your story, not only am I blonde, bisexual and outspoken, I’m off to study sociology at the end of this year, yes I kid you not lol, it’s kinda alarming! Anyway, keep this up, you have plenty of support, fans and appreciation for posting. xx
Brilliant…as always. You should be a writer for the L Word lol WAY better than IC and the others! x
That was a great update. Alice and Dana are just too cute together
Yay! Fluffy, happily in love Danish, does my heart good! You delivered just as promised, thank you! This seemed to be the perfect chapter to pull them back into some normalcy for a few days. Now the next chapter could prove to be very interesting with Lara’s return. I’m ready for it, I just hope Alice is as well.. Great Job!
If you believe this was boring, then you don’t know the meaning of the word. It was superb as usual – anxiously awaiting more from you soon.
This was so not boring, it was great! You have really developed thier relationship. This chapter was definately needed. I mean come on, who doesn’t love Danish in love? Thank You…this was nice to wake up to on a Saturday morning! Looking forward to seeing what happens with Lara! PPS
Blah, blah, blah, blah? More like yay, yay, yay, yay…okay, now I’m leaving silly comments, I think De_leish leaving a serious comment last chapter has left me to pick up the fun comment slack. Anyway, did you really use the word “boring” to describe this chapter? I hardly think it’s possible for your writing to ever be boring. More like enthralling (yay, I haven’t run out of adjectives yet). I like that they’re finally making some progress with Alice’s insecurities and Dana’s emotional retardedness. I’m hoping the Dr’s appt is better than they anticipate and I can’t wait to see how the whole Lara thing turns out. Oh, and I too can never get enough Seinfeld. Just out of curiousity, when is Alice gonna be watching the ep where Jerry puts the Tweety Bird Pez Dispenser on Elaine’s leg? That and the “Spare a Square” episode are my all-time faves (can you tell I love Elaine?) Anyway, wonderful job my dear. Your writing really is inspiring.
Ok, seriously: How on earth could be any fanfiction story, based on Danish, let alone a whole part focus on “just” them be considered “blah blah boring”?You could simply just describe a day in their lifes, where they are “only” hanging out all day at home, doing normal stuff like watching tv, talking, cuddling, making out, talk some more, have dinner, tickle each other to tears, play cards…whatever…and it would still be a perfect story. Just simply because it’s about danish. You get what I’m trying to say? ;) Keep up your good work. Loved it.